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GloriousMilfHunter

Well, most bleach fics are dropped, so I decided to write my own. The story is set 50+ years before the main story of Bleach. Also Nel is best girl :3

1yr
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NPSC2377

I have been following your work for a long time. Therefore, I would like to translate your work into the language of my country. If you have permission, please reply.

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Urban1st

quite a good read, not without its flaws - but 8/10 is definitely ok. I can point out the Unohana line - it's quite tense and very dry... I don't know how to describe it... and everything else is quite lively and good. good luck with writing more chapters and thanks for the fanfic

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Arcane_Milf_Poker

greatest bleach fic that I have seen.[img=update]

1mth
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IamLegend_X_1093

Nice read. I like the character development, although it wasn't that good at the beginning, but in the later chs, author took care of it. Keep up the good work.

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Cody_Mohr

the story is wonderful unfortunately the only issue I have is that his Spirit sword was devoured by his hollow side other than that after I continue after that chapter I still look forward to where it goes⚔️

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Sool_King

I highly recommend it The events are parallel and may be flawed a little by the lack of action, serious life-threatening fights, the writer says that they are coming, but I do not see them and I do not expect them to come in the first place

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Young_Mellow_Yami

Another piece of art the author has blessed us with

3mth
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Lyle_Herbst

Why is this not on the rankings? I don't know. It's a good story with a nice pace, and the fight scenes are written pretty well, and I like the romance parts. Most forget to do a nice romance and sno sno

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D_Sans

Amazing story, one of the more entertaining and indulging Bleach fanfics ever. Love the MC, hope he grows to be a god fr (and smash Unohana eventually :> )

4mth
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pEmKayS
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This is a really good fanfic. The characters are alive and the events are not forced. I recommend reading it!

5mth
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Shahar_1107

its amazing novel i almost love it more then the series its too good the best novel i ever read the only reason I didn't give it 5 stars it's because it's doesn't update fast enough for me

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YoDarki

bueno pero en un punto se vuelve predecible y denso

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Mikey_3214

Love the pacing pretty Interesting he just doesn’t make girls fall in love out of where the relationships and bonds are built over time which then comes lemons which are peak 😗grammar is good so need for your brain cells to be fried even 2 seconds ( welcome back my man you have been missed )

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Vitor2510

To be honest, the story falls in nearly the same mistakes as Bleach. MC is ridiculously strong, so he uses very few techniques. It is a harem story with a slightly aloof character (he gets involved with his girls, but not that deeply). The world background is quite soid, but that's all

9mth
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Bluedragon241593

es una buena historia y entretenida espero que saques más capítulos pronto ya que es adictiva

11mth
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reyesreyj

Primer fan de blech que leo pero está entretenido 8/10 ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr
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CreationGODBlack

Simply a peak story,, don't ever stop writing 🙏🏾

1yr
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CreationGODBlack

AUTHOR,,,,,Thank you 🥹🥲 mere words can't express how much I love this work of art you've created please keep up the good work,,, I'm looking forward to reading plenty of more chapters from you

1yr
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Vitor2510

A decent fanfiction of bleach universe. Can wait to see all powers Kazuya will unlock, if he will interact with Ichigo in the future. Or how many women won't falt for him.

1yr
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Ratman27

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Uncle_Drew_0056

Dommage que des erreurs totalement évitable du protagoniste soit utilisé pour créer des situation compliquée, c’est une facilité de scénario de rendre des personnages momentanément moins réfléchies

1yr
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Dick_Wizard

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1yr
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Lenny_Valencia

Esta buena Jdkshdikdjkdkzjdjixbskxhw9wje xljscskdobehfodbzkcbdozidvwokxudos va eokzveoqhdyqojsox fbidjeieveojeu [img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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_Khaled_

I have read up until chapter 104, For me the story is good but I have some notes. 1- Lack of fights, The Mc spawns already powerful but he doesn't get into serious fights that often ( The only serious fight is with barragan) but I kinda understand this since with his power it's hard to find powerful opponent until he waits for the canon to start ( he's born 50 years before canon) 2-His harem, His harem is actually well wrote and have actual developments but from what I see his women serve no purpose to that story other than being a romantic interest or for funny moments ( Apart from the shark lady they are all fodders and follow MC'S desicions) 3-Slow pace which isn't a huge problem but 99% of the chapters are about his harem without any developments of the story outside it. 4- His myestries , A lot of things about the MC are left unexplained, like his system or his zanbakuto which is good but with 100 chapters down the line without any explaination is not a good thing in my opinion. The only thing that will make the story better in my opinion is to lessen the attention on the women outside or inside his harem, And focus on the MC, like his plans or strength or the development in general and explain his power and their nature and have him engage in actual fights. With the pace we are going with I'd say canon will start in chapter 200

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DaoistO1rqWy

Tiene todo lo que busco en una novela, además de las posibilidades de desarrollo del MC que me atraen bastante. Un nuevo punto de vista para aventurarse en el mundo de Bleach. 5/5

1yr
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TheFluffyWhiteFox

HEY AUTHOR , I AM ASKING TO UPLOAD NEW CHAPTERS IN " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY " OR IF YOUR'RE NOT WANT TO CONTINUE JUST FINISH IT IN 10 - 15 CHAPTERS MORE SO IT HAS AN ENDING OR YOU WILL DO CONTINUE THE NOVEL" A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY " IN FUTURE.YOUR'RE ALREADY DOING ANOTHER NOVEL, SO JUST FINISH THE NOVEL " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY" SO WE WILL GET SOME PIECE AND ENTERTAINMENT .

1yr
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Qwerty1837

Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

1yr
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NyxOuroboros

Well... if only he had kept his Hollow form, then I would stay, sadly he didn't, so it's a pleasure to have followed this but I'm leaving now. PS: I would have put the title [Limited time slot xd]

1yr
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TheFluffyWhiteFox

I like this fic and am eager for more but Author you are not release any new chapters and still havent't done any update regarding your work " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY".I HOPE YOU DON'T DROP THE BOOK AND STILL CONTINUE AND PROVIDE REGULAR UPDATE OF CHAPTERS.I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO RELEASE OF NEW CHAPTERS.MAYBE YOU SHOULD RELEASE 14 CHS A WEEK.😋😋😋😋

1yr
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Daoist3tDTa4

this is an amazing and wonderful story pls continue

1yr
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GloriousMilfHunter

Well, most bleach fics are dropped, so I decided to write my own. The story is set 50+ years before the main story of Bleach. Also Nel is best girl :3

1yr
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NPSC2377

I have been following your work for a long time. Therefore, I would like to translate your work into the language of my country. If you have permission, please reply.

2d
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Urban1st

quite a good read, not without its flaws - but 8/10 is definitely ok. I can point out the Unohana line - it's quite tense and very dry... I don't know how to describe it... and everything else is quite lively and good. good luck with writing more chapters and thanks for the fanfic

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27d
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Arcane_Milf_Poker

greatest bleach fic that I have seen.[img=update]

1mth
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IamLegend_X_1093

Nice read. I like the character development, although it wasn't that good at the beginning, but in the later chs, author took care of it. Keep up the good work.

3mth
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Cody_Mohr

the story is wonderful unfortunately the only issue I have is that his Spirit sword was devoured by his hollow side other than that after I continue after that chapter I still look forward to where it goes⚔️

3mth
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Sool_King

I highly recommend it The events are parallel and may be flawed a little by the lack of action, serious life-threatening fights, the writer says that they are coming, but I do not see them and I do not expect them to come in the first place

3mth
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Young_Mellow_Yami

Another piece of art the author has blessed us with

3mth
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Lyle_Herbst

Why is this not on the rankings? I don't know. It's a good story with a nice pace, and the fight scenes are written pretty well, and I like the romance parts. Most forget to do a nice romance and sno sno

4mth
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D_Sans

Amazing story, one of the more entertaining and indulging Bleach fanfics ever. Love the MC, hope he grows to be a god fr (and smash Unohana eventually :> )

4mth
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pEmKayS
LV 11 Badge

This is a really good fanfic. The characters are alive and the events are not forced. I recommend reading it!

5mth
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Shahar_1107

its amazing novel i almost love it more then the series its too good the best novel i ever read the only reason I didn't give it 5 stars it's because it's doesn't update fast enough for me

6mth
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YoDarki

bueno pero en un punto se vuelve predecible y denso

8mth
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Mikey_3214

Love the pacing pretty Interesting he just doesn’t make girls fall in love out of where the relationships and bonds are built over time which then comes lemons which are peak 😗grammar is good so need for your brain cells to be fried even 2 seconds ( welcome back my man you have been missed )

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9mth
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Vitor2510

To be honest, the story falls in nearly the same mistakes as Bleach. MC is ridiculously strong, so he uses very few techniques. It is a harem story with a slightly aloof character (he gets involved with his girls, but not that deeply). The world background is quite soid, but that's all

9mth
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Bluedragon241593

es una buena historia y entretenida espero que saques más capítulos pronto ya que es adictiva

11mth
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reyesreyj

Primer fan de blech que leo pero está entretenido 8/10 ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

1yr
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CreationGODBlack

Simply a peak story,, don't ever stop writing 🙏🏾

1yr
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CreationGODBlack

AUTHOR,,,,,Thank you 🥹🥲 mere words can't express how much I love this work of art you've created please keep up the good work,,, I'm looking forward to reading plenty of more chapters from you

1yr
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Vitor2510

A decent fanfiction of bleach universe. Can wait to see all powers Kazuya will unlock, if he will interact with Ichigo in the future. Or how many women won't falt for him.

1yr
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Ratman27

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1yr
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Uncle_Drew_0056

Dommage que des erreurs totalement évitable du protagoniste soit utilisé pour créer des situation compliquée, c’est une facilité de scénario de rendre des personnages momentanément moins réfléchies

1yr
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Dick_Wizard

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1yr
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Lenny_Valencia

Esta buena Jdkshdikdjkdkzjdjixbskxhw9wje xljscskdobehfodbzkcbdozidvwokxudos va eokzveoqhdyqojsox fbidjeieveojeu [img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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_Khaled_

I have read up until chapter 104, For me the story is good but I have some notes. 1- Lack of fights, The Mc spawns already powerful but he doesn't get into serious fights that often ( The only serious fight is with barragan) but I kinda understand this since with his power it's hard to find powerful opponent until he waits for the canon to start ( he's born 50 years before canon) 2-His harem, His harem is actually well wrote and have actual developments but from what I see his women serve no purpose to that story other than being a romantic interest or for funny moments ( Apart from the shark lady they are all fodders and follow MC'S desicions) 3-Slow pace which isn't a huge problem but 99% of the chapters are about his harem without any developments of the story outside it. 4- His myestries , A lot of things about the MC are left unexplained, like his system or his zanbakuto which is good but with 100 chapters down the line without any explaination is not a good thing in my opinion. The only thing that will make the story better in my opinion is to lessen the attention on the women outside or inside his harem, And focus on the MC, like his plans or strength or the development in general and explain his power and their nature and have him engage in actual fights. With the pace we are going with I'd say canon will start in chapter 200

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DaoistO1rqWy

Tiene todo lo que busco en una novela, además de las posibilidades de desarrollo del MC que me atraen bastante. Un nuevo punto de vista para aventurarse en el mundo de Bleach. 5/5

1yr
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TheFluffyWhiteFox

HEY AUTHOR , I AM ASKING TO UPLOAD NEW CHAPTERS IN " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY " OR IF YOUR'RE NOT WANT TO CONTINUE JUST FINISH IT IN 10 - 15 CHAPTERS MORE SO IT HAS AN ENDING OR YOU WILL DO CONTINUE THE NOVEL" A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY " IN FUTURE.YOUR'RE ALREADY DOING ANOTHER NOVEL, SO JUST FINISH THE NOVEL " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY" SO WE WILL GET SOME PIECE AND ENTERTAINMENT .

1yr
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Qwerty1837

Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

1yr
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NyxOuroboros

Well... if only he had kept his Hollow form, then I would stay, sadly he didn't, so it's a pleasure to have followed this but I'm leaving now. PS: I would have put the title [Limited time slot xd]

1yr
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TheFluffyWhiteFox

I like this fic and am eager for more but Author you are not release any new chapters and still havent't done any update regarding your work " A CLICHÉ MULTIVERSE STORY".I HOPE YOU DON'T DROP THE BOOK AND STILL CONTINUE AND PROVIDE REGULAR UPDATE OF CHAPTERS.I AM LOOKING FORWARD TO RELEASE OF NEW CHAPTERS.MAYBE YOU SHOULD RELEASE 14 CHS A WEEK.😋😋😋😋

1yr
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Daoist3tDTa4

this is an amazing and wonderful story pls continue

1yr
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