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Lord of Chaos.

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作者: Lemn

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A 25-year-old man with a chaotic, disorderly and antisocial life tries to survive an invasion of the earth, which makes public a war between superior beings.
The earth will have the support of the system, a technological advance developed by the god Techno, but the earthlings will soon realize that they can only save themselves and they will try to understand what is this Chaotic Universe in which they live.
Viktor, the earthling who accumulated more chaotic energy will be the one who, by an unexpected event related to the eye of a powerful being, will be able to gain the power to try to discover the truths of this universe.

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I am not a native English speaker, so I may have some grammatical errors at first, I will try to fix them when I could.

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The characters and events portrayed in this novel are completely fictitious. Any resemblance to real people, living or dead, or to real events is purely coincidental.

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    Lemn
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    Hello, I am the author. The rhythm of the novel starts a bit slow, but then it picks up and I think it becomes exciting. I have tried to make the characters vivid and believable. I don't like to create a villain who is simply evil and idiotic, nor an MC like that. I focus quite a bit on the characters and their emotions, so there will be several characters who have emotions and thoughts that can be seen in the novel. I think there are many exciting and a bit strange elements (For example, different layers of the system, which can connect with other users, and exotic powers of different people like a necromancer who uses teleportation magic). The world is wide and I try to bring it to life, showing different events in the work, for example descriptions of scenes that happen in other places in the world or universe.

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    You can ask questions here, there may be some discreet spoilers in the answers, so read this only if you think it will not ruin your reading experience. In the other review posted by me, there are also answers that could have spoilers, beware.

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    iwo835

    Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel. Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.

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    Withe_Reaper

    I really liked the story, I got the idea that the story was a mix between fantasy and science fiction, I hope I can read more chapters, so keep doing what you are doing

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    PerkyPompous_Pixie

    Definitely love the world background and the story development as the chapter goes on. And as for the MC, at least he's got some determination to push through with what life throws at him.

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    GMSJakers

    The writing works well and the development of the story works quite well. The world-building would be a bit more described but other than that, it's quite good.

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    MasterKompanyero

    the plot is very loved it, the characters especially to the main characters are admiring and I continue to read it by the way I like the synopsis. its very interesting.

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    Violet_Ivory

    Nice, you write well without showing too many mistakes in grammar or punctuation. i like the way youre taking this on the characters. i too am not a fan of 1 dimensional villains or characters that simply have one quirk that defines their whole persona. The world could be described more intricately but i believe youve done a good job. keep writing ✍️

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    LittleYellowTurtle

    Really unique power system and anarchy world. It is very exciting to read what will happen next as it is always something new and unexpected, I recommend it!

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    Account_nolonger

    I liked everything about the story, it is pretty good with descriptions and definitely exciting, Kudos to the author. I am gonna read this till the end and wish to see more spicy content in the upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️

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    Little_North_Star

    So afar its been pretty good, i liked the start and also our belived ml, who reminds me of me sometimes, this book is definitely worth reading and I’d asvice everyone to come read it[img=recommend]

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    yuchen_zhang_5379

    Hi, My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!

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    Chapter 203: Enemies. 1 years ago

    卷 1 : New in the Chaotic Universe.

    1. 1
      System message. 2 years ago
    2. 2
      Fragile stability. 2 years ago
    3. 3
      Beginning of a strange "anarchy". 2 years ago
    4. 4
      Lonely hunter. 2 years ago
    5. 5
      Running from the soldiers. 2 years ago
    6. 6
      The Eye of the Great Lord. 2 years ago
    7. 7
      The Witcher. 2 years ago
    8. 8
      Family team. 2 years ago
    9. 9
      Family team (part 2). 2 years ago
    10. 10
      A planet without technology. 2 years ago
    11. 11
      Convince Viktor. 2 years ago
    12. 12
      Forming a great group. 2 years ago
    13. 13
      Great group. 2 years ago
    14. 14
      Class. 2 years ago
    15. 15
      Anarchy. 2 years ago
    16. 16
      Discussions. 2 years ago
    17. 17
      Arriving to the supermarket. 2 years ago
    18. 18
      Kill I said!!! 2 years ago
    19. 19
      Psychopaths who kill without rancor. 2 years ago
    20. 20
      Berserk, double-edged warriors. 2 years ago
    21. 21
      He is alive... 2 years ago
    22. 22
      Despairing necrosis. 2 years ago
    23. 23
      Military squad. 2 years ago
    24. 24
      Reflections (Lucia's part). 2 years ago
    25. 25
      Reflections (Viktor's part), gradually understanding the chaos. 2 years ago
    26. 26
      Family's rapid growth. 2 years ago
    27. 27
      Goblin camps, East Side . 2 years ago
    28. 28
      Fight with the orc champion. 2 years ago
    29. 29
      New learning. 2 years ago
    30. 30
      Call for help. 2 years ago
    31. 31
      A giant golem and an old soldier. 2 years ago
    32. 32
      Civilians and evacuation. 2 years ago
    33. 33
      The amputee soldier and the vote.  2 years ago
    34. 34
      Being a Hunter? 2 years ago
    35. 35
      Dungeons. 2 years ago
    36. 36
      First dungeon together with civilians. 2 years ago
    37. 37
      No crying in battle. 2 years ago
    38. 38
      We are not equal. 2 years ago
    39. 39
      Empty huts. 2 years ago
    40. 40
      Wild Orc. 2 years ago
    41. 41
      Beautiful White.  2 years ago
    42. 42
      The beautiful shine of the Lord. 2 years ago
    43. 43
      Chosen by a god. 2 years ago
    44. 44
      A gift from the gods. 2 years ago
    45. 45
      The wild orc herd and the alpha. 2 years ago
    46. 46
      Main groups of the dungeon. 2 years ago
    47. 47
      Situation outside. 2 years ago
    48. 48
      Northern orcs. 2 years ago
    49. 49
      Fight against the dungeon boss. 2 years ago
    50. 50
      Leaving the dungeon. 2 years ago
    51. 51
      Foreign races and portals. 2 years ago
    52. 52
      Expedition. 2 years ago
    53. 53
      The assault on the high orc alliance. 2 years ago
    54. 54
      The solar "child". 2 years ago
    55. 55
      Scenes from the past. 2 years ago
    56. 56
      The Larium Rosse brotherhood. 2 years ago
    57. 57
      Fight against captors of the wild lady. 2 years ago
    58. 58
      The legacy of our brotherhood (Evangeline). 2 years ago
    59. 59
      Farewell to a great warrior. 2 years ago
    60. 60
      Training. 2 years ago
    61. 61
      Kidnapping. 2 years ago
    62. 62
       Monsters in human skin.  2 years ago
    63. 63
      Attack on a criminal organization. 2 years ago
    64. 64
      Flesh pulp. 2 years ago
    65. 65
      The "foreign" vagabond. 2 years ago
    66. 66
      Guild, The Family. 2 years ago
    67. 67
      Dark Goblin Dungeon. 2 years ago
    68. 68
      Slight understanding of blood and elements. 2 years ago
    69. 69
      A mysterious enemy. 2 years ago
    70. 70
      Blood Ritual. 2 years ago
    71. 71
       A blind archer with high accuracy. 2 years ago
    72. 72
      The eternal darkness. 2 years ago
    73. 73
      "Business" trip. 2 years ago
    74. 74
       Attacking a military base, plagued by monsters with human skin. 2 years ago
    75. 75
      The fire of revenge and dark illusions. 2 years ago
    76. 76
      Inheritance. 2 years ago
    77. 77
      World Situation. 2 years ago
    78. 78
      The tension between elves and humans. 2 years ago
    79. 79
      A bet with the mafia. 2 years ago
    80. 80
      Akiba, the Imaginary Ninja. 2 years ago
    81. 81
      Another unwanted letter. 2 years ago
    82. 82
      The Egoist Mystery. 2 years ago
    83. 83
      Erupting volcano. 2 years ago
    84. 84
      Unexpected twist. 2 years ago
    85. 85
      System? 2 years ago
    86. 86
      A Planet at War. 2 years ago

    卷 2 : Other worlds.

    1. 87
      Speaking to travelers. 2 years ago
    2. 88
      Tough emotions. 2 years ago
    3. 89
      Washrill Tribe. 2 years ago
    4. 90
      Dragon Goddess. 2 years ago
    5. 91
      The power of a dragon. 2 years ago
    6. 92
      Wars on different planets. 2 years ago
    7. 93
      Bad decisions, an incompetent leader. 2 years ago
    8. 94
      Space magic research. 2 years ago
    9. 95
      Talking to the nobles. 2 years ago
    10. 96
      Madame Brahilims. 2 years ago
    11. 97
      War strategies. 2 years ago
    12. 98
      The Kingdom of hope, losing hope. 2 years ago
    13. 99
      Hard to resist. 2 years ago
    14. 100
      The mighty bloodline sword. 2 years ago
    15. 101
      The retreat of the undead army. 2 years ago
    16. 102
      Vampire royalty. 2 years ago
    17. 103
      Speech and history lesson. 2 years ago
    18. 104
      Plans of attack. 2 years ago
    19. 105
      Massacre, annihilation and other sacrifice. 2 years ago
    20. 106
      Re-encounters. 2 years ago
    21. 107
      Legendary technique. 2 years ago
    22. 108
      Cutting off the heads of two dukes. 2 years ago
    23. 109
      Gray world. 2 years ago
    24. 110
      Planet of the strange inferior life. 2 years ago
    25. 111
      Our legacy, Inna. 2 years ago
    26. 112
      Another strange planet. 2 years ago
    27. 113
      Depression and addiction. 2 years ago
    28. 114
      Confusion and lost memories. 2 years ago
    29. 115
      Imminent death. 2 years ago
    30. 116
      Liches are no longer scary. 2 years ago
    31. 117
      Family of strangers. 2 years ago
    32. 118
      Demigod. 2 years ago
    33. 119
      Remembering the beautiful past. 2 years ago
    34. 120
      History of the gods. 2 years ago
    35. 121
      Training with Marcus. 2 years ago
    36. 122
      Vivid memories. 2 years ago
    37. 123
      Large-scale battle between gods. 2 years ago
    38. 124
      Nostalgia. 2 years ago
    39. 125
      The basic elements. 2 years ago
    40. 126
      Calm. 2 years ago
    41. 127
      The Cycle of Life. 2 years ago
    42. 128
      The beginning of a great journey. 2 years ago
    43. 129
      Understanding the ancient map. 2 years ago
    44. 130
      Codex of determination. 2 years ago
    45. 131
      Vulnerable. 2 years ago
    46. 132
      The planet of light. 2 years ago
    47. 133
      The heirs. 2 years ago
    48. 134
      The heirs part 2. 2 years ago
    49. 135
      The heir of Yovhpall. 2 years ago
    50. 136
      Is Chaos a good being? 2 years ago
    51. 137
      The roots of love.  2 years ago
    52. 138
      A step closer to home. 2 years ago
    53. 139
      The seal of life. 2 years ago
    54. 140
      The planet of metal. 2 years ago
    55. 141
      Connection with the Earth. 2 years ago
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