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It's an interesting story as mixture of hardworking and overpowered character with system. I like this story as it has good background and story development and it's character is also good has intelligence but a little naive. Totally it's a good story. It's just characters never showed their all out powers and some scenes like that where character don't use all his power and villain have more time than needed.
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It's good and I like how the story goes how powerful the mc and I like the way you create a organization of mc because sometimes the mc in the other novels is only thinking how to get strong
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I love reading doluo dalu but like they need to fkin focus on one story at a time like fr. Doluo dalu 1 isn’t even finished yet and theres already like doluo dalu 2,3,4,5 each with dozens to hundreds of chapters. They need to chill tf out. Anyways I love doluo dalu 1 and 2
beginning of the fanfictions I did not like the mission that forces the mc to perform a task in another world when he has not finished gives the impression that he is being manipulated, so I passed if not strongly that he kills tang san
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Good read. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Salah satu fanfic yang sangat bagus dan alur perkembangan cerita menarik . Hanya saja saya tidak sabar ketika MC kembali ke benua asal untuk menghajar si pencatut tua tangsan itu😂😂😂 Dan saya harap semoga sehat selalu author dan semakin rajin updated
Well, I don't usually leave reviews but the lemon scenes in this fanfic make me do it. Anyway great fanfic keeps it up. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am a simple man i see Yelan i click.... fwdadaddddddfdsgfdgfgdggdgdfdcdfdgdfdfdfdasejifujwei9m,qw9-fm, -fm, -wa,skfom,wka,sko,fwefwasfwa
love it. consistent updats, great story. I am just waiting for the chapters pile up again to read it all together. But I promise from today, I will keep donating 2 power stone everyday to this novel to show my appreciation ❤️. keep up the work man, can't wait to read it all.
I read all 152 chapters in 1 day and I must say this fanfic is great wished it had more chapters also the references of GOD GRID is nice. you should add the FALLING MOON SWORD that sword is worthy of being at least sss+ rank
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Possibly my favorite story on here. Great concept, I live multiverse travel, Great MC, loved that he saved his mom. Powers are cool. anyway Great story keep it up.
Great fanfic. Awesome cover pic. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hey won't you visit genshin for a little adventure?? The mc is op anyway. Just a suggestion haha. I wasn't able to read much genshin fanfic and i crave for it more. If you do go to teyvat world that would be wonderful. Anyway i enjoy your all your novel thus far hope you make more and be successful at it too. 👍😎
I love op mc and I love facfic .................................................................................................................................................................................................u deserve nothing less
Ohhh, new cover. Yelan🥰[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
First of all I would like to thank you for writing this amazing fanfic. But comparing DxD with soul land 2 is a little bit too much, but again it's your fanfic you can do what ever you want. But overall good going it's much better than previous one where he clone himself.
very good, I really surprise with your fanfic but the progress is to fast for mc to become stronger when the chapter still not reach hundred. Oh well the enemy is that Tang dude so it's good for me I really can't wait for more chapter Thanks Author for writing such awesome book
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this is the one of the best fanfic i have ever read this is just to awesome the story development is very good and character development is way better the mc is overpowered but do some mistakes here there but correct it later he's has his fair share of past Life experience but even tough he does some mistakes and we'll story development is like best i heva ever read
It's an interesting story as mixture of hardworking and overpowered character with system. I like this story as it has good background and story development and it's character is also good has intelligence but a little naive. Totally it's a good story. It's just characters never showed their all out powers and some scenes like that where character don't use all his power and villain have more time than needed.
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It's good and I like how the story goes how powerful the mc and I like the way you create a organization of mc because sometimes the mc in the other novels is only thinking how to get strong
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I love reading doluo dalu but like they need to fkin focus on one story at a time like fr. Doluo dalu 1 isn’t even finished yet and theres already like doluo dalu 2,3,4,5 each with dozens to hundreds of chapters. They need to chill tf out. Anyways I love doluo dalu 1 and 2
beginning of the fanfictions I did not like the mission that forces the mc to perform a task in another world when he has not finished gives the impression that he is being manipulated, so I passed if not strongly that he kills tang san
Ada ewe ? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good read. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Salah satu fanfic yang sangat bagus dan alur perkembangan cerita menarik . Hanya saja saya tidak sabar ketika MC kembali ke benua asal untuk menghajar si pencatut tua tangsan itu😂😂😂 Dan saya harap semoga sehat selalu author dan semakin rajin updated
Well, I don't usually leave reviews but the lemon scenes in this fanfic make me do it. Anyway great fanfic keeps it up. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am a simple man i see Yelan i click.... fwdadaddddddfdsgfdgfgdggdgdfdcdfdgdfdfdfdasejifujwei9m,qw9-fm, -fm, -wa,skfom,wka,sko,fwefwasfwa
love it. consistent updats, great story. I am just waiting for the chapters pile up again to read it all together. But I promise from today, I will keep donating 2 power stone everyday to this novel to show my appreciation ❤️. keep up the work man, can't wait to read it all.
I read all 152 chapters in 1 day and I must say this fanfic is great wished it had more chapters also the references of GOD GRID is nice. you should add the FALLING MOON SWORD that sword is worthy of being at least sss+ rank
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HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Possibly my favorite story on here. Great concept, I live multiverse travel, Great MC, loved that he saved his mom. Powers are cool. anyway Great story keep it up.
Great fanfic. Awesome cover pic. ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hey won't you visit genshin for a little adventure?? The mc is op anyway. Just a suggestion haha. I wasn't able to read much genshin fanfic and i crave for it more. If you do go to teyvat world that would be wonderful. Anyway i enjoy your all your novel thus far hope you make more and be successful at it too. 👍😎
I love op mc and I love facfic .................................................................................................................................................................................................u deserve nothing less
Ohhh, new cover. Yelan🥰[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
First of all I would like to thank you for writing this amazing fanfic. But comparing DxD with soul land 2 is a little bit too much, but again it's your fanfic you can do what ever you want. But overall good going it's much better than previous one where he clone himself.
very good, I really surprise with your fanfic but the progress is to fast for mc to become stronger when the chapter still not reach hundred. Oh well the enemy is that Tang dude so it's good for me I really can't wait for more chapter Thanks Author for writing such awesome book
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this is the one of the best fanfic i have ever read this is just to awesome the story development is very good and character development is way better the mc is overpowered but do some mistakes here there but correct it later he's has his fair share of past Life experience but even tough he does some mistakes and we'll story development is like best i heva ever read