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Author reapeated everything like 3 times or more and the mc is a giga emo kid thats going through his cringe phase hard, not very good
Don't understand why so many writers give their MC's the ability to copy or steal someone else's ability. that's so unimaginative let me guess, he always compares himself to the strongest beings in the universe and then says he's not that op while winning every fight with no problem right? I'm not a hater, I'm just annoyed to see the same thing almost everywhere
The first 5 chapter just literally reading MC monologues, while he keep repeating himself the same words in a different ways, as if he's a patient with mental issues.
The title is misleading. He can copy the powers of anyone IF he defeats them. This is already nerfing the power and potential of the mc. He would never be able to defeat Nigh-Omnipotent beings (like Monitor Mind, Lucifer Morningstar) unless he found a way to trap them; even then, it is highly unlikely. And also, the whole enslaving thing is genuinely odd and unsettling. Take this as a criticism. No hate.
I must say i have never see such horrible dialog. Most of the story is just describing events and when there is a dialog it feel very unnatural. The MC and other characters talk like robots. They say every out loud and there is no subtext used in the dialogs. you dont need to explain the powers of the seal everytime you use it. Its better to show the reactions of the characters that are sealed and see them figure it out. it also doesnt make sense how the mc was able to knock out reverse flash even if he sneak attacked him, you could have started on a weaker character and build up nicely. The premise of the story is interesting enough even though the MC is too overpowered. Hopefully the writing will get better and i look forward to your future works.
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There are times when making an OP MC can back fire and ruin a FanFic. This is one of those times SMH. Just try to read the first chap and it'll be clear for those who can understand.
Opinion hasta el capitulo 2 la premisa es buena, pero la escritura no me gusta mucho, no es por errores, es solo que esta escrito de tal forma en la que ni hay identificacion con el protagonista, ni hay inmersion, como si solo me estas contando cosas, no lo se, no esta mal, pero aburre un poco
MC is is so moral he releases his first victim whilst essentially powerless. This is both his 1st and 2nd flaw. He is stupid and monologues about being a good person and how it is for the greater good whilst spending 2 chapters telling everyone he enslaves the exact details over how he owns them like a manchild.
seems good so far would like too know if there's any "romance" 😏 in this since that mc is a villain that enslaves people.
I question the morals of those who read that synopsis and continue to read this (not that I have better morals, but come on, enslaving others?)
I love the premise of the story. The MC is a good person but comes to understand that the mindset of the heroes is flaw and this, must take matters into his own hands.
I was interested by the idea of his rebirth in the DC universe with a special set of abilities when reading this DC fanfiction. The way the author incorporates King's talents into the plot keeps the reader interested and concerned in the character's path, which distinguishes this fanfiction from others. The ability to influence others and replicate other people's skills adds a novel twist to the typical superhero genre, and the author's handling of these ramifications keeps the narrative realistic and grounded. Overall, this DC fanfiction is an interesting read that would enthrall any DC world enthusiast. It is a must-read for every fan of the genre because of its carefully designed narrative, captivating characters, and unique perspective on superpowers.
Basically if an incel edgelord has to much time on their hands and writes a ff
Author reapeated everything like 3 times or more and the mc is a giga emo kid thats going through his cringe phase hard, not very good
Don't understand why so many writers give their MC's the ability to copy or steal someone else's ability. that's so unimaginative let me guess, he always compares himself to the strongest beings in the universe and then says he's not that op while winning every fight with no problem right? I'm not a hater, I'm just annoyed to see the same thing almost everywhere
The first 5 chapter just literally reading MC monologues, while he keep repeating himself the same words in a different ways, as if he's a patient with mental issues.
The title is misleading. He can copy the powers of anyone IF he defeats them. This is already nerfing the power and potential of the mc. He would never be able to defeat Nigh-Omnipotent beings (like Monitor Mind, Lucifer Morningstar) unless he found a way to trap them; even then, it is highly unlikely. And also, the whole enslaving thing is genuinely odd and unsettling. Take this as a criticism. No hate.
I must say i have never see such horrible dialog. Most of the story is just describing events and when there is a dialog it feel very unnatural. The MC and other characters talk like robots. They say every out loud and there is no subtext used in the dialogs. you dont need to explain the powers of the seal everytime you use it. Its better to show the reactions of the characters that are sealed and see them figure it out. it also doesnt make sense how the mc was able to knock out reverse flash even if he sneak attacked him, you could have started on a weaker character and build up nicely. The premise of the story is interesting enough even though the MC is too overpowered. Hopefully the writing will get better and i look forward to your future works.
ネタバレを明かす There are times when making an OP MC can back fire and ruin a FanFic. This is one of those times SMH. Just try to read the first chap and it'll be clear for those who can understand.
Opinion hasta el capitulo 2 la premisa es buena, pero la escritura no me gusta mucho, no es por errores, es solo que esta escrito de tal forma en la que ni hay identificacion con el protagonista, ni hay inmersion, como si solo me estas contando cosas, no lo se, no esta mal, pero aburre un poco
MC is is so moral he releases his first victim whilst essentially powerless. This is both his 1st and 2nd flaw. He is stupid and monologues about being a good person and how it is for the greater good whilst spending 2 chapters telling everyone he enslaves the exact details over how he owns them like a manchild.
seems good so far would like too know if there's any "romance" 😏 in this since that mc is a villain that enslaves people.
I question the morals of those who read that synopsis and continue to read this (not that I have better morals, but come on, enslaving others?)
I love the premise of the story. The MC is a good person but comes to understand that the mindset of the heroes is flaw and this, must take matters into his own hands.
I was interested by the idea of his rebirth in the DC universe with a special set of abilities when reading this DC fanfiction. The way the author incorporates King's talents into the plot keeps the reader interested and concerned in the character's path, which distinguishes this fanfiction from others. The ability to influence others and replicate other people's skills adds a novel twist to the typical superhero genre, and the author's handling of these ramifications keeps the narrative realistic and grounded. Overall, this DC fanfiction is an interesting read that would enthrall any DC world enthusiast. It is a must-read for every fan of the genre because of its carefully designed narrative, captivating characters, and unique perspective on superpowers.
Basically if an incel edgelord has to much time on their hands and writes a ff