A Druid In Game Of Thrones

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KuroWashi1903

I know the grammer needs work but this is my first project, plz go little easy on me, but i always welcome constructive criticism. i m trying to better my writing so you all can enjoy this story, like i said in the Synopsis this is going to be a slow burn story, mc will get weak to strong slowly.

LV 1

hde

To many abilities. Just the druid thing was enough and personally I'm not a big fan of giving up memories of the world. But overal it's pretty decent.

LV 13

BryndenRivers

I actually really like this story and feel it CAN grow to be something really fun to read. However, we're over 50 chapters in and it's STILL just MC constantly training and being pretty prideful when, as a smallfolk, that's just asking for enemies. Also the chapters are pretty short, the update schedule is really good though so it's not that bad. I don't know how I feel about losing his knowledge of the GoT world because at the rate he's going, I don't see him being any more than a household guard or a nomad that travels. If he is a commoner and has no future knowledge of the GoT world, I really don't see him being of any real importance in the canon storyline besides being good with a sword.

LV 3

Arrowinmyknee

80 chapter long filler/training arc. Interesting idea but slow and boring to read. You can skip easily 5 chapters without having missed anything. Timeline of the story makes no sense it's off by around 10 years (281 was Roberts Rebellion in Canon and Robb and Jon birth, here they are 7-8 years old.) I believe so no idea how far away from the story beginning we are at least 4 years which took already 80 chapters training/filler. Not really a good read, no idea why there only are 5 star review.

LV 14

Supreme_Order

The mc never gets his mind into the medival society. The author made him a commoner with too many OP gifts. He believes as if he is invincible and opposes everyone. Nobles will directly kill him off for half the things he did. He is still a kid till this point of plot. Well its a fanfic maybe the future plot can get better.

LV 5

Fito

the story is average and cliche but that's normal, the story is slow, it would be nice if the mc plans to travel and learn more about magic, the mc seems to have some ambitions, apart from training he doesn't do much to prepare for the future, he doesn't even have a henchman.

LV 4

Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Average (could've been better if it's not too long winded). WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought/structured storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: With a slow to average pace development which focus too much on MC's character building which is affecting the story & MC progression that created a couple of plot holes. Btw, story is still on early pace (Robb & Jon 11years old) MC is 10yrs old as of Chapter 50. 2/5 CD: MC is a SI-OC (5x learning in all aspect & druidic magik) this could've been better if he utilizes his previous life experiences & foreknowledge of GOT/ASOIAFverse. MC is quick witted but lacks maturity which author-san kept on saying that he is matured that is so confusing. In addition, he has adult mentality which author-san kept on mentioning but can't adapt to a medieval lifestyle with a his boon of 5x learning that is so contradicting. Up until chapter 50 MC's persona is still in building pace with his 5x learning and previous life experiences plus his foreknowledge of the world. 2/5 US: The speed of upload or update of chapters is on par with the quality of this FF. 3/5 WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed any other branch of magic or part of the magic world explored. 4/5 Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

LV 4

CONNER_Jackson

has great potential but have to ask what you mean 500 chapter? like you want this story to go on for that long?

LV 13

JDog04

The story was okay at first but when author gets to chapter 150 or so starts using ai completely ruined the novel for me and not most of the chapters are like a Chinese light novel explaining stuff just in details none stop. A lot of authors are using so and it’s ruining their stories please stop using it and write it your self. I love the beginning of the story but it now another great book ruined by ai book writing.

LV 3

Manmaman

the mc is entertaining to read and the characters have personality mc's "hack" is useful and is not op, at least for now, the writing quality is of good quality even translating it with google-cha horario de actualizaciones razonable 😘😘

LV 4

CaringSoul

I personally didn't like this fan fiction... literally don't understand if he was given blessing to reinfarnate and save the world... why he promotes the old gods while he has no connection to them or their powers... this is like deceiving the whole world... and then making yourself like you are god's avatar and frightening other non believers... just not my cup of tea

LV 4

Lazy_Fox111

The author can tell a story but I can't really feel the culture of the setting, I'm not expecting any Shakespearean dialogue but you could have at least made it so that the dialogues are closer to the setting. Also, please try to be consistent with the terms you're using.

LV 2

Arion_Sturmklinge

Great story i hope you keep up the good work ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

LV 3

Storm_Killer

I don't know, I only read 30 chapters and couldn't put it down. The characters are frankly cardboard, the world is not very well drawn, the actions of the characters are frankly strange. This is the world of the Middle Ages, where kindness has clear boundaries and insulting someone important is easier than chopping down a tree. Kudos to the author for trying, but as far as I'm concerned it's a rather unsuccessful work.... The main character is a grown man, but his desires and actions are not just childish but idiotic, it is not clear what he is striving for (personally, not globally), his development as a human being is not visible.

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Bruno_daniel_1261

Estou acompanhando está história desde o começo, no início estava meio desorganizada, mas está nota representa a história como está agora, muito boa e divertida de ler, abraços do Brasil.

LV 2

BEAST_OP

Nice work. Keep doing it , and please update daily. I love this book ,🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🤠🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶

LV 4

DuncanIneau

Read it. Its fabulous how it made me read it all in one go without losing any interest in it. In this story you'll find Game Of Throne (A series I don't like and a book I didn't read) and some D&D or somethingy and it flow perfectly. Really Author thanks for the amazing reading . . . But I still want more ! Please just Read It. Sorry for my horrible writing. Have a nice day !

LV 1

Dblinked

Story development was good with very few loopholes. Characters are very real, the interactions and reactions of people are very rational, The plot is also smooth(the author know how to grasp the rhythm, so theres no boring chapter, no exaggerated or monotonous plots or so whatever etc.,)... Overall, its almost perfect. The only thing is that, MCs characters is annoying (which I understand since the author already explain that it was because of his brain being undeveloped), he kept acting like a modern guy even if knew that he was in medieval aristocratic world. He always had this 'equality' mentality that almost got him killed many times, if it wasn't for his talent and Stark's protection. And the way he act demanding infront of Ned Stark? Honestly i found it very uncharacteristic for a noble to act like Ned Stark do.. Sure he was good in nature, but even so, there's a limit. Anyway, i know that many annoying actions of MCs is a part of character development, as long as he learned, its good for me, that's all.

LV 4

Coco2

I really enjoy reading your story although there can be found some grammar mistakes but overall it quite good. Hope you keep writing this since it has potential to be a very entertaining story.