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Nice novel. I wish if they'er a lot novel like this. I want writing more but i don't lol هذا المشهد جعلني اتذكر حكمة قالها الجنرال) الالماني في الحرب العالمية الثانية ولم يستطيع أحد سماعها بسبب صوت المدافع)
Low tier, zero effort story that doesn't even follow it's own premise and instead keeps putting characters from other more known Chinese literature into it. The main character will barely use the upgrade system for his land, in fact you will pull your hair out when you discover at chapter 300 that he can use other resources to upgrade his land but wtv. the author tired to focus on kingdom building, but knowing the MC comes from earth into a "medieval cultivation" style era, I don't understand why he keeps focusing so much on the old ways of running a dynasty which are inefficient and prone to corruption, he doesn't even try to apply modern concept and his territory basically stays in the dark ages but now with portals and potions.
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I'm only 5 chapters and will update this later if it keeps me interested but the early signs are not good. Some information is given to the reader like they should already know what it means, or the scene is not explained properly, it will say there are 30 people in a class them lln say there are 3-5 just a paragraph later, some sentences feel disjointed, like the author changed thoughts mid-word. Also the planet is called blue star, which just feels over used at this point, every other book feels like they use blue star or azura star. I'll update this if it gets better but the first few chapters feel shaky.
If you are a huge Chinese fan and know a lot of chinese history and mythology, then MAYBE this will be a good read for you. But for everyone else, it will just be so un-immersive that you will find yourself bored and wasting your time. For my the Americans out there reading this, it would be like if the MC entered a "stargate" and ran into Thomas Edison and Nikola Tesla right as they are inventing the applicational use for electricity, or if you randomly ran into Abraham Lincoln before the whole theatre incident. So please, save yourself the time, and coins, by NOT reading this story.
Its a mtl trying to look like a normal translation. And there are so many filler texts that i got white hair from reading this.
If you can get pass the terrible translation of the first 2 chapter. This will be one of the best novel out there (compare to some of the best out there: e.g shadow slave, evolution get merchant, god of fishing, mech touch, global lord: 100% drop rate,… just name a few) If you know a similar novel like this, please let’s me know
stupid mc ..... because when he established his territory in no man land elder Wan informed him that there was atleast 10 transcendent forest race enemy while he is the only one transcendent and innate level 5 is the highest subordinate he have, mc does not think of training more soldiers or retraining in the tower where he once train( or upgrading the training tower or bone tower where weapons is made)( the wolf army is another thing cuz it is not available at that time)..........mc only thinks about the void market and the coins he made and how he is going to circulate into the market........... what if the forest race attack his territory with 3 or more transcendent and with their army????
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one dimensional story one dimensional characters everything already seen elsewhere a bagilion times. And at the end half of every chapter consist of the words blessed land
This story is pretty good. I've never read a story with a blessed land concept before but the following plots was exciting! Not bad for a cultivation novel with a hard-working MC.
I read the first two chapters and already dropped it. It looks like they used the cheapest translator around to get this.
You know what, im not going to hate on the author as I know writing isn’ eaay. Looking forward to their future works though
just want to know if nationalism or racism will be brought into the story 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
The book is average but the way it is written is very jarring. I did not like it.
Full Of FillersMy Grandfather smoked his whole life. I was about 10 years old when my mother said to him, 'If you ever want to see your grandchildren graduate, you have to stop immediately.'. Tears welled up in his eyes when he realized what exactly was at stake. He gave it up immediately. Three years later he died of lung cancer. It was really sad and destroyed me. My mother said to me- 'Don't ever smoke. Please don't put your family through what your Grandfather put us through." I agreed. At 20, I have never touched a cigarette. I must say, I feel a very slight sense of regret for never having done it, because this novel gave me cancer anyway.
it's a very all Nice setup and storyline and with this I can categorically say I'd be glad to read it over and over and over again, kudos to you on this
The quality of the translation is trash. I couldn't continu reading this story after 3 chapter. A pity, it seemed like an interesting story
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
Story is good but wth is with the blessed Land word like it was just used so many times in 1 chapter. I think using it 2 to 5 times is good but more than 12 times in 1 chapter is too much.
This is an okay novel for me. The characters and plot wasn't too bad. The premise/settings is also interesting. I've seen other novels with the same or similar settings but they're not that good. If you like this, just read it. It wasn't that bad.
There aren’t super glaring issues. It's just a fairly bland and unexciting novel. The author doesn't know how to do a lot of things, such as: - Putting in a sense of thrill and mystery with the world building - Having interesting character interactions - Writing exciting battles It's like eating food with no salt or seasoning. Some people are fine with it, personally don't find the it fun.
Pretty enjoyable and pleasing read thus far. the translations are on the sub-par but it's not too detrimental to the overall read
Blessed land this !!! BLESSED LAND THAT IN THE BLESSED LAND TOO MUCH BLESSED LANDS IN ONE SENTENCE !!!!!! Very horrible. the idea is good if only it was translated in a good way
Nice novel. I wish if they'er a lot novel like this. I want writing more but i don't lol هذا المشهد جعلني اتذكر حكمة قالها الجنرال) الالماني في الحرب العالمية الثانية ولم يستطيع أحد سماعها بسبب صوت المدافع)
Low tier, zero effort story that doesn't even follow it's own premise and instead keeps putting characters from other more known Chinese literature into it. The main character will barely use the upgrade system for his land, in fact you will pull your hair out when you discover at chapter 300 that he can use other resources to upgrade his land but wtv. the author tired to focus on kingdom building, but knowing the MC comes from earth into a "medieval cultivation" style era, I don't understand why he keeps focusing so much on the old ways of running a dynasty which are inefficient and prone to corruption, he doesn't even try to apply modern concept and his territory basically stays in the dark ages but now with portals and potions.
ネタバレを明かす I'm only 5 chapters and will update this later if it keeps me interested but the early signs are not good. Some information is given to the reader like they should already know what it means, or the scene is not explained properly, it will say there are 30 people in a class them lln say there are 3-5 just a paragraph later, some sentences feel disjointed, like the author changed thoughts mid-word. Also the planet is called blue star, which just feels over used at this point, every other book feels like they use blue star or azura star. I'll update this if it gets better but the first few chapters feel shaky.
If you are a huge Chinese fan and know a lot of chinese history and mythology, then MAYBE this will be a good read for you. But for everyone else, it will just be so un-immersive that you will find yourself bored and wasting your time. For my the Americans out there reading this, it would be like if the MC entered a "stargate" and ran into Thomas Edison and Nikola Tesla right as they are inventing the applicational use for electricity, or if you randomly ran into Abraham Lincoln before the whole theatre incident. So please, save yourself the time, and coins, by NOT reading this story.
Its a mtl trying to look like a normal translation. And there are so many filler texts that i got white hair from reading this.
If you can get pass the terrible translation of the first 2 chapter. This will be one of the best novel out there (compare to some of the best out there: e.g shadow slave, evolution get merchant, god of fishing, mech touch, global lord: 100% drop rate,… just name a few) If you know a similar novel like this, please let’s me know
stupid mc ..... because when he established his territory in no man land elder Wan informed him that there was atleast 10 transcendent forest race enemy while he is the only one transcendent and innate level 5 is the highest subordinate he have, mc does not think of training more soldiers or retraining in the tower where he once train( or upgrading the training tower or bone tower where weapons is made)( the wolf army is another thing cuz it is not available at that time)..........mc only thinks about the void market and the coins he made and how he is going to circulate into the market........... what if the forest race attack his territory with 3 or more transcendent and with their army????
ネタバレを明かす one dimensional story one dimensional characters everything already seen elsewhere a bagilion times. And at the end half of every chapter consist of the words blessed land
This story is pretty good. I've never read a story with a blessed land concept before but the following plots was exciting! Not bad for a cultivation novel with a hard-working MC.
I read the first two chapters and already dropped it. It looks like they used the cheapest translator around to get this.
You know what, im not going to hate on the author as I know writing isn’ eaay. Looking forward to their future works though
just want to know if nationalism or racism will be brought into the story 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔
The book is average but the way it is written is very jarring. I did not like it.
Full Of FillersMy Grandfather smoked his whole life. I was about 10 years old when my mother said to him, 'If you ever want to see your grandchildren graduate, you have to stop immediately.'. Tears welled up in his eyes when he realized what exactly was at stake. He gave it up immediately. Three years later he died of lung cancer. It was really sad and destroyed me. My mother said to me- 'Don't ever smoke. Please don't put your family through what your Grandfather put us through." I agreed. At 20, I have never touched a cigarette. I must say, I feel a very slight sense of regret for never having done it, because this novel gave me cancer anyway.
it's a very all Nice setup and storyline and with this I can categorically say I'd be glad to read it over and over and over again, kudos to you on this
The quality of the translation is trash. I couldn't continu reading this story after 3 chapter. A pity, it seemed like an interesting story
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
Story is good but wth is with the blessed Land word like it was just used so many times in 1 chapter. I think using it 2 to 5 times is good but more than 12 times in 1 chapter is too much.
This is an okay novel for me. The characters and plot wasn't too bad. The premise/settings is also interesting. I've seen other novels with the same or similar settings but they're not that good. If you like this, just read it. It wasn't that bad.
There aren’t super glaring issues. It's just a fairly bland and unexciting novel. The author doesn't know how to do a lot of things, such as: - Putting in a sense of thrill and mystery with the world building - Having interesting character interactions - Writing exciting battles It's like eating food with no salt or seasoning. Some people are fine with it, personally don't find the it fun.
Pretty enjoyable and pleasing read thus far. the translations are on the sub-par but it's not too detrimental to the overall read
Blessed land this !!! BLESSED LAND THAT IN THE BLESSED LAND TOO MUCH BLESSED LANDS IN ONE SENTENCE !!!!!! Very horrible. the idea is good if only it was translated in a good way
pretty good story overall I believe.....