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Traveling in anime worlds as Crimson Abyss

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作者: Yuri_lover12

4.45 (19 レビュー結果)

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Summary:
A young man happen to be step into portal that appear out of nowhere and meet God. The God is bored so he wanted to send someone to another world and recently he also happened to be watch some yuri anime and wanted to send a woman. But the young man is appear from the random portal that he set. So, the god changed his gender to a woman without letting him known.
Now, the young man become the young girl that his favorite game character. As an apologies the god give her traveling system to anime worlds. Will she going to get all the anime girls as she please?

[Note]
- English is not my first language.
- This novel is the first novel that I write. So, don’t be excepting to be amazingly good. I'm writing this for fun.
- I will try my best to write it. So please have some mercy in comments.
- I would be grateful if you guys give me some advices.
- I will try to release at least 1 chapters/week.
- Word counts are 1000 or more/chapter.
- No NTR, No Rape even before MC met with her lovers. MC will get girls easily. Sometime there will be super fast affection. (Saeko will be fastest one to get)
- R18 chapters will mark with ‘R’ you can skip them if you want as they will be the whole chapter.

Tag: Gender bend, Yuri, Action, Adventure, Fan-fiction, Anime, harem, Futa(with magic), R-18, World Traveling, incest,

[Worlds]
- High school of the dead
- Nier Automata
- Cross Ange

- (undecided yet)

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Dawn_Nexus

I like that how smooth was the starting and how it went in flow with the other character. I'll slap this with my 5 Stars!!.

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Yuri_lover12

I don't see any fan-fiction of alpha. so was trying to write one. I will try to make the novel good but don't be excepted to good In just few chapters as I said I'm new to writing. I will get better as write (probably) 😅

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Spelloyal

It's an interesting fic that I recommend reading, but it has its problems. The writing could be better and the affection system ruins what little romance this fic has. It would be better to simply remove this system or replace it with one that shows the waifu's emotional state (basically make the MC an empath for waifus). The biggest problem with this fic is that the first world is highschool of the dead and the author is really trying hard to create a plot and eventually conclude the story of this world, the problem with this is that it was never an Anime about plot but about breasts, so complicating things too much and taking too long in this world ends up making the arc boring.

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Rakshahsa

Review Update Previous rating 3* now 4,4 as of chapter 15 the author it making his sentences clearer to the point and overall fixed the previous problems i have seen before. to get the 5 starts from me just need to get more chapters with the quality good job i have seen major improvments already from the first chapter

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Please post more chapters, maybe just 2 or even 3 chapters a week pretty please

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Zaychic

I really like this fan fiction, well-developed characters and worlds on, I've already read it 4 times and it still doesn't bother me, I can read it a few more times and it still won't bother. It was nice to find such a wonderful job, I hope you will not abandon it and continue to please your readers p.s . I am looking forward to a new chapter :) (English is not my native language, I apologize for mistakes )

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USS_NEW_JERSEY

ok i love this and it fun keep up the good work and if you wanna continue why not use the world like overlord RWBY arknights etc (just an idea no need to take it this story is yours)

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The_Dark_Hydrax

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Kirito_Kirigaia

This fan fiction hitting differently. I mean the author going to Cross Ange he going to those underrated animes and worlds he knows what he doing so get your *ss in the fanfic cause it's gonna be the best. Madara guarantees it.

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death_slayer

honestly, I have not seen meny other stories with the main character as a punishing Gray Raven character. I really love this story, and I hope you continue doing this

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Dao_of_Melancholy

Good start I can see it has greatly been improving over time so I have decent hopes for this one keep up the good work with this and alpha is a good basis for an MC BTW

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kurotsuki007

I have this book a good try before I dropped it. I finished one full arc “world” but I don’t see myself reading further. The mc can get lovers literally by existing, there is no build up of a connection just “hi I’m mc and you are my lover now”. It might be a bit more than that but it rarely takes more than a a chapter for a harem member to join the harem. Then there are the 18+ scenes. They are very lackluster and can be summed up as “*pant * *pant * *pant * *slurp**slurp**slurp * “Oh yes ~ MC I’m coming””. There is very little variation to the scenes and they are very vanilla for a gender bender yuri. They story itself isn’t anything new, but it doesn’t need to be. We read cliche system novels for a reason.

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ShadowFlux1909

The grammar is atrocious, the story is sub-par.The Mc is supposed to be a yuri, but Author is so helbent on giving the Mc a pee pee, that he made Mc a hermaphrodite.The story is meh kinda hard to get into because every sentence eats 3 braincells at a time.Oh and first day in new world Mc got an Op 1 shot sword and has an op 1 shot ability(locked) also on day one.Some of the interactions seem super forced, like the first "bandit" group mc meets, made even worse by the horrible grammar.

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Chapter 66: Announcement! 10 months ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    Chapter 1 The Beginning 1 years ago
  2. 2
    Chapter 2 Shocking appearance! 1 years ago
  3. 3
    Chapter 3 Shop system and VIP package 1 years ago
  4. 4
    Chapter 4 First time killing 1 years ago
  5. 5
    Chapter 5 Traveling to the first world 1 years ago
  6. 6
    Chapter 6 High School of the dead 1 years ago
  7. 7
    Chpater 7 Killing rapist gang 1 years ago
  8. 8
    Chapter 8 Meeting with Takashi and Rei 1 years ago
  9. 9
    Chapter 9 Gas station 1 years ago
  10. 10
    Chapter 10 Broken world 1 years ago
  11. 11
    Chapter 11 First Mission Complete 1 years ago
  12. 12
    Chapter 12 Bathing time!! 1 years ago
  13. 13
    Announcement !! 1 years ago
  14. 14
    Chapter 13 Hidden missions and getting first lover!! 1 years ago
  15. 15
    Chapter 14 Painful memories 1 years ago
  16. 16
    Chapter 15 Plots became to stray 1 years ago
  17. 17
    Chapter 16 Takagi Estate, meeting with Yuriko 1 years ago
  18. 18
    Chapter 17 The beginning of apocalypse 1 years ago
  19. 19
    Chapter 18 Threesome in first time?! 'R' 1 years ago
  20. 20
    Chapter 19 Massive coins gain and preparing for zombie wave 1 years ago
  21. 21
    Chapter 20 Here comes the New challenger!! XD   1 years ago
  22. 22
    Announcement 1 years ago
  23. 23
    Chapter 21 Yuriko’s past and Start of Zombie wave 1 years ago
  24. 24
    Chapter 22 Ending of zombie wave and unexpected meeting 1 years ago
  25. 25
    Chapter 23 Battle of two Lucia!!   1 years ago
  26. 26
    Chapter 24 Flying Fortress as home base!   1 years ago
  27. 27
    Chapter 25 Meeting with Rika and adding in the harem 1 years ago
  28. 28
    Chapter 26 Oyakodon and Taking Rika under Gazebo! (R) 1 years ago
  29. 29
    Chapter 27 Time skips and meeting Esdeath 1 years ago
  30. 30
    Chapter 28 Battle between leader zombies and Esdeath! 1 years ago
  31. 31
    Chapter 29 Adding Esdeath into Harem and The end of HOTD 1 years ago
  32. 32
    Announcement! 1 years ago
  33. 33
    Chapter 30  Wedding and Night with beauties (Half-R) 1 years ago
  34. 34
    Chapter 31 Nier: automata, Meeting with No.2 and her team! 1 years ago
  35. 35
    Chapter 32 Suddenly become a mother?! And Council of Humanity 1 years ago
  36. 36
    Chapter 33 Forest kingdom and Meeting White in YoRHa Base 1 years ago
  37. 37
    Chapter 34 Comforting White and Rika Corrupting Android girls 1 years ago
  38. 38
    Chapter 35 The world’s situation and Battle at Resistance camp 1 years ago
  39. 39
    Chapter 36 Meeting with Popola and Devola, and 9S Appear 1 years ago
  40. 40
    Chapter 37 Moving Babylon to Nier world, First battle of 22B and 8B  1 years ago
  41. 41
    Chapter 38 Plans to take over YoRHa and Adding Android girls to harem 1 years ago
  42. 42
    Chapter 39 Taking over YoRHa and the beginning of 14th machine war 1 years ago
  43. 43
    Chapter 40 Battle at Ruined City and Meeting with 2B 1 years ago
  44. 44
    Chapter 41 Battle at Factory, Adam and Eve 1 years ago
  45. 45
    Chapter 42 Battle on the Sea 1 years ago
  46. 46
    Chapter 43 Planning to take down Red Girls and Machine life forms 1 years ago
  47. 47
    Chapter 44 Underground Machine server and Dark Forest 1 years ago
  48. 48
    Chapter 45 Python inside the Strange Temple and cute Lucia 1 years ago
  49. 49
    Chapter 46 Fight with Adam 1 years ago
  50. 50
    Chapter 47 The end of Red girls and leaving the world 1 years ago
  51. 51
    Chapter 48 System upgrade And other side of space tunnel (Cross Ange World)) 1 years ago
  52. 52
    Chapter 49 Having fun in dark forest and eating androids (R)   1 years ago
  53. 53
    Chapter 50 World of Cross Ange and Meeting with Salamandine 1 years ago
  54. 54
    Chapter 51 Talk with Salamandinay and Ange’s arrogant 1 years ago
  55. 55
    Chapter 52 New home and Hilda’s revenge   1 years ago
  56. 56
    Chapter 53 Meeting Tusk and Ange 1 years ago
  57. 57
    Chapter 54 Ange’s changes and heading to Arzenal 12 months ago
  58. 58
    Chapter 55 Talk with Commander Jill and her past 11 months ago
  59. 59
    Chapter 56 Staying at Arzenal and Momoka’s arriaval 11 months ago
  60. 60
    Announcement 11 months ago
  61. 61
    Chapter 57 Festival and Hilda's past 11 months ago
  62. 62
    Chapter 58 Escapse from Arzenal and parting (?) with Hilda 11 months ago
  63. 63
    Chapter 59 Hilda's despair, True faces of Ange's brother and sister 11 months ago
  64. 64
    Chapter 60 In coming storm and Shocking secret of Embryo 10 months ago
  65. 65
    Chapter 61 Begin of Libertus and Shocked Ange 10 months ago
  66. 66
    Announcement! 10 months ago
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