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is this ff still going author ? It very good and i hope you still continuing this
bro is genuinely writing a great book and i recommend you read 😅😅 author definitely deserves these 5 stars
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I am only going to quite this. "I am a barbie wyrm. In a barbie du~n~geon. Life in magic... Its fantastic! You can wash my hide, but her me~on the side~! Anahilation, death is your salvation!"
After reading chapter 1 I can proudly say this is peak fiction pls don’t stop dropping us these glorious chapters 😭
Hey that looks like the dragon version of the scarlet king by the way great novel
I am going to give this novel a five star because your novel has the same profile pic as mine 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😎🥶 but seriously I do love your novel though.🙂
There are words that the audiobook function doesn’t work on and I got very confused for a while, but it’s a fine story but will be droping anyways, sorry.
it is pretty good fic considering that kumo desu is very hard to create a fan fic. but I am missing that kumo desu experience. confusion is part of kumo desu. but I would like to see this fic focus more on the perspective of ocmc and mc minimizing the focus on characters that originally used for character development of the spider.
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Wyrm x spider = CHAOSSS I like that combination. I mean, our MC can be super op more or less than Shiraori (spider). So if our MC and Shiraori become a party, it will be CHAOSSS
I just wanna said, it's a good and wonderful ffnovel. Author you have a good work to make this ffnovel. So .. DON'T DROPPED IT PLEASEEEE🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🫂
Exemplary ff but sometimes he gets stronger without explanation and it gets somewhat confusing
This fanfic is well written if I say so myself, it's just that some readers can't handle different changing POV's... So I would suggest for you guys to either read another author's work or stop leaving negative reviews in this fanfic... Just my opinion though, peace!
no he is not a dragon but a shrimp theres a huge difference between a dragon and a shrimp
This review is made to balance several BAD reviews, but anyway. I like your idea, i will read your fanfic in future when it had more chapters most-likely. Currently i was at 5th chapter. Anyway, don't get demotivated by bad reviews.
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The point that bothered me the most about this novel is that it does not indicate the character's pov and I get lost and the translator used it because in Spanish it has a greater tolerance for writing errors. And I still get lost just hold on until chapter 10 . I liked the idea but I can't read it at ease. Good luck
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i am currently on chapter 9 but so far it seems to follow the style as the anime with the splicing of events between pat and future in which i sincerely hope that it becomes more focused in future chapters and quits with constant pov changes
the MC is to boring, stupid and weak this fanfic will not last long because the Author has a stupid character that true there many like this and the really don't last long
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Good good,everything is perfect.. this is what i had been waiting for! YES! Yes! Yes
this is peak, i really like the story so far i hope it will continue to get better and better.
I have a theory Spoiler alert.... in the first phase of the novel he has some crazy potential because of his skills and title and he got it so quite easily it's probably because of wakaba he confess to wakaba the real wakaba also known as d the evil god so wakaba probably felt it amusing so she's given him some op abilities that's all I guess the novel so far is good not really super fast paced and and so far I like it I hope this continues 🙏🙏🙏
Kinda good, nothing happened yet to the plot, inconsistent updates, short chapters. ...........................................................................
✨Review After 10 chapters✨ ⭐️Writing Quality⭐️ [4 STARS] The writing quality certainly is good but it can’t be perfect, so I pretty much always give a 4 star in all stories I make a review on. Anyway, it isn't unreadable, as it’s actually pretty good, though you might have confused some less endowed readers (not me though) when you changed the POV without mentioning it but I saw that you already fixed that so yeah…, you will get better the more you write after all 👀 👍 👏 ⭐️Updating Stability⭐️ [4 STARS] You’ve been updating regularly but like it has been the case in this week, it could happen that you can’t upload due to some problem. So it’s 4 stars in the present time and will stay like that for the future as well. ⭐️Story Development⭐️ [5 STARS] I honestly like where the story is currently heading, as the character development seems steady while the struggle the mc faces is realistic, considering the strata he is in with his undeveloped strength. Besides that he got some pretty OP skills/Titel that pretty much guarantees that he will turn out to be a being of reality breaking proportions. 🗿 (an abomination) ⭐️Character Design⭐️ [4 STARS] Personally I’d give you 5 stars if I was nice but as I stay neutral, I will just say that your mc is certainly entertaining, EVEN if he got a bit of a screw loose, it still doesn’t mean he matches my own preferences 100% the same way it does or doesn’t for others as well. Besides that I have to admit that your character design is well made, so don't let complaints of imposters🥸demotivate you.🫠 ⭐️World Background⭐️ [5 STARS] To be honest, as this is a fanfic, the world background was already made by the original creator BUT considering on how well you presented it and the knowledge you showed off, I can certainly say you will do pretty well in this regard without any major problems, since most other Authors are good at this as well which you are too.🫨 (though, there are always exceptions as you know…) ⚡️Summary⚡️ Overall, this novel seems to have a lot of potential, with an Author that shows in-depth knowledge of the original work he made a fanfic off. Besides that we got a MC with his fair share of problems and character development, OP skills with the potential to become a being of reality breaking proportions he was always meant to be, as well as a fair share of struggles at the beginning, that he faces with his undeveloped strength in an environment that can easily erase him. Humans are prone to make mistakes, so forgive the Curious Goose Author if he makes a mistake twice since if he does it thrice, then you can make food with heavenly goose 🪿meat 🍖 and rice 🍚. 🥹 👻Personal Note👻 This review was written long ago but always got shadow banned by Webnovel, because of the word "ØPPØẞĪTÉ" that I used in this review previously. 💀 I hope this novel gets popular considering just its sheer potential. Either way, good luck 🍀 👍 ✨4,4 Overall Stars✨
is this ff still going author ? It very good and i hope you still continuing this
bro is genuinely writing a great book and i recommend you read 😅😅 author definitely deserves these 5 stars
ネタバレを明かす I am only going to quite this. "I am a barbie wyrm. In a barbie du~n~geon. Life in magic... Its fantastic! You can wash my hide, but her me~on the side~! Anahilation, death is your salvation!"
After reading chapter 1 I can proudly say this is peak fiction pls don’t stop dropping us these glorious chapters 😭
Hey that looks like the dragon version of the scarlet king by the way great novel
I am going to give this novel a five star because your novel has the same profile pic as mine 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😎🥶 but seriously I do love your novel though.🙂
There are words that the audiobook function doesn’t work on and I got very confused for a while, but it’s a fine story but will be droping anyways, sorry.
it is pretty good fic considering that kumo desu is very hard to create a fan fic. but I am missing that kumo desu experience. confusion is part of kumo desu. but I would like to see this fic focus more on the perspective of ocmc and mc minimizing the focus on characters that originally used for character development of the spider.
ネタバレを明かす Wyrm x spider = CHAOSSS I like that combination. I mean, our MC can be super op more or less than Shiraori (spider). So if our MC and Shiraori become a party, it will be CHAOSSS
I just wanna said, it's a good and wonderful ffnovel. Author you have a good work to make this ffnovel. So .. DON'T DROPPED IT PLEASEEEE🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🫂
Exemplary ff but sometimes he gets stronger without explanation and it gets somewhat confusing
This fanfic is well written if I say so myself, it's just that some readers can't handle different changing POV's... So I would suggest for you guys to either read another author's work or stop leaving negative reviews in this fanfic... Just my opinion though, peace!
no he is not a dragon but a shrimp theres a huge difference between a dragon and a shrimp
This review is made to balance several BAD reviews, but anyway. I like your idea, i will read your fanfic in future when it had more chapters most-likely. Currently i was at 5th chapter. Anyway, don't get demotivated by bad reviews.
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The point that bothered me the most about this novel is that it does not indicate the character's pov and I get lost and the translator used it because in Spanish it has a greater tolerance for writing errors. And I still get lost just hold on until chapter 10 . I liked the idea but I can't read it at ease. Good luck
ネタバレを明かす i am currently on chapter 9 but so far it seems to follow the style as the anime with the splicing of events between pat and future in which i sincerely hope that it becomes more focused in future chapters and quits with constant pov changes
the MC is to boring, stupid and weak this fanfic will not last long because the Author has a stupid character that true there many like this and the really don't last long
ネタバレを明かす Good good,everything is perfect.. this is what i had been waiting for! YES! Yes! Yes
this is peak, i really like the story so far i hope it will continue to get better and better.
I have a theory Spoiler alert.... in the first phase of the novel he has some crazy potential because of his skills and title and he got it so quite easily it's probably because of wakaba he confess to wakaba the real wakaba also known as d the evil god so wakaba probably felt it amusing so she's given him some op abilities that's all I guess the novel so far is good not really super fast paced and and so far I like it I hope this continues 🙏🙏🙏
Kinda good, nothing happened yet to the plot, inconsistent updates, short chapters. ...........................................................................
✨Review After 10 chapters✨ ⭐️Writing Quality⭐️ [4 STARS] The writing quality certainly is good but it can’t be perfect, so I pretty much always give a 4 star in all stories I make a review on. Anyway, it isn't unreadable, as it’s actually pretty good, though you might have confused some less endowed readers (not me though) when you changed the POV without mentioning it but I saw that you already fixed that so yeah…, you will get better the more you write after all 👀 👍 👏 ⭐️Updating Stability⭐️ [4 STARS] You’ve been updating regularly but like it has been the case in this week, it could happen that you can’t upload due to some problem. So it’s 4 stars in the present time and will stay like that for the future as well. ⭐️Story Development⭐️ [5 STARS] I honestly like where the story is currently heading, as the character development seems steady while the struggle the mc faces is realistic, considering the strata he is in with his undeveloped strength. Besides that he got some pretty OP skills/Titel that pretty much guarantees that he will turn out to be a being of reality breaking proportions. 🗿 (an abomination) ⭐️Character Design⭐️ [4 STARS] Personally I’d give you 5 stars if I was nice but as I stay neutral, I will just say that your mc is certainly entertaining, EVEN if he got a bit of a screw loose, it still doesn’t mean he matches my own preferences 100% the same way it does or doesn’t for others as well. Besides that I have to admit that your character design is well made, so don't let complaints of imposters🥸demotivate you.🫠 ⭐️World Background⭐️ [5 STARS] To be honest, as this is a fanfic, the world background was already made by the original creator BUT considering on how well you presented it and the knowledge you showed off, I can certainly say you will do pretty well in this regard without any major problems, since most other Authors are good at this as well which you are too.🫨 (though, there are always exceptions as you know…) ⚡️Summary⚡️ Overall, this novel seems to have a lot of potential, with an Author that shows in-depth knowledge of the original work he made a fanfic off. Besides that we got a MC with his fair share of problems and character development, OP skills with the potential to become a being of reality breaking proportions he was always meant to be, as well as a fair share of struggles at the beginning, that he faces with his undeveloped strength in an environment that can easily erase him. Humans are prone to make mistakes, so forgive the Curious Goose Author if he makes a mistake twice since if he does it thrice, then you can make food with heavenly goose 🪿meat 🍖 and rice 🍚. 🥹 👻Personal Note👻 This review was written long ago but always got shadow banned by Webnovel, because of the word "ØPPØẞĪTÉ" that I used in this review previously. 💀 I hope this novel gets popular considering just its sheer potential. Either way, good luck 🍀 👍 ✨4,4 Overall Stars✨