There are a few minor typos, such as "Mijolnir" instead of "Mjolnir" and "their" instead of "them" in the sentence "They had betrayed them, all of their." In some cases, words that should be capitalized are written in lowercase. For instance, "system" and "portals" should be capitalized since they refer to specific entities within the context of the story. There are a few more minor mistakes that can be easily corrected. Overall, the writing is engaging and well-crafted, and these small adjustments will help improve its clarity and coherence.
this is useful I'd say
- Unlock inventory.]
The Wolf's Lineage
Fantasy · Lyk_novel
you mean Resurrector?
Seated on the throne, Daniel, the Resurretor waited for him. The visor of his helmet raised to reveal his golden eyes. The white armor was polished, the silver spear stuck out in front of him.
The Wolf's Lineage
Fantasy · Lyk_novel
Tbh I kinda like it, the story flows smooth but the transition is not good, you dont need a line of "-" or "*" to switch to different scene. but overall is pretty good 👍
that was short, but i like it 🥴
idk why but i keep reading Luan as "Juan"
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Moonlit Identity [BL]
LGBT+ · Flattened_Rice_007
the same thing happened when i go to toilet. while im doing my business, i heard a sound across the room. really scary bro, i fkin sprint to my room [img=nervous][img=nervous]
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Moonlit Identity [BL]
LGBT+ · Flattened_Rice_007
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original The Path of Destruction
4.7
Laurent, an ordinary stargazer, discovers a mysterious falling star that grants her unimaginable powers. As she embraces his newfound abilities, she is drawn into a world of secrets and ancient prophecies. But when a group of malevolent knights seeks to claim the star's power for themselves, Laurent must rise up and protect her loved ones. She becomes a reluctant hero, determined to bring justice and restore balance to a world on the brink of chaos.2 Chs 7 お気に入り
- original
Slyrith Demonic Valiants
A strange and mysterious force comes into the universe and was put into a state of turmoil. At the same time, Dimensional Rifts appeared and brought people to Slyrith. A world of Sword and Magic, a world where Different Species and Monsters resides. Enzo, a Mercenary. He was sent to Slyrith in order to overcome the uncontrolled Valiant Power, where there is only survival or death.1 Chs 0 お気に入り
sorry but im not, maybe because of the memes
Moonlit Identity [BL]
LGBT+ · Flattened_Rice_007