Mitico

Mitico

male LV 12

I'm a guy that always dreams incredible complex stories, and then forgets about them after 3 chapters.

2017-09-05 入りました Italy
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Mitico
Mitico
5 months ago
Posted

Nothing special or praise worthy. Read the first 7 chapters, and there is basically no premise, overly wordy when nothing is happening and we don’t even get an image of the world. What we know: the mc has gone from a world to another that is exactly the same plus maybe the existence of supernatural, how and when did this happen? We don’t know, it’s just stated. How does he look? Where does he live, what kind of life, anything about him? We don’t know. Anything about the “game”, the world or any characters? Nope, nothing happens or it happens outside the camera. I would give 1 to everything, but the translator still did a decent job so i don’t feel like giving him a bad score.

Mitico
Mitico
11 months ago
Posted

This is pure , unadulterated nonsense, whoever wrote this should feel sad. I gave up at chapter 4. It feels as if a chinese author wrote a chinese mc, then decided that the mc is from the west, even though everything is still chinese. Plot makes little to no sense, the style is garbage and I’m constantly wondering what is going on.

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to RosemainBeckett

Agreed. Either you do what you can to reintegrate a person, or you root out the problem definetly, half measures just lead to more problems.

As for non-violent crime, it would entirely depend on the crime that had been committed. For example, if one were to be convicted of theft, they would lose the hand they used to steal the item. Others included imprisonment for a limited duration, assuming they survived the backbreaking work given to prisoners. They would either fear going back to such a hell or become a repeat offender, thus adding to their three strikes.

Tyranny of Steel

Tyranny of Steel

History · Zentmeister

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to Sachin_AAA

Hi mon ami, good news, i’m coming back home tomorrow, allow me a little bit of rest and i’ll start posting agai.

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to Sachin_AAA

3 done, one last to go on the 12

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to Haplo484

It would have actually been quite a twist, and it’s not like I can’t use it…

Beneath the great shadow of the Orokin Mountain Range, the group of explorers stood poised to venture into the unknown. Their objective lay in the uncharted lands beyond the colossal peaks, a promise of discovery and potential prosperity. The mountain's gnarled heights stood like jagged teeth against the sky, their snow-capped peaks glimmering in the early morning sun as if smiling a cold, foreboding welcome.

Reborn With The Magical Academy System

Reborn With The Magical Academy System

Fantasy · Mitico

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to Haplo484

That’s actually a good point. He does have the ability to burrow underground to make a shelter for himself and the group, so that might have been a last moment solution.

The enormous boulder, accelerated by air magic and strengthened by earth magic hurled down at terminal speed, a deadly projectile guided by Ijekiel's will. The impact was imminent, and the adventurers braced themselves, watching as their sorcerer made his descent, a blazing comet racing towards the heart of the stone monstrosity.

Reborn With The Magical Academy System

Reborn With The Magical Academy System

Fantasy · Mitico

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to Sachin_AAA

Hahahahaha, sorry, but it’s going well, 2 exams are done, two more to go.

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to Sachin_AAA

Hi! Not until end of june i think, i have to prepare for multiple exams and can’t spare the time.

Mitico
Mitico
1 years ago
Replied to Thorai

should i put it at the end of waserschein or ledir?

Ledir Waserschein, also called the Buried Viper, was especially known to Roderick as the man who caused Milovich and Ilira's death.

Reborn With The Magical Academy System

Reborn With The Magical Academy System

Fantasy · Mitico

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