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Mc reincarnates into Peter parker from the MCU before iron man 1 and decides to be the best spiderman there ever will be, but the path he chose led him to be an internet celebrity.
This is my 3rd first fic so please be gentle
The first 6-8 chapters might be awful but i promise it gets better.
You can read 5 chapters ahead for $3 on my P@TREN/kambrofam and 12 chapters ahead for $8
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レビューを書くSo basically mc gets rencanted into Spider-Man then he decides to make a YouTube video and it gets 2 mill in one day even though it’s his first when we know that’s not realistically possible, he then find Billie elish running on top of buildings with 2 kids he decided to join them cuz of a feeling and then jumps some building gets recorded somehow. He gets grounded cuz why would he not when you find out your nephew hangs out with thieves and say you can hang with anymore, mc has a hissy fit and runs off then Ben goes out to find him. Ben gets on a bus with a 13? Year old girl and the girl is srounded by men, Ben does a 1v5 gets shot or stabbed, meanwhile mc stayed watching the stars for 20 mins then remembered he Spider-Man so rushes to find a mask and save Ben, the 13 year old was a YouTuber alone on a bus at night and recorded mc fighting the thugs. Mc somehow always gets recorded doing stuff cuz of plot idk? And then gets in trouble then he hissy fit then beats people while also being recorded. Not that good I normally read till chapter 15 to make a review and I’m at 15.
Mandatory authors 5 star review. Your comments are what make me want to write so be sure to comment, i don't need powerstones and i don't know what to do with them anyway. Please be gentle it's my 3rd first time writing a book.
I think this fic is good . the beginning was intriguing and I quite liked the concept the way it was written , didn't like the romance part that much as that was pretty gray area of fic . as author took an big break to upload the later chaps became very confusing as I couldn't understand what is happening , will reread from start when this fic hits more than 80 chaps as It would take good amount of time to go into the depth of this story.
dude this is such a good fic, don't abandon it like the way u go into detail about the youtube video n all please add more of it
it's good overall only a bit jumping around but still understandable personality I like it the things I don't like it's a bit rushed like pitter being chased by destiny and telling himself fine I'm fine but no matter what problem caching up or like Thanos says I'm inevitable
Here's my third review for the fic . the fic was good in early stages and kept fluctuating in between i.e it had some good thing and some cringe things , but now has gone downhill from chap 63 . spoiler in reply.
The story is good, the writing is good, but the MC is very sensitive and immature or I think the author makes the MC's personality very incongruent Examples: At first the MC makes a plan to earn money, but he doesn't say anything about missing his parents and missing his parents gives him a panic attack (that had to happen in chapter 1 not after) Another example, the MC had an argument with his uncles (parents) for helping some street children and he ran away from home because of that. He also looked for his uncle Ben after 20 minutes to remember the canon of his Death HE SAW HIS UNCLE LEAVING AND THINKS HE'S IN DANGER AFTER SEEING THAT HE WENT TO LOOK FOR HIM AND WAITED FOR 20 MINUTES, BUT HE WAS ALSO LOOKING FOR SOMETHING FOR A COSTUME SO HE WON'T RECOGNIZE HIM
Typical reviews spam, no conceivable way people are giving this 5 stars. It's as if the author has never even read a book before with how awful the Grammer is. An indian call center would put this book to shame.
So, there are a few mistakes here and there, The Grammar is readable, the only thing which is bad is the Romance which doesn't make sense to me.
Sigma youtuber peter parker, pretty good novel overall, didn't like the billie eilish drop-in much and you should maybe start getting some actual marvel stuff into it but otherwise 10/10
Entertaining story. Pretty original or at least I've not seen it done much. The grammar gets a 4/5 because the author doesn't capitalize names a good amount of the time and some other very minor things. I'm not actually going to drag the rating down though, this is just for potential readers to know. Definitely recommend checking out the story.
it is a good fanfiction but I think spiderman of author alienwarlord is the best and strongest(will be I guess)