/ Fantasy / The Crone's Love
概要
This novel is in dual POV.
Two People. Two Eras.
What will happen if they collide?
Will they clash or form a bond unseen?
Will there be another time, or will it just go through a cycle, repeating itself in a repetition of themselves?
***
Everyone has heard of Crones in fantasy novels, haven't they?
You know, those ancient ladies that pop up now and then giving mysterious messages to the protagonists when they need it. They have always facinated me.
But... not enough to become one.
Lillian Quill.
That's my name. Or was, regretfully.
I loved to read fantasy novels and escape from my reality. But I didn't expect the forsaken God to fulfil my wishes and reincarnate me into one of these novels.
I am Lilith. The All-knowing Crone now, unfortunately. And what you are about to read, is my story.
***
Albion De'Brounche. The notorious Casanova of London.
Well, I was.
Now, facing the wrath of God, I am "Eden." An unknown plebian.
If you do not know the term, I am a commoner. Like you.
Faced with a world of creatures, unexisting in Earth, I'm driven to absolute madness.
Yes, a madness with you as the cure.
Be that as it may, I am Eden. Whether I'm pleased with it or not. And you are about to read my journey in this horrendous world.
Off you go to read, you don't want to lose my favour and deal with Lily now do you?
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Hello hello, dear author... I read a few of first chapters. I am happy to say this is so satisfying. Added to the library already. I don't know why but, When I reached here by the link, I saw that the word "crone's" is like "crone'S" May be it's because I came here from the site. Anyways love the story. But I have a suggestion. You can make your book cover better. The spellings are not clear in the cover. But I don't know if it's only for me. Anyways do as u wish... Keep going author.. i wish you best..❤️
'This will be my first time riding a review but I honestly feel like that it is well warranted for the scale of potential this story has this is honestly a diamond in the rough then I can completely see if it becomes one of the top 10 someday if enough people are you able to see it but I guess that is left to us the First Commerce and find stuff like this the ones that go out their way and search but I'm getting off track I just wanted to come over here and just give my mind and you know tell everybody how good this novel was'
This is so good, I love the way you described the magical transformation, you've got a good plot, the details are amazing, I'm English so I can't really understand some of those symbols you use before the characters POV aside that I'm liking where this is going 🙂
The novel itself is amazing, the way that the author describes each event that is happening in the novel is very detailed and the characters that you use is really cool as well. The story that your going for is really going well from my point of view and there are not a lot of flaws in your book in my opinion. But there are flaws like a bunch of your paragraphs are a bit long which may be off putting to some readers but not all so it isn't something you need to change that much but I just suggest you do. Then the way you transition to each POV in each chapter needs a bit of work since you can't always switch it after every chapter as what I've read in other dual POV novels. But all in all the novel is great, the story is great and I totally recommend reading it if you love fantasy and romance.