Really good translation, hardly reads as a chinese fanfic, the story is going in a very different direction that the original which I do like! I'm around chapter 70 and the thing I think the author was reffering to was how battle centric the fanfic has been, battle to battle with very little space for character interactions, though that seems to be changing too with us getting more into the though processes of the characters. So far this has been a very power fantasy read where you don't have to put too much thought into reading and understanding. characters. Small spoiler ahead, read at your own discression. Minor gripe which the fantastic translator shared was how hakai seems to be working or atleast shown + how Buu and Janemba were defeated. I really like how Krillin has been apart of the story and how he's had his own character development, hope he becomes stronger, through ui or some other cool way.
Yes I'm this desprate
Although this chapter isn't R18 it does contain some content not suitable for young children, read with your own discretion.
Reborn As Papa Silva
Anime & Comics · hmak27230
Fantastic!
Chapter 92 – Nah, We’d Win
Dragon Ball Alternative
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
Yeah no worries, I'm somewhere just before namek around chapter 60 something, clearly the story is going in a more serious direction with the occasional joke or three. Loved the part where ____ questioned Ajax about his plans, knowledge and morals.
This was an entity beyond mortal comprehension, a cosmic horror bundled up in the guise of a seemingly innocuous character. Facing this monstrous creation by the mad geniuses at TFS, a creature capable of inducing existential dread down Zeno's spine, is probably one of the few fates more horrifying than the Ultra Divine Water.
Dragon Ball Alternative
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
Oh I LIKE this development!
I love abridged Popo, but him being in this novel just diffused most of the tension the author built up with the slight au changes so far, and what they could mean for the mc going forwards. From Serious novel -> Comedy novel thats occasionally serious. So unfortunate...
This was an entity beyond mortal comprehension, a cosmic horror bundled up in the guise of a seemingly innocuous character. Facing this monstrous creation by the mad geniuses at TFS, a creature capable of inducing existential dread down Zeno's spine, is probably one of the few fates more horrifying than the Ultra Divine Water.
Dragon Ball Alternative
Anime & Comics · Equuleus_Nox
This has been a great binge so far, awesome story
[T/N: Guys, IK some readers were rooting for harem or other stuff, although I don't dislike harems, but I do hate the pathetic harem instant buildups. If this fic had a proper harem build up, I wouldn't mind, like how his relationship with Videl progressed. But that "I came, she saw, I conquered in a chapter" vibes, I hate it to the core. Like, this meeting between Videl and Vados, tf?? Angel Wench just met her, and was like a jealous harlot. Bich just met him a few chapters ago, and acted like she owns him. So I have removed such content from this. Maybe in the end chapters he might have 1000 wives and million concubines, but, if there's no buildup to the relationship, I would just skip over it to avoid the cringiness of insta harem buildups.]
Reborn in Dragon Ball as Son Goten: Start Bonus Ultra Instinct-Sign
Anime & Comics · Clay_Champion