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Ramzi_Mahdi

This story was so good well thought out and everything just disappointed that there hasn’t been any new chapters

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Enlightened_Clown

Like many others, I dropped this novel at chapter 27. But let me be clear—it’s not because I didn’t like where it was headed. No, it’s because of how it got there. It feels like the author had this pre-planned roadmap—destination A to B—and decided, “I don’t care how I get there, as long as I end up at B.” The problem? There were perfectly reasonable, logical paths to take that still lead to B. But no, instead, we get this forced, nonsensical garbage that screams, “I’m doing this because I have to, not because it makes sense.” That one bit was so painfully contrived, so obviously shoved down the reader’s throat, that I just couldn’t stomach it anymore. Forced BS like that completely ruins the immersion. It’s lazy, it’s frustrating, and it’s the reason I’m done.

2mth
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Ashashashasha_bone

the writing quality is great and MC's personality is likeable to me so overall it's a great book

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Mortal_God

is this dropped or just in hiatus ? i really want to know

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_KON
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This is great. I read some of the extra stuff but it doesn't really seem as interesting to me. Though it's still pretty good. 🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡

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cringe_maybe

to be honest before reading this novel I've never really liked or watched the fate series but this is one of the best fan fics in this platform keep it up dude

1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax

Hello, anyone there? Author? Are you gonna keep writing?

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Marcus_whatever

author just a heads up I will kill you if you drops this fic keep it up 👍♥️👍 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

1yr
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EroSpatula

This is really, really good. I haven’t read much of the Fate series fanfics but from what I see, most of it is either being a magus, being Gilgamesh or in a major relation to Scátach Skadi. I like this one a lot, it brings a lot of focus into King Arthur’s story and the MC both in the past and the present without info dumping or showing too much. We don’t ever truly see or hear the ‘MC’ thoughts only from a third person view which hides a lot and makes revealing some of his abilities much more enjoyable to read rather than a wall of text describing the ability’s uses.

1yr
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Baebernumberone

The concept of this fic is quite interesting, and the writing aspects although there are still some flaws, it can still be overlooked. Overall a good fate fic.But will there be a Harem? I hope not, although I don't hate Harem or polygamy, I am quite curious about the continuation of the MC's relationship with Artoria, if there is Harem it will definitely hamper or eliminate the interesting romantic elements of this fic.

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HollowStar

waiting for your long update hahahah I hope you don't drop this fanfic masterpiece

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Jacob_X

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Phoebus_Aphos

Great Fan-Fic... that's all I got to say

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Jacob_X

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The_Dark_Hydrax

Is this dropped?[img=update][img=update]

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_Lykos_
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From the synopsis this genuinely sound like a really good story. Hope the author delivers since I haven’t really read many good fate fanfics.

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Jacob_X

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Alex_167

Amazing[img=recommend][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]

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Lerft_craft

Estoy sinceramente impresionado por como se ha desarrollado la historia, lo leí desde sus inicios, y sigo sorprendiendo me por cada capítulo que sale. Sin duda 10/10.

1yr
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FransizSef

Amazing. I didn't had this much fun while reading a Fate fanfic for a long time. It's refreshing to see a MC that is good. Speed being regonized is also cool. MC's desing is top nocth for a guy like me that LOVES medival armor with little dark souls theme touched on it. His backstory seems cool too but we don't know much sadly. The only thing i'm not a fan of is how King Arthur(i'm not a fan of her so its kinda biased) is displayed. Overall i really enjoed it but for god please don't make him be with Arthur. Ah and i wanna see what youre gonna do about the corruption. Almost every single ff did something with it so what will you do? He can't really destroy it so maybe seal? but i doubt it would work because of certain things. Anyways keep it up i love it.

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Mea_Cu1pa

No hay verdad en la carne, solo traición. No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad. No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia. No hay certeza en la carne, excepto la muerte. Dicen que un par de tetas mueven más que mil carreta.

1yr
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Surtur
LV 15 Badge

First time I read a fate fic and I must say...wow. Just wow. The MC feel like a real fate character and is honestly one of the best OC i ever saw. The dialogue are fluid and natural. Honestly, I love this story and hope it will continue for a awhile.

1yr
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MasterRaceAlien

Easily amongst the best stories i've read with an OC in FSN. Practically feels like the MC was meant to be in the story, and nothing feels forced. Very well done!

1yr
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_Anuar_

just read it. .you will like it.

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NO_YURI_000

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Ramzi_Mahdi

This story was so good well thought out and everything just disappointed that there hasn’t been any new chapters

26d
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Enlightened_Clown

Like many others, I dropped this novel at chapter 27. But let me be clear—it’s not because I didn’t like where it was headed. No, it’s because of how it got there. It feels like the author had this pre-planned roadmap—destination A to B—and decided, “I don’t care how I get there, as long as I end up at B.” The problem? There were perfectly reasonable, logical paths to take that still lead to B. But no, instead, we get this forced, nonsensical garbage that screams, “I’m doing this because I have to, not because it makes sense.” That one bit was so painfully contrived, so obviously shoved down the reader’s throat, that I just couldn’t stomach it anymore. Forced BS like that completely ruins the immersion. It’s lazy, it’s frustrating, and it’s the reason I’m done.

2mth
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Ashashashasha_bone

the writing quality is great and MC's personality is likeable to me so overall it's a great book

7mth
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Mortal_God

is this dropped or just in hiatus ? i really want to know

11mth
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_KON
LV 13 Badge

This is great. I read some of the extra stuff but it doesn't really seem as interesting to me. Though it's still pretty good. 🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡

11mth
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cringe_maybe

to be honest before reading this novel I've never really liked or watched the fate series but this is one of the best fan fics in this platform keep it up dude

1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax

Hello, anyone there? Author? Are you gonna keep writing?

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1yr
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Marcus_whatever

author just a heads up I will kill you if you drops this fic keep it up 👍♥️👍 ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

1yr
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EroSpatula

This is really, really good. I haven’t read much of the Fate series fanfics but from what I see, most of it is either being a magus, being Gilgamesh or in a major relation to Scátach Skadi. I like this one a lot, it brings a lot of focus into King Arthur’s story and the MC both in the past and the present without info dumping or showing too much. We don’t ever truly see or hear the ‘MC’ thoughts only from a third person view which hides a lot and makes revealing some of his abilities much more enjoyable to read rather than a wall of text describing the ability’s uses.

1yr
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Baebernumberone

The concept of this fic is quite interesting, and the writing aspects although there are still some flaws, it can still be overlooked. Overall a good fate fic.But will there be a Harem? I hope not, although I don't hate Harem or polygamy, I am quite curious about the continuation of the MC's relationship with Artoria, if there is Harem it will definitely hamper or eliminate the interesting romantic elements of this fic.

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1yr
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Jacob_X

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1yr
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HollowStar

waiting for your long update hahahah I hope you don't drop this fanfic masterpiece

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1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=update][img=update][img=update]

1yr
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Jacob_X

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1yr
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Phoebus_Aphos

Great Fan-Fic... that's all I got to say

1yr
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Jacob_X

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1yr
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The_Dark_Hydrax

Is this dropped?[img=update][img=update]

1yr
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Jacob_X

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1yr
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_Lykos_
LV 14 Badge

From the synopsis this genuinely sound like a really good story. Hope the author delivers since I haven’t really read many good fate fanfics.

1yr
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Jacob_X

You could try setting alarms. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

1yr
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Jacob_X

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1yr
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Alex_167

Amazing[img=recommend][img=exp][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]

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Lerft_craft

Estoy sinceramente impresionado por como se ha desarrollado la historia, lo leí desde sus inicios, y sigo sorprendiendo me por cada capítulo que sale. Sin duda 10/10.

1yr
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FransizSef

Amazing. I didn't had this much fun while reading a Fate fanfic for a long time. It's refreshing to see a MC that is good. Speed being regonized is also cool. MC's desing is top nocth for a guy like me that LOVES medival armor with little dark souls theme touched on it. His backstory seems cool too but we don't know much sadly. The only thing i'm not a fan of is how King Arthur(i'm not a fan of her so its kinda biased) is displayed. Overall i really enjoed it but for god please don't make him be with Arthur. Ah and i wanna see what youre gonna do about the corruption. Almost every single ff did something with it so what will you do? He can't really destroy it so maybe seal? but i doubt it would work because of certain things. Anyways keep it up i love it.

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1yr
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Mea_Cu1pa

No hay verdad en la carne, solo traición. No hay fuerza en la carne, solo debilidad. No hay constancia en la carne, solo decadencia. No hay certeza en la carne, excepto la muerte. Dicen que un par de tetas mueven más que mil carreta.

1yr
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Surtur
LV 15 Badge

First time I read a fate fic and I must say...wow. Just wow. The MC feel like a real fate character and is honestly one of the best OC i ever saw. The dialogue are fluid and natural. Honestly, I love this story and hope it will continue for a awhile.

1yr
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MasterRaceAlien

Easily amongst the best stories i've read with an OC in FSN. Practically feels like the MC was meant to be in the story, and nothing feels forced. Very well done!

1yr
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_Anuar_

just read it. .you will like it.

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NO_YURI_000

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