I know I said I was going to rewrite, but I still have to find the time. I reformulated the first three chapters by increasing them and changing the MC's powers. Now instead of SHADOWS and DARKNESS, he has for now SHADOWS and SOUL. But I anticipate that I will still follow the logic of receiving a fragment of Lucifer's soul to provide a justification for faster potential growth and being able to access the Lucifer clan's ability related to LIGHT.
I also made a chapter 4, I'll post this one in a hurry. But maybe I'll delete it again to reformulate it. It was more to try to get the MC to start interacting with others, I want to try to start developing a personality for the poor guy.
Chapter 5 is being written following the change I made, it will precede Nero's departure to the Naberius family, which will probably occur at the end of chapter 5 or beginning of 6.
Chap 1: 2355 words
Chap 2: 2198 words
Chap 3: 2135 words
Chap 4: 3638 words
Chap 5: 1758 words?