Bruh you gave a review of a book based on summary? Brother I use these reviews to filter what to read. And you gave review of the summary like no sh1t Sherlock I can too form my conclusions based on the summary. But write a fking review based on if you liked the book or not, If you liked it, why? and if you didn't like it, also why? Give reasons mf So that it will help both the others and the author too.
Lmao this whole thread(leaving the context aside) sounds like an argument b/w a 12 year old and and AI chat bot.
People tend to view things so negatively these days. Instead of taking feedback as a critique, why not see it as advice? I've noticed that a lot of good books miss out on popularity because their early chapters aren't engaging enough. This isn’t always due to slow pacing but often because new authors are still finding their rhythm in those initial chapters. Many times, authors don’t go back and revise the early chapters even when they’re given constructive feedback, thinking they’ll just apply those insights to later chapters instead. But that approach can lose readers’ interest right from the start. There are so many small factors that can keep a promising novel from gaining traction. So rather than seeing OP's comment as criticism of the author's pacing (especially since he didn’t even mention slowness), think of it as a suggestion to make those early chapters just as captivating as the rest.
3. In the beginning, many things might feel slow. That's because I needed to lay the groundwork for future chapters. Bear with me—things get good.
Talent Awakening: Draconic Overlord Of The Apocalypse
Fantasy · Zurbluris
literally next multiple chapters would be forced bs drama just for the sake of it People have stopped writing good stories rather they just want to churn chapter extending the word count for the sweet money
Well, there was no one to answer that question anyway, so I just closed my eyes.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Yeah the nauseating feeling that mc had and I think I caught that too literally feel like puking reading this forced bs
Well, there was no one to answer that question anyway, so I just closed my eyes.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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Elara's breath hitched, her vision blurring with unshed tears. She had always known Isolde was envious, but she had never imagined it ran this deep this dark. "I loved you, Isolde. I would have shared everything with you. Why this?"
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
bruh this is annoying because we read the same dame line multiple times written differently the annoying thing is not the situation but this shitty line it's like we are being forced fed that he doesn't have memories rather than us coming to that conclusion you know the "Show not tell" shit that's what I talking about
It was such an odd feeling. I felt trapped, unable to comprehend anything that was happening around me.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
Why is a fking translated book is in the original section.
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Hearing Max's joyful bark, Charles smiled with relief. It seemed to like the name.
Global Beast Mastery: Only I Can See the Hints
Fantasy · Yellowpuppy
The need of word bloating more words = more chaps = more $$
But just then, another notification appeared on his vision.
Legendary Broken Player - VRMMORPG
Fantasy · Galanteo