Well, I'm going to start trying to upload a chapter every day to see if the support for this fic increases.
DC: BY NIGHT ONE WAY, BY DAY ANOTHER(Young Justice SI-Atlante)(Shazam)
Anime & Comics · Adam007
Well, I got some comments due to the fact that I put both languages in the conversations, so to avoid this from happening again I decided that now I will only write in English and I will make it clear at the beginning of the conversation in which language is really being spoken, so I hope this will improve the reading of the story. Thanks for the constructive criticisms, always welcome as long as they are to improve the story and with good intentions. Anything else you want to let me know I'm looking forward to it.
DC: BY NIGHT ONE WAY, BY DAY ANOTHER(Young Justice SI-Atlante)(Shazam)
Anime & Comics · Adam007
Very good story and a good background. This has some serious potential and the writing is great. Keep up the great work and complete this fanfiction. Highly recommended to those seeing this review.
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With a sinister giggle, 'Sozim' lunged at the man, his stance low, and his fist connecting squarely with the man's chest. There was no fire, only a gruesome burst from the man's back, blood spraying out like a torrent, as if it had been forcibly expelled. A trail of crimson followed the man as his skin seemed to disintegrate.
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"Yes, embrace your rage," Ozai hummed, before addressing Lo and Li, who remained bowing. "Azula, you will accompany Master Lo and Master Li wherever they go. You will once again be their pupil, and you cannot return home until you are capable of defeating that boy."
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"You whine like a child," Sozim shook his head, leaping away from her. "Oh wait, you are a child."
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"We need successors. And she's not ours, she is the prince's." Lo answered. "If you want, we could adopt you as our child. So when we die, the shack belongs to you."
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"Chi blocking," Li answered. "It's the only way for us non-benders to fight against benders."
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DC: BY NIGHT ONE WAY, BY DAY ANOTHER(Young Justice SI-Atlante)(Shazam)
Anime & Comics · Adam007