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I like this story but I much prefer your other two books😅 I really hope you can update them like you used to but I understand if you are slowing down for this story. I am giving a magic castle to promote this story I just really really hope you don't leave the other two behind on your og account of Abadom. 😁
good book, it's more focused in world building than action, at least for now, but the author is good at describing the world around the MC ...
boa fic, vale a pena ler, não tem harém e tem uma história bem contada :3 mas ainda prefiro a outra novel do autor hehehehehe pena que é só um capítulo por semana ;----;
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This story is simply amazing. ٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠
It's a no nonsense story, consistent and logical. World building is good, side characters have a complex background and feels alive. I would like to see more of MC's parents and friends etc in game and MC's life outside of the game world.
You're back! And so am I! Honestly, I think it's a good idea of creating a new version all together as I don't remember anything at all. Okay, saying I don't remember anything at all is over exaggerating, but I did enjoy reading your old version of this novel! Good to see you're back, hope you can continue updating.
very interesting novel I read all of the first version and I am excited to see where this one goes
Read, what are you doing in the reviews? Want to spend another minute looking for a non-existant negative review? Didn't fully read the other one, I was stocking chaps. But I may as well re read and this is a good excuse as any.
The old version had the potential to be the best book on the platform and this is exponentially better. There is amazing world building and great story. I honestly can’t find a fault with this story. This new version is still at its starting point and I’m looking forward to where it goes from here.
I loved the original and am super excited for the rewrite. The mystery surrounding the game, his world and the secret factions are all incredibly intriguing and I can't wait for the gradual reveal for all of it.
Previous version of the story was well written and had a good premise and this is supposed to outdo the other one and so far it has had better punctuation and all that as well as the addition of the heavenly PIC which is always good so 5 stars from me author 👍👍👍👍👍
Well I've read the old version and loved everything about it to bits and it was worth every minute I spent reading it, I look forward to seeing this one too keep up the great work Mr author!
oh kingdom building... is it fanatasy... I mean some magic or immortality stuff or not.... or is it only sci-fi... If there is fantasy then that would be nice
I like this story but I much prefer your other two books😅 I really hope you can update them like you used to but I understand if you are slowing down for this story. I am giving a magic castle to promote this story I just really really hope you don't leave the other two behind on your og account of Abadom. 😁
good book, it's more focused in world building than action, at least for now, but the author is good at describing the world around the MC ...
boa fic, vale a pena ler, não tem harém e tem uma história bem contada :3 mas ainda prefiro a outra novel do autor hehehehehe pena que é só um capítulo por semana ;----;
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This story is simply amazing. ٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠٠
It's a no nonsense story, consistent and logical. World building is good, side characters have a complex background and feels alive. I would like to see more of MC's parents and friends etc in game and MC's life outside of the game world.
You're back! And so am I! Honestly, I think it's a good idea of creating a new version all together as I don't remember anything at all. Okay, saying I don't remember anything at all is over exaggerating, but I did enjoy reading your old version of this novel! Good to see you're back, hope you can continue updating.
very interesting novel I read all of the first version and I am excited to see where this one goes
Read, what are you doing in the reviews? Want to spend another minute looking for a non-existant negative review? Didn't fully read the other one, I was stocking chaps. But I may as well re read and this is a good excuse as any.
The old version had the potential to be the best book on the platform and this is exponentially better. There is amazing world building and great story. I honestly can’t find a fault with this story. This new version is still at its starting point and I’m looking forward to where it goes from here.
I loved the original and am super excited for the rewrite. The mystery surrounding the game, his world and the secret factions are all incredibly intriguing and I can't wait for the gradual reveal for all of it.
Previous version of the story was well written and had a good premise and this is supposed to outdo the other one and so far it has had better punctuation and all that as well as the addition of the heavenly PIC which is always good so 5 stars from me author 👍👍👍👍👍
Well I've read the old version and loved everything about it to bits and it was worth every minute I spent reading it, I look forward to seeing this one too keep up the great work Mr author!
oh kingdom building... is it fanatasy... I mean some magic or immortality stuff or not.... or is it only sci-fi... If there is fantasy then that would be nice