it's just my humble opinion. There isn't anything wrong with your writing style. it's just that having to read his name after every two or three sentences breaks up the flow and annoyes the hell outta me. And besides it's not like there is any other person around him. Also PLS include his thoughts as well ✌️
What if one of these trees fall on me? Prince curled up into a ball, attempting to protect his head with his hands. Prince closed his eyes.
Strongest In the Apocalypse
Fantasy · TheOneWho_Asked
PLS stop using his name in every sentence 🙏
What if one of these trees fall on me? Prince curled up into a ball, attempting to protect his head with his hands. Prince closed his eyes.
Strongest In the Apocalypse
Fantasy · TheOneWho_Asked
didn't turn white a few chapters back
He was fascinated by the scenery in front of him because Rongmei's red hair was strikingly matched to her slutty self.
Heaven defying villain:despair broke chosen ones
Fantasy · Melon_daomaster_9
Bro I Think there is a few paragraphs missing here🤔😐😐😔
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??
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Shouldn't his ten fold system work on resource types buildings??
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pls write it bro.😃😃
Huh... Now that I'm not deathly afraid of her petty retaliation, she looks kinda hot when she's angry.
Dragon Ball: Back in Black
Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
Shouldn't his ten fold system work on resource buildings too??
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Bro pls stop writing this kind of paragraph we can do the math on our own
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original My omniversal ruler system
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This is my first novel, so in the beginning, I made a lot of mistakes but from the second volume, it gets better I promise. Roy Cooper is a ordinary boy with high ambition. After his death he got the omniversal ruler system . With it's help he sat on a journey to become the ruler of the omniverse. But everything doesn't go well for him . He has to face the all powerful Omni destroyer who killed the previous Omni ruler if he wants to save his omniverse. Join his journey on his way to become a omniversal emperor. The story has incest and ntr (where the mc steals the girls) You have been warned English is not my first language so don't expect a prefect writing. The cover picture is not mine . If the artist wants to remove it please let me know.I will remove it. 150 power stone 2 extra chapter 1 car = 1 extra chapter 1 dragon = 2 extra chapters 1 castle = 4 extra chapters Guys this is my discord link come and join the epic discussion as we follow Roy's journey https://discord.gg/Ku4rWbUz74 Chs 2.9k お気に入り
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Dragon ball, My empire system.
Roy is a ordinary office worker. One day when working overtime in his office alone ,he died due to heart attack. But it wasn't the end for him as god gives him an another chance to live. Join Roy's journey as he becomes the strongest in the dragon ball universe I am writing this just for fun and experience So don't expect daily updates2 Chs 101 お気に入り
where is it 🙃
{A/N :- her illustration ---> }
OMNIPOTENT SECT MASTER : SUPREME RULER OF EXISTENCE
Fantasy · Damokles_seleucus