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It's about the rise of Men In Grey -
The First Chapters are based on very much the story of the Protagonist but the real fun starts after Ch : 22 -
The Story has numerous amounts of
nonpredictible plots / plot twists that completely change the story every time -
22 Ch and above are locked one --
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you just know a book is going to be good when it has such a name. I was immediately drawn by the unique style of writing and the way you explored human psychology. it was quite awesome.
I have long been looking for a book that would go in this direction, so I excited to continue reading it, as the first few chapters so far have trapped me in them, making me want to continue reading. Good job author!
Here's my review 😁 Firstly, your book is in a drama sequence that's ok but I'll say prose is better for more reads. Secondly you kept changing from first to third POV and sincerely speaking, it became confusing at some point. Thirdly, I really had a good laugh while reading it 😂😂 some scenes were Soo funny. Also, the names aren't intriguing to be frank and they're quite a few grammatical errors but that's fine... Everybody makes mistakes. I really enjoyed the book While it lasted but unfortunately couldn't move past chapter 14 as it wasn't for me, the plot definitely wasn't for me. However, keep up the good work author! Writing a story isn't an easy feat. I'll commend that I'm really really impressed with your updates... Very! So don't stop writing and updating more chapters. So overall, I'll rate it 3 over 5... Well done author and don't stop writing, you'll definitely find the reader that'll appreciate this lovely story of yours... From night flames #Author Mike.
This is my honest thoughts, I think your writing is superb but it needs to be proofread for grammar mistakes. Your storyline is engaging and full of action which keeps the reader glued to their seat. The descriptions are amazing!
Amazing story, don't know to describe. just amazing work of art. Anyone reading my comment is recommended to try it at once.
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I really like the humor aspect of the story and admire the concept of human psychology that you put through in the story. There are some grammar problems in the early chapters but it doesn't hinder in understanding the flow of the story. Some paragraphs are way too long which are kinda hard to read using mobile phones. Also, there are some cuts or spaces in the first chapter that you forgot to fix. Overall, your story really shows how high standard your skill in writing is. I hope you keep writing more stories since this one is already completed.
The first thing to say would be the unique way of author's writing as this is the first time I read a story written in such a way. And honestly, it is good. Just POV and the third-person perspective confused me at first but then it became clear. Keep it up.
Just starting out but the writing style is unique. Want to see how this story develops.
The storyline is intriguing, and the characters are perfect. The author controlled the pace of the story so well that it enabled readers to have a great read.
It's got a new format I'm not used to, but when you get to it it's a really fun read.
What a great story I can literally feel the sweat and tears coming off the screen. I can tell you out a lot of work init this and I suggest you don't slow down I'm sure soon you'll be at the top of web novel
A great idea developed in a captivating way! The characters are amazing and I'm looking forward to keep witnessing their development. If you're looking for a read that will certainly get you out of boredom, this is it!
This wass soooo cool. I also like the you're expanding the Eastern Fantasy genre. The writing and action is well done. Very recommended
I had read this book long ago but I didn't review it because I abandoned reading for some time. My review: Really super well written kudos to the author. Character names are very funny, the way the human psychology is presented just chef's kiss. I recommend this novel to everyone.
Seems interesting reading the first chapter.... i will continue reading. Am new writer i hope you can check my humble writings, it's different genres, give it a try if possible of course. your recommendations are welcomed
Not my usual cup of tea. But whatever it was, I liked it. The humor was great btw. The characters name are the thing which made me laugh more. Just imagine you are in middle of action and someone call you Mr duck? I would die laughing. Jokes aside, you should edit the chapters. I found many errors in it. In some places you should leave spaces. It’s just my advice but keep up. All the best author. [img=recommend]
I just read the first chapter but what really drew me to the book was the synopsis and the title yet after reading the first chapter I'm attracted to it. I hope it gets more interesting as I read on.
Okay! Now, this is the first time I am encountering this way of writing in webnovel. It is a fresh concept. I read chapter 1 and it is intriguing with a nice twist. Cheering you on author. Keep updating
The best book in my collection that every reader is obliged... hahahaha, truly impressed
Actually, I'm poor at understanding this kind of story. Wow! But this one is easy to read and imagine the scene. Try it! You won't regrer