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Pretty great story, although it hasn’t updated for a long time I encourage you to continue writing this I doubt you will and it’s disapointing that you definitely won’t
Good fanfic. There are no threats that appear out of nowhere and the protagonist does not have that isekai desperation, which makes the protagonists do things under the table to prepare themselves for the threat that follows as if their lives depended on it. The protagonist is going through emotional phases... that I don't see as unrealistic, but neither overwhelmingly annoying or very dramatic. Yes, they are emotions, but don't let yourself be overwhelmed by them just because. There is an explanation. The reason why he trains has an explanation and etc. Everything is well done. He hoped this fanfic would go far.
As someone currently biased towards this particular kind of fan fiction I am giving a generous rating so that I may continue to read this when there are more chapters available.
Up till this point in writing this is as good story as it gets. Keep up the good work and update more.
I like it he usbt some mindless beast he controls himself of what u have read so far. thank you for sharing please don't drop.
Just by not being a harem, your is the best saiyan in dc so far, and yeah that is a fanfic category now, its a cool trend, I hope you will not drop the story like the others did.
more more more moreeeeeeeee!!!!! Update update update. On of the best sayian in dc fics ever
As of chapter 6, I have to say, this is one of the best saiyan/DC fanfic I've ever read; very good protagonist, grammar and character development. I can't wait for more chapters. Thank you
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I Really don’t want to give reviews coz there are only 5 chapters currently, but the anticipation for the story makes up for it. Good story and character building so far. There is another novel with the same concept, but this felt different. Mc felt vulnerable and felt real. But I hope the mc won’t be edgy and arrogant. The only problem im this novel rn is not enough chapters. Hey author please rectify that.
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I love this novel. I love how everything is explained and shown, I love the fact that being in a Saiyan body is different from a human is acknowledged. I love the logic of how a person would react. Although there is a very glaring problem with it as a whole. It doesn't have nearly enough chapters.
The development so far is excellent, I just didn't like the panic part, but it's understandable if you think about it, not like the typical stories that don't even pass a chapter and they already do everything they apart from that, they want to wait for more chapters and see how the story continues
Pretty good so far writing wise and story potential wise. Not enough chapters to see for sure how it will go but I would definitely give this a read.
Great approach here , starting with a different and interesting development. Looking forward to it. Hey by the way, author are you hona continue the " MCU : Hanma " story , cause i kinda liked it
Its good so far (Ch3) and ive got nothing to complain about. Also don't worry about the panicking part since its pretty logical for someone in his place to think like that... except if its a mentally deranged and obsessed with isekai kind of person. Looking forward for the next chapter.
For now I'm going to wait for more chapters, since as you said at the beginning the mc is going to panic and that kind of thing, and that's just going to give me chills, so I'll wait for more chapters, so at least I know that the mc got over that situation.
what's the update schedule gonna be like? I really enjoyed the first three chapters. Usually I wait till atleast 14-15 but got curious due the debate in your content section lol.
I read the synopsis, looks good but the only part that confused me was the 'still a normal human' part, and the title says saiyan... So I hope you don't nerf him for 0 reason,
Pretty great story, although it hasn’t updated for a long time I encourage you to continue writing this I doubt you will and it’s disapointing that you definitely won’t
Good fanfic. There are no threats that appear out of nowhere and the protagonist does not have that isekai desperation, which makes the protagonists do things under the table to prepare themselves for the threat that follows as if their lives depended on it. The protagonist is going through emotional phases... that I don't see as unrealistic, but neither overwhelmingly annoying or very dramatic. Yes, they are emotions, but don't let yourself be overwhelmed by them just because. There is an explanation. The reason why he trains has an explanation and etc. Everything is well done. He hoped this fanfic would go far.
As someone currently biased towards this particular kind of fan fiction I am giving a generous rating so that I may continue to read this when there are more chapters available.
Up till this point in writing this is as good story as it gets. Keep up the good work and update more.
I like it he usbt some mindless beast he controls himself of what u have read so far. thank you for sharing please don't drop.
Just by not being a harem, your is the best saiyan in dc so far, and yeah that is a fanfic category now, its a cool trend, I hope you will not drop the story like the others did.
more more more moreeeeeeeee!!!!! Update update update. On of the best sayian in dc fics ever
As of chapter 6, I have to say, this is one of the best saiyan/DC fanfic I've ever read; very good protagonist, grammar and character development. I can't wait for more chapters. Thank you
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I Really don’t want to give reviews coz there are only 5 chapters currently, but the anticipation for the story makes up for it. Good story and character building so far. There is another novel with the same concept, but this felt different. Mc felt vulnerable and felt real. But I hope the mc won’t be edgy and arrogant. The only problem im this novel rn is not enough chapters. Hey author please rectify that.
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I love this novel. I love how everything is explained and shown, I love the fact that being in a Saiyan body is different from a human is acknowledged. I love the logic of how a person would react. Although there is a very glaring problem with it as a whole. It doesn't have nearly enough chapters.
The development so far is excellent, I just didn't like the panic part, but it's understandable if you think about it, not like the typical stories that don't even pass a chapter and they already do everything they apart from that, they want to wait for more chapters and see how the story continues
Pretty good so far writing wise and story potential wise. Not enough chapters to see for sure how it will go but I would definitely give this a read.
Great approach here , starting with a different and interesting development. Looking forward to it. Hey by the way, author are you hona continue the " MCU : Hanma " story , cause i kinda liked it
Its good so far (Ch3) and ive got nothing to complain about. Also don't worry about the panicking part since its pretty logical for someone in his place to think like that... except if its a mentally deranged and obsessed with isekai kind of person. Looking forward for the next chapter.
For now I'm going to wait for more chapters, since as you said at the beginning the mc is going to panic and that kind of thing, and that's just going to give me chills, so I'll wait for more chapters, so at least I know that the mc got over that situation.
what's the update schedule gonna be like? I really enjoyed the first three chapters. Usually I wait till atleast 14-15 but got curious due the debate in your content section lol.
I read the synopsis, looks good but the only part that confused me was the 'still a normal human' part, and the title says saiyan... So I hope you don't nerf him for 0 reason,
Will there be any updates in the near future?