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I really liked the beginning of this fanfic, but for me, the protagonist's past was too mysterious. From what I understand, he was probably adopted by a very powerful goddess. I keep wondering—couldn't he just be a normal person who was reincarnated? Somehow, he always has to be an incredible mercenary who was chosen by a goddess and is super special because of it. Sorry if I ended up venting a little, but this fanfic has a lot of potential, and I really liked the overpowered protagonist! (google translate)
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more author-san. fire more more more more more more more more more . shishishishi [img=recommend]
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I gave all five other than Updating Stability. We all know why. Though it is not a problem. For those who want to read Duolou Dalu fan fic, this one is one of the best. by the way, author, this book image, is it Kafka?
Bro nine cloud make another soul land 1 fanfic since your other fanfic is becoming less n less attractive maybe you make a fanfic where mc reincarnated as tang san and gained a system causing many other martial soul well dont put wincest in that but make bibi dong a harem member please i hv read many novel but all of em are all about getting ass of tang san not a single have my respect but your work are top teir so please make one please and also if you can reply me if you would make or not😊
One of the few authors that has stayed the same while also being very good at keeping plot together. Theirs no dumb shit and if theirs a nerf it goes away quick while plot is intense it's rewarding unlike new novels where mc just faces constant setbacks and nerfs while author slapping the OP protag tag on it. Yeah this novel did OP protag good no wonder I never shit talked this author.
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De mis favoritas vale realmente la pena me gusto de principio a fin Lo recomiendo mucho :) ........................................................................................ Lo lei hasta el 380 espero más capítulos muy recomendado
Thank you for the story i enjoy it, It is just me but i think the yandere are not yandere enough
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well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.
good, but the author made Dalu's douluo strength level, even though I think the douluo strength level is low
Интересный фанфик с полный чудесный системы удач, жду драка бога тана сана.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Hey author, was wondering if I could borrow that SYSTEM idea of yours? Really great btw:) Hoping to use it in my fic. Just letting you know:))
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it's a great fanfic, nice to pass time,,,,,,,,, but after returning from dxd it felt strangely boring like his interaction with those shrek kids, cause he is a very powerful and i dislike the tag hiding your true strength. Also miss the upgrading ticket.
This novel is awesome, but the only problem is, the woman, because this author seems to have a certain issue. Pain is not a sensation one can derive pleasure from, particularly when it pertains to women, as they typically do not derive any enjoyment from it. The fact that all the female characters in his novel exhibit a masochistic disposition is rather illogical. It would be more coherent if they were all inclined towards sadism rather than masochism.
I think you should change the cover of the novel yelan is good but I already have her as a character in game ,those who know her will lose their interest after seeing that photo because everyone wants something new bro cheer up and change it to something that looks beautiful and much sexier
Bikin Ngakak namanya wkwk ..........................................,.......................................................................................
I expected it to be a fierce action and light harem novel until chapter 69 and some "Broken Mind" chapters trully shocked me☠️ Although I don really have a problem, please reduce the hardcore😅
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good story and I enjoyed it, maybe the drawback is that it is too ua and too many oc characters so that the characters in the original work story don't really have a role, you can say that the original characters who can be said to be additional characters turn into low-level npc characters who don't need their presence, and this makes the characters who have an important role in the original story turn into supporting characters who pass by because they don't really affect the plat in general.
I really liked the beginning of this fanfic, but for me, the protagonist's past was too mysterious. From what I understand, he was probably adopted by a very powerful goddess. I keep wondering—couldn't he just be a normal person who was reincarnated? Somehow, he always has to be an incredible mercenary who was chosen by a goddess and is super special because of it. Sorry if I ended up venting a little, but this fanfic has a lot of potential, and I really liked the overpowered protagonist! (google translate)
ネタバレを明かす more author-san. fire more more more more more more more more more . shishishishi [img=recommend]
ネタバレを明かす I gave all five other than Updating Stability. We all know why. Though it is not a problem. For those who want to read Duolou Dalu fan fic, this one is one of the best. by the way, author, this book image, is it Kafka?
Bro nine cloud make another soul land 1 fanfic since your other fanfic is becoming less n less attractive maybe you make a fanfic where mc reincarnated as tang san and gained a system causing many other martial soul well dont put wincest in that but make bibi dong a harem member please i hv read many novel but all of em are all about getting ass of tang san not a single have my respect but your work are top teir so please make one please and also if you can reply me if you would make or not😊
One of the few authors that has stayed the same while also being very good at keeping plot together. Theirs no dumb shit and if theirs a nerf it goes away quick while plot is intense it's rewarding unlike new novels where mc just faces constant setbacks and nerfs while author slapping the OP protag tag on it. Yeah this novel did OP protag good no wonder I never shit talked this author.
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De mis favoritas vale realmente la pena me gusto de principio a fin Lo recomiendo mucho :) ........................................................................................ Lo lei hasta el 380 espero más capítulos muy recomendado
Thank you for the story i enjoy it, It is just me but i think the yandere are not yandere enough
Muito bom [img=coins][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
well why there are no negative reviews...well whatever. work is great , op MC and harem well its all go I guess.but why he is giving his mother so much attention I don't hate but for some reason I can't connect with her other harem members are more likeable to me I mean she is doing nothing but still she got all the benefits and became most powerful , management is done by someone else , training is done by someone else , work where required power is done by MC ,why is she there if she is why she got best of all things I mean just act spoiled all day and even her love is made up of illusion she was yandere for his father but after mind wash by illusion she got hota for MC. Her love is real or not i don't even know. why did she become the main wife. also the character of MC is confusing the author shows MC love his harem so much but if he gets serious on side he starts complicating things like in one chapter when matter of wife comes he indesively dodge the topic why did he do that I mean he sleep with them he love them but why he can't accept them what is he a Playboy .....all other things are great I guess...nothing to complain.
good, but the author made Dalu's douluo strength level, even though I think the douluo strength level is low
Интересный фанфик с полный чудесный системы удач, жду драка бога тана сана.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))) ))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
Hey author, was wondering if I could borrow that SYSTEM idea of yours? Really great btw:) Hoping to use it in my fic. Just letting you know:))
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Putra XD ajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja jajajajajaja
like this.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it's a great fanfic, nice to pass time,,,,,,,,, but after returning from dxd it felt strangely boring like his interaction with those shrek kids, cause he is a very powerful and i dislike the tag hiding your true strength. Also miss the upgrading ticket.
This novel is awesome, but the only problem is, the woman, because this author seems to have a certain issue. Pain is not a sensation one can derive pleasure from, particularly when it pertains to women, as they typically do not derive any enjoyment from it. The fact that all the female characters in his novel exhibit a masochistic disposition is rather illogical. It would be more coherent if they were all inclined towards sadism rather than masochism.
I think you should change the cover of the novel yelan is good but I already have her as a character in game ,those who know her will lose their interest after seeing that photo because everyone wants something new bro cheer up and change it to something that looks beautiful and much sexier
Bikin Ngakak namanya wkwk ..........................................,.......................................................................................
I expected it to be a fierce action and light harem novel until chapter 69 and some "Broken Mind" chapters trully shocked me☠️ Although I don really have a problem, please reduce the hardcore😅
ネタバレを明かす
good story and I enjoyed it, maybe the drawback is that it is too ua and too many oc characters so that the characters in the original work story don't really have a role, you can say that the original characters who can be said to be additional characters turn into low-level npc characters who don't need their presence, and this makes the characters who have an important role in the original story turn into supporting characters who pass by because they don't really affect the plat in general.