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Are you tired of long winded novels that take 200 chapters before getting interesting? look no further, pacing here is not fast... It`s SUPERSONIC, you`ll go from sperm to OP super angel in like 13 chapters, and i mean, what can you want more from a novel? small suggestion for the author, ease up on the KEVIN POV etc, i understand why you use them, but seeing 3 pov being exchanged so fast can really spin heads.
Isn't it pretty crazy how long it has been since you started this book. I remember talking with you about it and now when you have so many views you just dropped it. Come on bro, get it back up.
Very good and interesting, the writing is awesome. The mc’s personality is great and overall a very nice read
This is a well written novel that has so much potential. The details are there, the characters internal thoughts, makes a theee dimensional main character that feels like a real person. However, the only thing I don’t like is how the POV switches mid chapter. Maybe find a smoother way of transitioning because it pulls me out of the story occasionally. But it’s an easy fix. You really should read this book if you enjoy a unique story with original worldbuilding.
I love the way the Author could just picture the whole story, the reincarnation and everything. Kevin Paragus is a really interesting character and I know that this book has great potentials. The world background itself is spectacular and amazing. Keep up the good work Author hoping to see more updates[img=recommend]
I'm just a 13 year old writing novels so the chapters may not update on time but please support my work and tell me of any typos in paragraph comments or chapter comments. Thank you and have a nice read.
I'm not Kevlar10_ nor DaoistKevlar10_. I'm here to visit a passionate kid exploring the world of writing. I would like to express my gratitude for young starters who will soon become masters in the future. One piece of advise: Never give up writing, fellow author!
Are you tired of long winded novels that take 200 chapters before getting interesting? look no further, pacing here is not fast... It`s SUPERSONIC, you`ll go from sperm to OP super angel in like 13 chapters, and i mean, what can you want more from a novel? small suggestion for the author, ease up on the KEVIN POV etc, i understand why you use them, but seeing 3 pov being exchanged so fast can really spin heads.
Isn't it pretty crazy how long it has been since you started this book. I remember talking with you about it and now when you have so many views you just dropped it. Come on bro, get it back up.
Very good and interesting, the writing is awesome. The mc’s personality is great and overall a very nice read
This is a well written novel that has so much potential. The details are there, the characters internal thoughts, makes a theee dimensional main character that feels like a real person. However, the only thing I don’t like is how the POV switches mid chapter. Maybe find a smoother way of transitioning because it pulls me out of the story occasionally. But it’s an easy fix. You really should read this book if you enjoy a unique story with original worldbuilding.
I love the way the Author could just picture the whole story, the reincarnation and everything. Kevin Paragus is a really interesting character and I know that this book has great potentials. The world background itself is spectacular and amazing. Keep up the good work Author hoping to see more updates[img=recommend]
I'm just a 13 year old writing novels so the chapters may not update on time but please support my work and tell me of any typos in paragraph comments or chapter comments. Thank you and have a nice read.
I'm not Kevlar10_ nor DaoistKevlar10_. I'm here to visit a passionate kid exploring the world of writing. I would like to express my gratitude for young starters who will soon become masters in the future. One piece of advise: Never give up writing, fellow author!