I am sorry. But I can't lie to you or myself, If i force it. You're gonna see something I'm not passionate or proud about and its going to ruin the book even further.
ch 39 38. I don't know.
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
No problems
ch 34 33. Sex and Sakura
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
Yeah, took a bit of inspo from the raphtalia slave scene
ch 16 15. Back to square one
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
What do you mean?
ch 13 12. Unique
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
T-T
ch 33 32. Hunter Valley
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
Edited, thanks for that:)
ch 31 30. House of horror’s
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
You
It was not her problem.
Games · MiuNovels
No problem
ch 22 21. Out the window
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
Also don’t forget that this is shortly after Elizabeth’s death, he just met a real friend, someone that made him laugh. Killing her is a gruesome task to carry out. And don’t mistake it, he was angry at her but he’d help her get away from the Faction after that he wouldn’t see her again. he didn’t forgive her.
ch 15 14. Queen Bee
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
Thanks for commenting but my MC isn’t a born killer, he understands the act he is carrying out. Killing someone isn’t an easy thing to do, he still has nightmares about Elizabeth’s death. While my MC is relatively smart, (mostly game sense) he didn’t just want to kill someone he knew that’s all, especially after he killed X.
ch 15 14. Queen Bee
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
First things first, your paraphraphs are too bulky. Cutting them down would help with fluidity and working on your punctuations will too
ch 13 A Treatise On Photon Processing For Quantum Information Retrieval
Sci-fi · hamzaskhaan
Wasn’t planning on :)
ch 0 3 2. The Star Idol Labyrinth
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
Yeahhh, if you have any questions be sure to ask.
ch 15 14. Queen Bee
Games · Jeffery_XXVI
T-T thank you kind citizen, your words have helped sooth my aching fingers.
Thank you, there should be a noticeable difference in the coming chapters
"One more." Benjamin said while looking Xiao directly in the eye, if he couldn't take this opponent down there was no way he would be able to take down his brother.
Sports · Jeffery_XXVI
Yeah, that was a big part of what i tried to create. But I’m thinking about stopping it. What do you think?
"One more." Benjamin said while looking Xiao directly in the eye, if he couldn't take this opponent down there was no way he would be able to take down his brother.
Sports · Jeffery_XXVI
Lets just say, 2022
The plane touched down and he walked toward the cab that waited for him, he had just finished scouting in Korea and he had one more player to scout before he could have a good night's rest. Horace Parker was the name on everybody's mouths. Despite it being a smaller scene for soccer, his name was mentioned on multiple news channels that called him the next Messi.
Sports · Jeffery_XXVI
I'm sorry it came to this, thank you for sticking by me through Visceral Online. And I hope you will continue to support me through out my other projects. (of which I'm making a soccer book and crime filled fantasy)
ch 39 38. I don't know.
MMORPG: Visceral Online
Games · Jeffery_XXVI