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Road of Fog

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作者: Varts

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They said living is like walking in a thick layer of fog, you can neither see far ahead nor see upon the path you threaded upon. You never know if your step will lead you to a glorious or damnation end, heck you might not even reach the end.

No one knows the future and no one would expect doomsday to occur. Yet it is now the reality of the inhabitants of a planet named Maia. Monsters show up, myths considered to be no more than empty stories appear and the position of the Apex species naturally shifts.

What path should the humans take? Everything is shrouded by fog.

Follows the journey of Link and his mates. Will he succumbs to hardship or tread-on throughout the unknown foggy path.

Note: the image is not mine I just get it from google image. if you are the owner of the image message me and I will take it down.

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I reckon I will continue it down here. The story begins on a planet named Maia that has similar properties to Earth except they found a breakthrough with Nuclear Fusion and with that excess and available energy on their hands. Their Technology is more advanced compared to earth and it also makes their inhabitant more reliant on technology for their ease of life. But doomsday happens. What I have in mind when cooking this story; 1. The main idea of the story was the Nuclear Fusion thing and it escalates from there. 2. Before I create or solidify the story concept, I already dwell around creating monsters, like the one on DnD so you can expect monsters you are familiar with show up here and there. 3. It may be an apocalypse theme story but it won't be as grim dark as the theme; at least not in the first few arcs. 4. I will slowly explore the world and you can piece out the world's history, culture, and stuff. 5. This will be a character-driven story. Do try it, folks. Cheers~

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If you want to read a novel in between the System genre, that its coherent and has a cool ideia of the appearance of the System, then you may give this a shot. To improve: Writing Quality: The only drawback here is the grammar. It has minor issues, punctuations missing and capitalizations. Nothing a good rewrite don't fix :)

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