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Fantastic and interesting novel. The story and the writing quality is so fantastic as it never bores me, I really like how the pace of the story is going. Good work!
this is an amazing novel. cqnnot believe this is ur first novel. u did a great job! keep going ur awesome work. cannot wait for more from you.
Early review!I was surprised at how much I got into this book. The world was rich and complex, yet still easy to follow. The writing style was engaging, and the characters were well developed. The plot was intricate and never became confusing, even though there were so many twists and turns. I would highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy with a touch of mystery. It's a great read for anyone who loves a well-written story with plenty of action and suspense💪😄
The writing is decent and plot is quite interesting. However, I think most of the chapter are quite too short. I think the appropriate amount would not less than 1000 word per chapter, but it still depend on your judgment. the pacing is also quite fast and everything happen so quick. The introduction on system and world building might be quite abrupt for me. Overall, this work is still a good solid book and I hope you continue writing it!
Firstly I'd love to start with the synopsis like I usually do as the synopsis is one that determines if your book gets readers or not and if your book is going to survived.the length of the synopsis I perfect but the quality is poor sorry to say.I'd prefer you make it more suspending to arise readers curiosity about the main character that literally listingt out what happened to the main character or what's going to happenthe novel is a nice one and has strong potentials and I urge our author to please develop more ^_^
Fantastic and interesting novel. The story and the writing quality is so fantastic as it never bores me, I really like how the pace of the story is going. Good work!
this is an amazing novel. cqnnot believe this is ur first novel. u did a great job! keep going ur awesome work. cannot wait for more from you.
Early review!I was surprised at how much I got into this book. The world was rich and complex, yet still easy to follow. The writing style was engaging, and the characters were well developed. The plot was intricate and never became confusing, even though there were so many twists and turns. I would highly recommend this book to anyone who enjoys fantasy with a touch of mystery. It's a great read for anyone who loves a well-written story with plenty of action and suspense💪😄
The writing is decent and plot is quite interesting. However, I think most of the chapter are quite too short. I think the appropriate amount would not less than 1000 word per chapter, but it still depend on your judgment. the pacing is also quite fast and everything happen so quick. The introduction on system and world building might be quite abrupt for me. Overall, this work is still a good solid book and I hope you continue writing it!
Firstly I'd love to start with the synopsis like I usually do as the synopsis is one that determines if your book gets readers or not and if your book is going to survived.the length of the synopsis I perfect but the quality is poor sorry to say.I'd prefer you make it more suspending to arise readers curiosity about the main character that literally listingt out what happened to the main character or what's going to happenthe novel is a nice one and has strong potentials and I urge our author to please develop more ^_^