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Systemless in a Parallel World

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作者: HideousGrain

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As the Gods descended onto Earth to bless their children to save them from the threat of extinction, supernatural beings were born with the help of the System.

However, not everyone was blessed.

Zayn was a 'Normie', but he was quite happy about that!

Who the hell needs the Blessing of a God or a spoon-feeding system?

I don't!

As long as I had the Grimoire of the Ancient, some fragmented memories of my past, and my Army of Spirits, not even Gods would dare to look me in the eyes!

(The War aspect won't be present from the initial chapter!)
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    Aida_Mual

    1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .

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    Spities
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    This story is totally uninspired and not worth reading in my opinion. I read the first 60 chapters and so far it's all been incredibly generic. The chapters are short, the characters are one dimentional and have no depth, the plot only exists to serve the main character. The author is writjng 2 books at once and publishing 4 chapters a day and it shows in the writing. entire chapters of this book can be summed up in 1 line and everything is so drawn out for no reason. you just can't write a proper story if you're forcing 4 chapters a day.

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    wounded_warrior

    Really good start! Can't wait to read more about Zayn and his back story. So far so good! Knowing Hide this novel is going to be a really good one.

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    j_maharani

    I love the story and the way you write it. Writing quality, updating stability, story development, character design, and world background are so good. Success for you ❤

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    Auri_Kvothe

    Finished reading the whole book. Will post points on each of the 5 Judging points. SPOILERS AHEAD *************************** Writing Quality: Overall generally good. slight grammatical mistakes that are easily over looked. They are consistent errors so once you're able to know what word to substitute for the written one you're good. There are times when names are mixed up, but again, easy to figure out who is being talked about. Stability of Updates: Book is finished. Nuff said. Story Development: This one gets the lowest rating from me. The pacing is all opver the place, and some time skips are sudden and random with no warning given. Also, around chapter 170/207 the pacing takes such a HUGE leap. we go from this guys day to day, to suddenly we're rushing the ending, introducing new kingdoms and entire story lines, with only 30 chapters or less left. The first 100ish chapters had great pacing, and while there were issues with him doing things it's clearly stating he can't, it's good. But then he's suddenly one of the most powerful in the entire dimension? (trying to avoid giving direct spoilers) It feels like Author just got tired of his story and threw in the kitchen sink and everything else, wrapped it up with some random time travel and said good enough. Character Design: Zayne is very well designed. He's well fleshed out and easy to comprehend. The other characters Author takes the time to have him really interact with are also well designed. World Background: MC clearly has memory loss, and in the first half of the novel, Author really draws you in. He makes you want to learn more about this massive realm with the MC. And then he tosses it all down the drain at the end. OVERALL: Decent read. Not Authors best work. Possibly his worst. Rushed ending killed any excitement I had for the novel. Would recommend? No. Would recommend the Author for having a decent writing style? absolutely.

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    m_P3rch
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    Really good novel. Quite intriguing, nice pacing and quite unexpected end. Thank you author!

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    Aaron_Koss_5306

    I really enjoyed reading this story, it was engaging and captured my attention all the way from beginning till the end.Thank you.

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    Viduus
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    just like his other stories this one is nicely done as well. oddly though the more I read of this story the more I find self not really caring about the mc and the story itself. I am really interested in the other side, the people with the systems. is there any chance we could get a story from their side or maybe a new story. a story with systems with glyphs on people. idk this story is nicely done but for some reason does not hold my attention like your other stories have.

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    Jayden_orgin

    I’v read the authors other books, and with how good those were, I think I’ll be sticking around. I’m not sure if I’ll like it, but it’s worth a try

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    Ana_musings

    If the title doesn't intrigue you enough already, the author's unique spin on Grimoires definitely will. What are you waiting for? Just start reading and indulge yourself in this story!

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    What can you expect from a good author? Great Story, a great experience knowing what his readers want, and most importantly, how to excite their readers to be mesmerized by their story. And all of this is just the beginning as the author creates a Universe where all of his books are interlinked, making it to wait in excitement for his upcoming works!!!! [img=update]

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    Emmanuel_Peter203

    I was passing through webnovel in search of a book to read and ended up here and I totally did not regret reading this novel. The only problem with this novel is there is not enough chapter to read xd. It's a pity really lol. It was also written by a popular author on webnovel so this says a lot in the quality of the book. Hopefully the next time I come here, it has more chapters.

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    Ishda_Lala

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    1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled (Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .

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    TrueDawn

    It goes without saying that the author's novels are good. Even this one is no exception. I'd suggest you read it.

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    Chapter 207: Primordial 1 years ago

    卷 1

    1. 1
      Parallel World [Prologue] 1 years ago
    2. 2
      Freak 1 years ago
    3. 3
      The System 1 years ago
    4. 4
      Lie 1 years ago
    5. 5
      Poor 1 years ago
    6. 6
      Mysterious Cave 1 years ago
    7. 7
      Soul Wisp 1 years ago
    8. 8
      First Page 1 years ago
    9. 9
      Understanding 1 years ago
    10. 10
      Squashed 1 years ago
    11. 11
      Torn apart 1 years ago
    12. 12
      Spirit Manifestation 1 years ago
    13. 13
      [Human Spirit] 1 years ago
    14. 14
      Powerhouse 1 years ago
    15. 15
      Back in Town 1 years ago
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      Barter 1 years ago
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      Adventurer Hall 1 years ago
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      Bottom-line 1 years ago
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      Normie King 1 years ago
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      Union 1 years ago
    21. 21
      Distraction 1 years ago
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      Wilderness 1 years ago
    23. 23
      First Blood 1 years ago
    24. 24
      Ablaze 1 years ago
    25. 25
      Double Trouble 1 years ago
    26. 26
      Soul Shard 1 years ago
    27. 27
      Hunting the Hunters 1 years ago
    28. 28
      Power of Spirits 1 years ago
    29. 29
      Unfounded Arrogance 1 years ago
    30. 30
      The Priest 1 years ago
    31. 31
      Drunkards 1 years ago
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      Soulframe 1 years ago
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      Adventurer Inn 1 years ago
    34. 34
      God's doing 1 years ago
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      Growing Stigma 1 years ago
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      Drunk 1 years ago
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      Greed 1 years ago
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      Satisfaction 1 years ago
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      Misconception 1 years ago
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      Bar Fight 1 years ago
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      Bloody Bar 1 years ago
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      Assassination 1 years ago
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      Found out 1 years ago
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      Smooth Ride 1 years ago
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      Special Trait 1 years ago
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      Agile Human Spirit 1 years ago
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      From Riches to Rags 1 years ago
    48. 48
      Advice, Warning, Threat 1 years ago
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      Not Again... 1 years ago
    50. 50
      Code Red 1 years ago
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      Joining the Defenses 1 years ago
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      Undead Outbreak 1 years ago
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      The Power of Blessed 1 years ago
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      Improving 1 years ago
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      Obstacle 1 years ago
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      Spirits vs Undead 1 years ago
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      Dead 1 years ago
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      Pretending 1 years ago
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      Conquered Lands 1 years ago
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      Target: Mount 1 years ago
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      Pursuit 1 years ago
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      The Father 1 years ago
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      Fool 1 years ago
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      Father vs. Son 1 years ago
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      Might of Powder 1 years ago
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      Resurrected 1 years ago
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      The Village 1 years ago
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      1st Soulring 1 years ago
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      Time 1 years ago
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      The Great Legions 1 years ago
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      City 1 years ago
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      Pleasant 1 years ago
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      Search 1 years ago
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      Spar 1 years ago
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      Waste of Time 1 years ago
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      D-rank Mission 1 years ago
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      Destruction 1 years ago
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      Gluttony Termite Queen 1 years ago
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      Ablaze 1 years ago
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      Annihilation 1 years ago
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      The Power of Glutton 1 years ago
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      Merchant 1 years ago
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      New Pages 1 years ago
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      Soul Guidance 1 years ago
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      The Dojo 1 years ago
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      Assassin?! 1 years ago
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      One-Armed Saber technique 1 years ago
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      The Mission 1 years ago
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      Accepted? 1 years ago
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      Weaponsmith 1 years ago
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      Good Boy! 1 years ago
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      Titan, the Dwarf 1 years ago
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      Dragontale Twin Sabers 1 years ago
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      Artifacts 1 years ago
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      Countdown 1 years ago
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      Poor & Beaten 1 years ago
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      Beaten 2.0 1 years ago
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      Hellish training 1 years ago
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      Lectures 1 years ago
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      The Last Lecture 1 years ago
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      Defeating Merlin? 1 years ago
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      Habit 1 years ago
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      Soulring Ranking 1 years ago
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      Passion? 1 years ago
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      Power-Up 1 years ago
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      Colosseum 1 years ago
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      Human Nature 1 years ago
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      The Gambler 1 years ago
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      Arena 1 years ago
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      Take it all! 1 years ago
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      108x 1 years ago
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      Provoking 1 years ago
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      Saber 1 years ago
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      Bigger Scale 1 years ago
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      All-in 2.0 1 years ago
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      Invincible? 1 years ago
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      Suicidal 1 years ago
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      Special Bet? 1 years ago
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      Suite 1 years ago
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      Order 1 years ago
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      Robbed the Colosseum 1 years ago
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      God's Era Museum 1 years ago
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      Into the ruin! 1 years ago
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      Three-headed Chimera 1 years ago
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      Ablaze 1 years ago
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      Insane 1 years ago
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      Bane of the Frozen Curse 1 years ago
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      Limit 1 years ago
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      Joy and Desperation 1 years ago
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      Silvermoon Bracelet 1 years ago
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      Expensive Saintess 1 years ago
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      Wronged 1 years ago
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      Armed to the teeth 1 years ago
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      In the hundreds 1 years ago
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      Unleashed 1 years ago
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      Soul Knight Spirit 1 years ago
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      Nearing the End 1 years ago
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      Isn't it funny? 1 years ago
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      Tilan's End 1 years ago
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      Spoiled Normie 1 years ago
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      Glutton, the Devourer 1 years ago
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      New Target 1 years ago
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      Winged Serpents 1 years ago
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      Plan 1 years ago
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      Soulframe 1 years ago
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      Pages 1 years ago
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      Memories 1 years ago
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      Relations? 1 years ago
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      Commanders and Soldiers 1 years ago
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      Lesser Earth Dragon 1 years ago
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      Normies and Blessed 1 years ago
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      Normie Leader 1 years ago
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      Mysterious Stranger 1 years ago
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      Hunting Unit 1 years ago
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      Silverflame Camp 1 years ago
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      Merit Points 1 years ago
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      Survival of the fittest 1 years ago
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      Camaraderie? Can you eat that? 1 years ago
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      Legatus 1 years ago
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      Join the Camp? 1 years ago
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      Tower 1 years ago
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      New Member 1 years ago
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      Generous 1 years ago
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      Forced 1 years ago
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      Petty Oldies 1 years ago
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      Quality Time 1 years ago
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      Challenge? 1 years ago
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      Worth it 1 years ago
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      Heat 1 years ago
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      Combat 1 years ago
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      Breezing~ 1 years ago
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      Breezing~ (2) 1 years ago
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      Breezing~ (3) 1 years ago
    177. 177
      Breezing~ (4) 1 years ago
    178. 178
      Giant King 1 years ago
    179. 179
      Real Rewards 1 years ago
    180. 180
      Normie Union 1 years ago
    181. 181
      The Stolen Grimoire 1 years ago
    182. 182
      Theory and Reality 1 years ago
    183. 183
      Enticing Offer 1 years ago
    184. 184
      Shock after shock 1 years ago
    185. 185
      Demon 1 years ago
    186. 186
      Opportunity 1 years ago
    187. 187
      Attacking the Back 1 years ago
    188. 188
      Soul Adel 1 years ago
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      Worst of the worst 1 years ago
    190. 190
      Exposed 1 years ago
    191. 191
      Heroic Blessing 1 years ago
    192. 192
      Worn out 1 years ago
    193. 193
      Hero Spirits and Infernals 1 years ago
    194. 194
      Demon King 1 years ago
    195. 195
      Liberation War - Demon 1 years ago
    196. 196
      Liberation War - Demon (2) 1 years ago
    197. 197
      Liberation War - Demon (3) 1 years ago
    198. 198
      Liberation War - Demon (4) 1 years ago
    199. 199
      Liberation War - Blessed 1 years ago
    200. 200
      Liberation War - Blessed (2) 1 years ago
    201. 201
      Omni Soulring 1 years ago
    202. 202
      Divine King 1 years ago
    203. 203
      Divine King (2) 1 years ago
    204. 204
      Divine Lifeform 1 years ago
    205. 205
      Time and Space 1 years ago
    206. 206
      Time and Space (2) 1 years ago
    207. 207
      Primordial 1 years ago

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