Tainowarchief

Tainowarchief

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2019-01-16 入りました Global
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Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
20 days ago
Replied to Martin_Leong_4647

Next it will be megazords 😂

He had done his best, after all. How could he compete with the likes of the mighty Gundams?

Starting from the Planetary Governor

Starting from the Planetary Governor

Sci-fi · Red Heart Fabric

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Replied to Smurfette

The author is making artificial difficulty because he made him too strong.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Replied to Tainowarchief

My mistake he wasn’t I Minotaur his robot was. I was just under the impression he had bionic enhancements as well.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Replied to Shazorwy

The leader of the mercenaries. Thunderclap or something like that

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Commented

They aren’t in the aquarium anymore. Is this story AI generated or something?

He pushed the door open, stepping into the chamber containing the specially-made glass aquarium, large enough to accommodate a mini-ecosystem for his growing chimera colony. His eyes immediately fell on the tiny figure within the container, nestled in a corner. There it was—the newly hatched frog variant, its glossy dark green body glinting under the dim light.

The Eccentric Entomologist is Now a Queen's Consort

The Eccentric Entomologist is Now a Queen's Consort

Fantasy · Arkalphaze

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Commented

Why can’t Carlos have nanobots like nobles? Not at the level of Rex but if even that minataur could have them why can’t Carlos?

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Commented

I imagined them almost gorilla like.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Commented

Yea I don’t know what’s wrong with this author. He needs to have some long chats with a shrink.

But as he read, he thought. 'Well, when I rape her, it won't matter!'

The Magical Path Of The Wizard With A Biological Chip

The Magical Path Of The Wizard With A Biological Chip

Fantasy · WOODD

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
1 months ago
Commented

This chapter needs editing. It jumps around way to much. Almost like you wrote the paragraphs separately and put them in the wrong place.

Tainowarchief
Tainowarchief
3 months ago
Posted

Very good so far and unique which I find is the most important in this genre. As long as the MC doesn’t get too ridiculous and a few side characters are given their time to shine and aren’t just trade bots for the story.