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The prologue introduced a very interesting premise. The Unspeakables and the underworld 'factions' create quite an interesting concept between the hidden veil. Writing Quality: It's pretty fluent, and the structure of the sentences are well formed. The vocabulary is on a high-end which creates a unique reading environment. Plot: Unique to say the least, and the pace is very well managed. The author brings in unexpected humor and dark elements into the story, which I personally find entertaining. The mystery aspect is executed well and I'm sure many of you would be itching to read more. Character Design: The characters are well though of. The names are distinct and brings in a breath of fresh air. Character Growth is evident from the way how they change their mindset after being in the underworld. World Background: The prologue does a very good job in introducing the 'hidden world'. The flexibility and the incorporation of the hidden world with the real world signifies an interesting background. In the end, I thoroughly enjoyed it and I look forward to further chapters.
Loved it, the chapters are not too long and not too small they are just right (goldilocks reference). World Building and Description is on another level. Hoping to see more updates to quench my thirst.
I have only read two chapters but am drawn to the story already. I love the FMC and the action scenes I have read so far. It's eye-catching and have no words to explain how praising am of the author. Hats off to the author
Good story, the character are well made, also there are no lot of holes, I can see that the story have lot of potential. I can't wait too see out the future chapters
Truly! I really loved this kind of anti-hero and bloody story! It gives off a certain charm, yet, if one is unable to execute the concept beautifully, it will just become a normal goric story. Your story itself gives an interesting premise and concept. Although I'm not able to give a more detailed review as I have yet to read further chapters, but I can see that the story will get more interesting as the chapters passed. Wishing you a happy journey ;)
I love the book and I'm seriously in love with the ML. I love how the story is progressing. You are a talented author
This book is too good to be true keep it up and am sure you will become way better
I am thoroughly enjoying this intriguing story filled with captivating characters, mystery, and emotion. The unique interactions between Ramika, Yohan, and Diana keep me engaged, and the plot continues to unravel in unexpected ways. The author masterfully weaves together the perspectives of each character, making it easy to connect with their internal struggles and motivations. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone seeking an enthralling and immersive reading experience.
This is an excellent piece of reading that has really grabbed my attention. The way the author has crafted their writing style is truly remarkable, and I find myself unable to put the book down. I am thoroughly impressed by the depth and complexity of the characters and the intricate plot twists that keep me guessing. This book has truly exceeded my expectations, and I cannot wait to see what the author has in store for us next. Needless to say, I will be keeping a close eye on their future works and eagerly anticipating their next release.
Tried leaving a second review but I couldn’t, so here’s my updated review after reading all the chapters so far: It was fun to read, and I especially love how the characters were written and fleshed out! Though this isnt my niche genre, it’s definitely an intriguing read. There are small occasional errors time to time, but it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the book. I love how the story progressed, and the qualities of the MC. Keep it up, author!
It's a few chapters and I read them, I actually was drunk when reading this but I love it. It's just, I saw more swearing here than my whole life lol. Overly, the story is good, Yohan and Ramika (If I remember correctly) oh and spoiler, Yohan ain't blind 💁 and Ramika is a girl for future understanding lol. It really strives you to read, a masterpiece indeed. I will continue reading, and support the author.
It's been a time since I open my account and found a lot of amazing books from amazing authors. One of them is this.. thcontainsain all the spice you need to cook a recipe for a good book....action, funny, and filled with a lot more. Niceeeee as a friend suggested to me Great Job auth...
I read a few chapters and I could say it's a good deal of time. The chapter is of satisfying length and quite entertaining. And on second thought...my gonna says its the best..so It's the best. deserves all the stars
I am huge fan of horror and fantasy. So reading this was a great experience. Our main mc ramika was very interesting character. Loved the humor btw. Overall nice read. Can’t wait for next update. All the best [img=recommend]
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I am really impressed by your writing quality and the way you were able to make a great story out of a very difficult subject to write from. Once again, I have to say I am quite impressed. Please continue writing as I will be an avid reader of this novel. Good luck Author!
What's you need in a story...interesting and intriguing characters..good vocabulary and neat writing and most important a unique plot or storyline....and this book is a package of all these characteristics ...I like how the chapters are so edgy and steady in the pace to help the reader to imagine every scene clearly in their herd... For me, it deserves a five-star rating to bind me with the chair Good job author...
Easy to read yet quite descriptive, intriguing story line, which makes me wonder what will happen next. The pacing is a bit fast, though. Keep up the good work, author!
Review based reading the prologue and 4 chapters. Good writing quality but not quite 5 stars (I read stories a bit more fluent and richer dictionary). Updates not daily so I gave 4 stars. Story development feels quite slow considering how much I read so 3 stars, seeing the m.c. was just introduced marginally up to now . The range of personalities Is various but I don't really love the strong feigning being weak m.c. so 4 stars. The world background definitely isn't the usual japanese isekaid and Is presented in good way, leaving the question about the possible but not realized Word domination of the O.P. race. In the complex the read is strongly recommended to who likes the spy setting.
Good start so far. I enjoy the Writing quality and how the characters are depicted. Only real problem is there arent enough chapters!!! Keep up the good work man!
A honest review. The story is great, I love the action in the book and the writing system is great. Good job author .
Intriguing world building in the first few chapters, overall good writing, and already a few unique characters have found their way in the story. A promising start, it's a shame it's not longer. It's a dangerous read, because you have to be careful not to say the full title of the Uncro- *Bang!*
Reading the first three chapters. The writing is great. It has a mystery to it. And easy to follow. Overall have great potential. The only con I have is that flashback sort of back-and-forth scene.
It was a roller coaster ride truely. read it it saves the amusement park fees. Writing quality - It's great but what i loved the most is names of the character. these character names are going to be all time favourite for me from now on. story development - it's not fast or slow paced the but you do need time to immeresed in the novel at first. it's a mystery for god sakes guy give it time readers. Character design - what can i say i don't want spoil you guy but the male lead is funny evil charcters are evil. especially the bloody princess i meant the vampire princess. updating stability - 5 star for this author keep up the good work world background - great mystery various evil assassin organisations but author made it easy to understand. i just want to spoil this novel so bad 😭.
The prologue introduced a very interesting premise. The Unspeakables and the underworld 'factions' create quite an interesting concept between the hidden veil. Writing Quality: It's pretty fluent, and the structure of the sentences are well formed. The vocabulary is on a high-end which creates a unique reading environment. Plot: Unique to say the least, and the pace is very well managed. The author brings in unexpected humor and dark elements into the story, which I personally find entertaining. The mystery aspect is executed well and I'm sure many of you would be itching to read more. Character Design: The characters are well though of. The names are distinct and brings in a breath of fresh air. Character Growth is evident from the way how they change their mindset after being in the underworld. World Background: The prologue does a very good job in introducing the 'hidden world'. The flexibility and the incorporation of the hidden world with the real world signifies an interesting background. In the end, I thoroughly enjoyed it and I look forward to further chapters.
Loved it, the chapters are not too long and not too small they are just right (goldilocks reference). World Building and Description is on another level. Hoping to see more updates to quench my thirst.
I have only read two chapters but am drawn to the story already. I love the FMC and the action scenes I have read so far. It's eye-catching and have no words to explain how praising am of the author. Hats off to the author
Good story, the character are well made, also there are no lot of holes, I can see that the story have lot of potential. I can't wait too see out the future chapters
Truly! I really loved this kind of anti-hero and bloody story! It gives off a certain charm, yet, if one is unable to execute the concept beautifully, it will just become a normal goric story. Your story itself gives an interesting premise and concept. Although I'm not able to give a more detailed review as I have yet to read further chapters, but I can see that the story will get more interesting as the chapters passed. Wishing you a happy journey ;)
I love the book and I'm seriously in love with the ML. I love how the story is progressing. You are a talented author
This book is too good to be true keep it up and am sure you will become way better
I am thoroughly enjoying this intriguing story filled with captivating characters, mystery, and emotion. The unique interactions between Ramika, Yohan, and Diana keep me engaged, and the plot continues to unravel in unexpected ways. The author masterfully weaves together the perspectives of each character, making it easy to connect with their internal struggles and motivations. Overall, I highly recommend this book to anyone seeking an enthralling and immersive reading experience.
This is an excellent piece of reading that has really grabbed my attention. The way the author has crafted their writing style is truly remarkable, and I find myself unable to put the book down. I am thoroughly impressed by the depth and complexity of the characters and the intricate plot twists that keep me guessing. This book has truly exceeded my expectations, and I cannot wait to see what the author has in store for us next. Needless to say, I will be keeping a close eye on their future works and eagerly anticipating their next release.
Tried leaving a second review but I couldn’t, so here’s my updated review after reading all the chapters so far: It was fun to read, and I especially love how the characters were written and fleshed out! Though this isnt my niche genre, it’s definitely an intriguing read. There are small occasional errors time to time, but it isn’t detrimental to the quality of the book. I love how the story progressed, and the qualities of the MC. Keep it up, author!
It's a few chapters and I read them, I actually was drunk when reading this but I love it. It's just, I saw more swearing here than my whole life lol. Overly, the story is good, Yohan and Ramika (If I remember correctly) oh and spoiler, Yohan ain't blind 💁 and Ramika is a girl for future understanding lol. It really strives you to read, a masterpiece indeed. I will continue reading, and support the author.
It's been a time since I open my account and found a lot of amazing books from amazing authors. One of them is this.. thcontainsain all the spice you need to cook a recipe for a good book....action, funny, and filled with a lot more. Niceeeee as a friend suggested to me Great Job auth...
I read a few chapters and I could say it's a good deal of time. The chapter is of satisfying length and quite entertaining. And on second thought...my gonna says its the best..so It's the best. deserves all the stars
I am huge fan of horror and fantasy. So reading this was a great experience. Our main mc ramika was very interesting character. Loved the humor btw. Overall nice read. Can’t wait for next update. All the best [img=recommend]
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREM I NEED MORE!
I am really impressed by your writing quality and the way you were able to make a great story out of a very difficult subject to write from. Once again, I have to say I am quite impressed. Please continue writing as I will be an avid reader of this novel. Good luck Author!
What's you need in a story...interesting and intriguing characters..good vocabulary and neat writing and most important a unique plot or storyline....and this book is a package of all these characteristics ...I like how the chapters are so edgy and steady in the pace to help the reader to imagine every scene clearly in their herd... For me, it deserves a five-star rating to bind me with the chair Good job author...
Easy to read yet quite descriptive, intriguing story line, which makes me wonder what will happen next. The pacing is a bit fast, though. Keep up the good work, author!
Review based reading the prologue and 4 chapters. Good writing quality but not quite 5 stars (I read stories a bit more fluent and richer dictionary). Updates not daily so I gave 4 stars. Story development feels quite slow considering how much I read so 3 stars, seeing the m.c. was just introduced marginally up to now . The range of personalities Is various but I don't really love the strong feigning being weak m.c. so 4 stars. The world background definitely isn't the usual japanese isekaid and Is presented in good way, leaving the question about the possible but not realized Word domination of the O.P. race. In the complex the read is strongly recommended to who likes the spy setting.
Good start so far. I enjoy the Writing quality and how the characters are depicted. Only real problem is there arent enough chapters!!! Keep up the good work man!
A honest review. The story is great, I love the action in the book and the writing system is great. Good job author .
Intriguing world building in the first few chapters, overall good writing, and already a few unique characters have found their way in the story. A promising start, it's a shame it's not longer. It's a dangerous read, because you have to be careful not to say the full title of the Uncro- *Bang!*
Reading the first three chapters. The writing is great. It has a mystery to it. And easy to follow. Overall have great potential. The only con I have is that flashback sort of back-and-forth scene.
It was a roller coaster ride truely. read it it saves the amusement park fees. Writing quality - It's great but what i loved the most is names of the character. these character names are going to be all time favourite for me from now on. story development - it's not fast or slow paced the but you do need time to immeresed in the novel at first. it's a mystery for god sakes guy give it time readers. Character design - what can i say i don't want spoil you guy but the male lead is funny evil charcters are evil. especially the bloody princess i meant the vampire princess. updating stability - 5 star for this author keep up the good work world background - great mystery various evil assassin organisations but author made it easy to understand. i just want to spoil this novel so bad 😭.