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Star Wars fan reincarnated as a youngling in the jedi order just before the battle of naboo
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What's a template but another type of system? The story has spelling errors and grammatical mistakes, reads like a diary sometimes a play script other times.Characters seem 2D and mc has no logical thought process. No read.
I have read other star wars fanfiction but they always made there character op they never had something profound and meaning full and grounded to try a new way we see stars wars fanfiction that not always they have to make the character overpowered. So now I will be a fan of this fanfiction and I hope others have will love this to.
Reads like the author is just writing down a bunch of things that happen with no way to connect them or even give anything more than the most basic details. The premise is good but it feels like the title of the story is a bit of a lie. There is indeed no system however he gets some cheats and gifts. While I won’t go too much into the state of the grammar since mine isn’t the best, I will say that it speaks volumes that almost every other paragraph has a comment correcting something. Overall I’d say it might be worth reading if you have absolutely nothing else to read. I’m going to continue for as long as I can at the very least and just hope it gets better.
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Needs a lot of work. Grammar is barely acceptable, author says no system but gives his character wishes, story is confusing because it’s written like bland statements every sentence, and author doesn’t try to explain anything, things just happen and then mc moves on to the next thing. All characters are just bland npcs, robots
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Enjoyable read although grammatical errors are present I enjoy the premise of the story
Im enjoying this story, it is different from most reincarnation story's, and Im enjoying it and its good to see different idea's and this is one im enjoying. Updates could be more frequent but life gets in the way and stuff.
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this reads like a diary, not a story, and a poorly written one at that with frequent grammatical errors, and btw the title is clickbait, while he indeed doesn't get a system he gets to choose a template at the start to assimilate and 3 teachers from the multiverse to teach him about stuff, so yeah, do with that what you will, I don't understand how many people gave this 5 stars, I mean it's not necessarily terrible but it's far from great,