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woah what have we here another awesome novel just don't drop like other authors plz (and thx for inc*st hehehehe😁)
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i love this story with an op mc, can be more better but overall op and I know author will make the mc more op as the story goes on
why must pay....first i love this, before this story pay...but now I don't like any more....
Don’t hate me author! Your book is great 👍. But all the chapters ar short!😭🫠you can customize his pp. so why don’t you make the chapter long 😭🥲 i just want to read more
I absolutely love your book; (if you can) please spread the love by checking out my book named Nexus: I Can't Make Portals?! by Xolu.
This is my first novel so sorry for the poor writing I will try to improve it as much as possible I am trying to give the world a proper background by answering my mc's question on his journey not by his system the real world and character development will start from when he goes to the mortal world to conquer it
woah what have we here another awesome novel just don't drop like other authors plz (and thx for inc*st hehehehe😁)
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ネタバレを明かす i love this story with an op mc, can be more better but overall op and I know author will make the mc more op as the story goes on
why must pay....first i love this, before this story pay...but now I don't like any more....
Don’t hate me author! Your book is great 👍. But all the chapters ar short!😭🫠you can customize his pp. so why don’t you make the chapter long 😭🥲 i just want to read more
I absolutely love your book; (if you can) please spread the love by checking out my book named Nexus: I Can't Make Portals?! by Xolu.
This is my first novel so sorry for the poor writing I will try to improve it as much as possible I am trying to give the world a proper background by answering my mc's question on his journey not by his system the real world and character development will start from when he goes to the mortal world to conquer it
moreee!!! me want more, me want more, me want more