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*The usual shameless Autor Review* But since I'm here, let me give you an overview of the Novel: -This Novel is about a young man and his search in discovering the secrets of a completely different world, with the stakes rising every chapter. -As of now there are 3 Volumes and 150 available chapters, though since this is the new version, we're slowly going through each and every one of them again. -I said this before, but I'll be re-editing each chapter and adding more content to make the experience smoother and also to give it a different feel for old readers, and if you're a new one, you only profit by having more well-constructed chapters. -Schedule is 1 chapter per day, but since I am posting the edited chapters, it's 2 chapters per day, until we go back to the latest chapter, posted in the old version. -Chapter size is about 1500 words, but with the extra edit, it becomes 2K+ words per chapter. -For now, I'm posting 5 chapters per day, but this will likely end soon, same for the chapter size, once we catch up with the old version, we'll return to 1.5K words per chapter. -Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy this work!
I really, really love this Book. Some of the Points I subjectively love about this Book( Up to Chapter 56 I read about): 1. The Mc is more or less a loner. Sure, he has friends, family, and all that, but in the Game, he stays alone most of the time and doesn't share everything he has with everyone he meets like in so many other MMORPG Video Games Novels. 2. Mc isn't a dense Idiot, but a normal Dude. Like, in most Chinese Novels the Mc is just plain Stupid. I am talking about 20 IQ Dump. And it is also shown that everyone now acts like a normal Human Being. There are Idiots in there. Very Intelligent People, Normal People, etc like it should be. 3. By God is it satisfying to see that the Author thought about most things and is intelligent enough to leave some things uncertain so he can re-write or write them at all in the future. Like when he limited Information about Scaling and Ranks/Grades. ETC ETC. Don't wanna write down everything because I ain't got that much time xD. Wanna read further. Also... Spoiler:(Maybe) I got some ideas about why he got his Powers etc. Obviously, this got something to do with People getting their Stats transferred after they hit Level 100 to the Real World and as it is shown they gotta accomplish something before they hit Level, or else their Level 100 Acc is worthless. Maybe the more they are engaged in the Main Story and the more they did the more Percentage they get to Transcende Humanity? Like when you get 50% you got a 50% Chance to get your Acc "transferred" to the Real World. Or maybe just a few Stats. Or maybe you just get to Awaken like you can start to Train like the Mc but you don't get your whole Acc. It is also concerning how the Company always reacts soooooo fast...almost Inhuman? Is the Company even Human, or is it one entity or many? Bro,I got so many questions and theories( mostly because I have read them in other NovelsxD) Well, all in all, I love it. It gives me peace of mind that there are still people out there writing Stories that didn't just graduate from kindergarten. Peace out[img=recommend]
Inner monologues kill it. I get that the author likes them and has his own reasons but to me it just seems like word vomit. Also, I feel like the author wants an OP MC but falls into the same situation a lot of authors do by trying to make them less OP. It’s a good read but just not for me lol
Very good novel, I started this one with a bunch of others and it's the only one that didn't disappoint and kept getting better. Good work author.
I started reading this story about 4 days ago and just finished it (20th may 2024 9:00am) although i did have to read all the locked chapters on a pirated app, the fact that i read all 396 chp in 4-5 days should already tell you how good this novel is, it is also the first 'novel' that i was able to stick to and read over 200 chps without getting bored, this by far one of the best novels out there.
While starting to read this book, one thought I needed to put out there, that is how in this novel 'Elden Throne' is the game company name and 'Azimuth' is the game's name. But in reality I feel like Azimuth is suited for company name like 'Azimuth Technologies' and 'Elden Throne' is suited to be a game's name.
the history its great i like the mc, like the secondary characters, and like the world building in general but the thing that i don´t like it´s the pace of the history we got a massive amount of events (i am in chapter 171) in a short amount of time, 170 chapters and we are just 3 weeks in-game and 1 IRL it its a problem because the mc has no time to train his abilities, its the way that the author its using to make the op mc less op but its frustrating that everything its going to fast i feel like im reading a xianxia novel where the mc goes for a 5k chapters and just 2 years passed story wise we are told that the mc has a lot of stats but cant usse them cause he has no control but the mc has not been give the time to train its annoying another thing its that the mc has a lot of inner monologues that easily can be brushed over and does not affect the history easily 10 chapters (till 171) are monologues of the mc that has no relevant purpose i like the history, but for me it does not deserve the rating that it has
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The story has promise,it's very nice could use a little fine tuning here and there but still better than most not really my taste though it feels like a slow story so yeah not doing that. please like my comment I need exp thanks y all
The novel is enjoyable but the author writes it in a way that wastes chapters. The story development is very enjoyable and I have no qualms with a slow story as long as it continues to be entertaining. But the author delays it by using meaningless inner monologue. It's very pointless and has no reason to be there. If he could just summarize it or do something else the novel would be far better.But even with this flaw, I have gotten addicted to it 😂
If I had to say one thing bad is that the author over explains everything. While I understand that there are times that there should be explanations it's better not to shove in every piece of info you can. While the information dump is smooth there is too much inner dialogue with himself. Please just summarize like saying he was having trouble thinking. Or like there were too many good items. No need to say everything all at once. We don't need to know every little detail of everything.
I like the story a lot and recommend to read this! The author presents his characters in a very thorough way (even with images in his comment section, which helps me). Sometimes the MC feels a little dumb with his decision-making, and loses himself inside his thoughts and then still chooses the dumb option.But otherwise, I am a very big fan of the story development. If there was one thing I would want to criticize, it is the overuse of the words albeit & mayhaps (but that is only my opinion).
The best action survival mystery mmorpg that ever graced the virtual shelf from the best author there is.
Olá, vi no perfil do autor a localização do Brasil, então, como um brasileiro, irei comentar em na minha língua nativa mesmo. Me interessei por este livro ainda quando estava na versão antiga, mas por conta de eu estar lendo outros livros, acabei adicionando a biblioteca para ler mais tarde. Somente depois de tanto tempo me lembrei dele, e quando fui ver, já tinha uma nova versão. Vi ótimas avaliações e boas criticas, então, depois de um bom tempo vou começar a leitura
I’ve read a few of the VR novels, and this one is definitely one of the best so far. The only thing to complain about is that there is a lot of inner monologue going on. But everything else is great especially the world background.
I love the story so far. the only things that annoy me are the author notes in every chapter, please put them in the note section a wall of text before chapter start and after is annoying and the other thing is how much the characters stay in their heads. the mc will rattle on for a chapter or so just in his head and I have noticed other characters (non game ones like the Japanese guy) are starting to also, it's almost like a monolog and it's annoying. something else is how at the start he was rushed to get loot and level but now (pre 30) he isn't leveling and he is letting the rodi guy find all "his spots" its like each time he finds a new dungeon rodi is there so he loses the benefits ie he doesn't run it and with rodi there the info will get out, it's like he is just giving stuff away. otherwise, it's interesting and keeps me involved to a degree
Great story. Characters are really life-like, when you read it you feel like people are having normal everyday behaviour, there are no extremely unreasonable characters who just make things without any reason. The story is pretty slow but that's understandable as each chapter shows something interesting and if there wouldn't be anything important you get time skip with a short conclusion of minor events.
I need more. So far, it hasn't disappointed..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Really a great story. The pace is smooth and the interactions between game and real world is interesting. I'm just to the point of waiting for updates.
a historia é boa. Porem o autor coloca notas em todos os capítulos, arruinando a imersão do leitor. As notas do autor nos capítulos tem mais palavras do que alguns capítulos de outras historias. Autor, por favor, pare de escrever notas nos capítulos. Obs.: Só li até o capitulo 22 até agora, então não sei se isso muda mais pra frente na historia.
I look forward to this. I'm gonna have to binge read and catch up as fast as possible. This is a fun story to read afterall, has unique things being hinted at that I am looking forward to seeing as well! One of my top recommendations to anyone looking for a new experience.
Bro Im not the long winded type person so Im finna say this as short as possible...Your Novel is GOATED with the SAUCE only problem is there aint moar chapters
The Story is good. It has a few small dents but I think that is the fault of the grammar and typing mistakes, they are few but those that appear do disrupt the flow of the story. I would advice to seach for an editor that takes care of these small dents. All in all it is a great book and i am looking forward to read more.
the old version of this book was incredibly unique and well done in how it handled the virtual reality vrmmo genre and so I'm excited to see what is in-store for this new version. The pacing of the story along with the character development is will rounded and while the main character is really powerful the author makes a good attempt at not falling into the average vrmmo tropes.
*The usual shameless Autor Review* But since I'm here, let me give you an overview of the Novel: -This Novel is about a young man and his search in discovering the secrets of a completely different world, with the stakes rising every chapter. -As of now there are 3 Volumes and 150 available chapters, though since this is the new version, we're slowly going through each and every one of them again. -I said this before, but I'll be re-editing each chapter and adding more content to make the experience smoother and also to give it a different feel for old readers, and if you're a new one, you only profit by having more well-constructed chapters. -Schedule is 1 chapter per day, but since I am posting the edited chapters, it's 2 chapters per day, until we go back to the latest chapter, posted in the old version. -Chapter size is about 1500 words, but with the extra edit, it becomes 2K+ words per chapter. -For now, I'm posting 5 chapters per day, but this will likely end soon, same for the chapter size, once we catch up with the old version, we'll return to 1.5K words per chapter. -Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy this work!
I really, really love this Book. Some of the Points I subjectively love about this Book( Up to Chapter 56 I read about): 1. The Mc is more or less a loner. Sure, he has friends, family, and all that, but in the Game, he stays alone most of the time and doesn't share everything he has with everyone he meets like in so many other MMORPG Video Games Novels. 2. Mc isn't a dense Idiot, but a normal Dude. Like, in most Chinese Novels the Mc is just plain Stupid. I am talking about 20 IQ Dump. And it is also shown that everyone now acts like a normal Human Being. There are Idiots in there. Very Intelligent People, Normal People, etc like it should be. 3. By God is it satisfying to see that the Author thought about most things and is intelligent enough to leave some things uncertain so he can re-write or write them at all in the future. Like when he limited Information about Scaling and Ranks/Grades. ETC ETC. Don't wanna write down everything because I ain't got that much time xD. Wanna read further. Also... Spoiler:(Maybe) I got some ideas about why he got his Powers etc. Obviously, this got something to do with People getting their Stats transferred after they hit Level 100 to the Real World and as it is shown they gotta accomplish something before they hit Level, or else their Level 100 Acc is worthless. Maybe the more they are engaged in the Main Story and the more they did the more Percentage they get to Transcende Humanity? Like when you get 50% you got a 50% Chance to get your Acc "transferred" to the Real World. Or maybe just a few Stats. Or maybe you just get to Awaken like you can start to Train like the Mc but you don't get your whole Acc. It is also concerning how the Company always reacts soooooo fast...almost Inhuman? Is the Company even Human, or is it one entity or many? Bro,I got so many questions and theories( mostly because I have read them in other NovelsxD) Well, all in all, I love it. It gives me peace of mind that there are still people out there writing Stories that didn't just graduate from kindergarten. Peace out[img=recommend]
Inner monologues kill it. I get that the author likes them and has his own reasons but to me it just seems like word vomit. Also, I feel like the author wants an OP MC but falls into the same situation a lot of authors do by trying to make them less OP. It’s a good read but just not for me lol
Very good novel, I started this one with a bunch of others and it's the only one that didn't disappoint and kept getting better. Good work author.
I started reading this story about 4 days ago and just finished it (20th may 2024 9:00am) although i did have to read all the locked chapters on a pirated app, the fact that i read all 396 chp in 4-5 days should already tell you how good this novel is, it is also the first 'novel' that i was able to stick to and read over 200 chps without getting bored, this by far one of the best novels out there.
While starting to read this book, one thought I needed to put out there, that is how in this novel 'Elden Throne' is the game company name and 'Azimuth' is the game's name. But in reality I feel like Azimuth is suited for company name like 'Azimuth Technologies' and 'Elden Throne' is suited to be a game's name.
the history its great i like the mc, like the secondary characters, and like the world building in general but the thing that i don´t like it´s the pace of the history we got a massive amount of events (i am in chapter 171) in a short amount of time, 170 chapters and we are just 3 weeks in-game and 1 IRL it its a problem because the mc has no time to train his abilities, its the way that the author its using to make the op mc less op but its frustrating that everything its going to fast i feel like im reading a xianxia novel where the mc goes for a 5k chapters and just 2 years passed story wise we are told that the mc has a lot of stats but cant usse them cause he has no control but the mc has not been give the time to train its annoying another thing its that the mc has a lot of inner monologues that easily can be brushed over and does not affect the history easily 10 chapters (till 171) are monologues of the mc that has no relevant purpose i like the history, but for me it does not deserve the rating that it has
ネタバレを明かす The story has promise,it's very nice could use a little fine tuning here and there but still better than most not really my taste though it feels like a slow story so yeah not doing that. please like my comment I need exp thanks y all
The novel is enjoyable but the author writes it in a way that wastes chapters. The story development is very enjoyable and I have no qualms with a slow story as long as it continues to be entertaining. But the author delays it by using meaningless inner monologue. It's very pointless and has no reason to be there. If he could just summarize it or do something else the novel would be far better.But even with this flaw, I have gotten addicted to it 😂
If I had to say one thing bad is that the author over explains everything. While I understand that there are times that there should be explanations it's better not to shove in every piece of info you can. While the information dump is smooth there is too much inner dialogue with himself. Please just summarize like saying he was having trouble thinking. Or like there were too many good items. No need to say everything all at once. We don't need to know every little detail of everything.
I like the story a lot and recommend to read this! The author presents his characters in a very thorough way (even with images in his comment section, which helps me). Sometimes the MC feels a little dumb with his decision-making, and loses himself inside his thoughts and then still chooses the dumb option.But otherwise, I am a very big fan of the story development. If there was one thing I would want to criticize, it is the overuse of the words albeit & mayhaps (but that is only my opinion).
The best action survival mystery mmorpg that ever graced the virtual shelf from the best author there is.
Olá, vi no perfil do autor a localização do Brasil, então, como um brasileiro, irei comentar em na minha língua nativa mesmo. Me interessei por este livro ainda quando estava na versão antiga, mas por conta de eu estar lendo outros livros, acabei adicionando a biblioteca para ler mais tarde. Somente depois de tanto tempo me lembrei dele, e quando fui ver, já tinha uma nova versão. Vi ótimas avaliações e boas criticas, então, depois de um bom tempo vou começar a leitura
I’ve read a few of the VR novels, and this one is definitely one of the best so far. The only thing to complain about is that there is a lot of inner monologue going on. But everything else is great especially the world background.
I love the story so far. the only things that annoy me are the author notes in every chapter, please put them in the note section a wall of text before chapter start and after is annoying and the other thing is how much the characters stay in their heads. the mc will rattle on for a chapter or so just in his head and I have noticed other characters (non game ones like the Japanese guy) are starting to also, it's almost like a monolog and it's annoying. something else is how at the start he was rushed to get loot and level but now (pre 30) he isn't leveling and he is letting the rodi guy find all "his spots" its like each time he finds a new dungeon rodi is there so he loses the benefits ie he doesn't run it and with rodi there the info will get out, it's like he is just giving stuff away. otherwise, it's interesting and keeps me involved to a degree
Great story. Characters are really life-like, when you read it you feel like people are having normal everyday behaviour, there are no extremely unreasonable characters who just make things without any reason. The story is pretty slow but that's understandable as each chapter shows something interesting and if there wouldn't be anything important you get time skip with a short conclusion of minor events.
I need more. So far, it hasn't disappointed..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Really a great story. The pace is smooth and the interactions between game and real world is interesting. I'm just to the point of waiting for updates.
a historia é boa. Porem o autor coloca notas em todos os capítulos, arruinando a imersão do leitor. As notas do autor nos capítulos tem mais palavras do que alguns capítulos de outras historias. Autor, por favor, pare de escrever notas nos capítulos. Obs.: Só li até o capitulo 22 até agora, então não sei se isso muda mais pra frente na historia.
I look forward to this. I'm gonna have to binge read and catch up as fast as possible. This is a fun story to read afterall, has unique things being hinted at that I am looking forward to seeing as well! One of my top recommendations to anyone looking for a new experience.
Bro Im not the long winded type person so Im finna say this as short as possible...Your Novel is GOATED with the SAUCE only problem is there aint moar chapters
The Story is good. It has a few small dents but I think that is the fault of the grammar and typing mistakes, they are few but those that appear do disrupt the flow of the story. I would advice to seach for an editor that takes care of these small dents. All in all it is a great book and i am looking forward to read more.
the old version of this book was incredibly unique and well done in how it handled the virtual reality vrmmo genre and so I'm excited to see what is in-store for this new version. The pacing of the story along with the character development is will rounded and while the main character is really powerful the author makes a good attempt at not falling into the average vrmmo tropes.