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レビューを書くIf I could say anything about this book, is that it keeps you on the tip of your toes waiting for that juicy moment when everything clicks just perfectly. There are many ways to describe this book, but the one I feel that fits best with is the jaw dropping feeling one gets from the in depth lore, the environment, and the feeling of mystery even with prior knowledge of destiny. Then there is the magnus opus of the book which is the main character void who dives into the smallest nooks and crannies for that hidden loot that just feels like a loot driven goblin looking for their next grab. The one thing I can say is not amazing, but still good the upload schedule which is erratic at best and nothing at all at worst.
I don’t usually read video game stories because I usually find them boring compared to actually playing the game. But this story is an exception and has kept me locked into it 100%. I binged read the whole story in two days and now I am sitting here desperately waiting for a new chapter. I give it a 9.5 out of 10. The .5 that is missing is from the update schedule. Everything else is amazing and I am truly surprised by how invested I am in the story even though I’ve played the game and know what is going to happen due to cannon. 100% would recommend.
A really well done fic for Destiny. I wish there were more chapter updates. Like I've commented before, I may have dropped the game but this fic keeps calling me back like an Ahamkara's wish.
One of the Best destiny fanfic out there despite the slow update time the author updates his readers and gives excellent story and background giving every character life without them being throw aways
The only thing I don't like about this book/novel is, that it's updates are really slow which I don't blame the author for. I have nothing to say about the writing quality except I haven't noticed any mistakes yet, even though I notice them pretty easily. The story follows the official story (up until chap 103 at least) which is great and shows great immersive potential. Void, the MC, has a great character and shows his adaptability in unpredictable situations. He also shows great character. To the World building I can't say much except that this is a destiny story, so the world is great anyways.
This is a very good story. The characters are interesting along with having an interesting premise. The upload/update schedule is shit but understandable. Writing quality is one of the best on this accursed app
I never wrote a review before but since someone insisted I guess nobody can complain no matter how bad it sounds, first of all, I have never played nor heard of destiny before this story and naturally had to do a little dive into the wiki’s and YouTube clips for context, everything about the story is enjoyable, the gradual growth of the mc is enjoyable and the interactions and dynamics between characters is funny and gives them depth, as with all good things the only downside about this story is the long gap between updates with 1 chapter per month, I mean 12 chapters per year should be considered a crime against chumanity 💀, a truly fantastic story otherwise my review doesn’t do it justice, thank you author for introducing me to destiny hopefully I’ll also get to play it in the future 👍
Not a very descriptive guy, all I can say is that it's really good, The only actual problem, which isn't even a problem and more of a little personal annoyance, I thought that the system would play a waaaaaayyyyy bigger role than it does. The updating is random but, C'mon, we're all humans. Very good and entertaining, MWAH (Is that weird?)
I think this is really good, just wish the chapters would come out faster because the story is about to become rly interesting
The only good destiny fanfic, realistic characters, canon powers and the author pays attention the smallest details and it shows. Only complaint is update stability but at least it’s free
Best and only good destiny fic I’ve been able to find, only wish the updates would come more often
I love this story, it’s unique unlike many others on this app, and while I wish it updated a bit more frequently I do understand that people have their own circumstances in which it might hinder some updates.
First of all, I started reading this fic with almost 0 knowledge of destiny and like 3 hours playtime in destiny 2 and although it can be sometimes confusing a quick google is all thats needed to really enjoy the story. This book is just great all around except the update frequency but as long as its not dropped Im happy and I recommend reading it even if you dont know much or anything about destiny
Amazing destiny fic I look forward to more, the update stability is lacking but other than that its great
Loving the novel so far even if I never played the game myself I feel as if I'm there![img=recommend][img=update]
It is a very thorough fanfic that plays a part that flushes out what the vanguard was before the players in destiny 1 and it takes a very " go beyond the story" we were told and it is fairly good. Other than the update speed it has a very good flow to the story. I just hope the main protagonist gets more swords like asura or something that would be cool.
I love this story! A big thing I like about it is how canon it feels if that makes sense, even though I know it’s fanfiction there’s nothing crazy outside the destiny bounds that completely change up the story instead the Mc works within his means to become a powerful guardian himself. Also the MC taking time actually training and getting good at becoming a guardian is actually really well done it doesn’t feel like it’s taking to long nor to short the author has found the sweet spot of growing his Mc. The author also doesn’t just focus on the Mc! They also build up the other characters through interactions which is really great.
Damn good fic my only gripe is update stability, but with the chapter quality I think the trade off is absolutely worth it, on top of being a destiny fanfic which I’ve been wanting to read for quite some time.
Definitely my favourite Destiny Fanfic so far, easy to understand even for those who haven’t played the game much. Fairly easygoing majority of the time with fun characters about, with the fight scenes being well written and executed.
When will the players arrive? stopped reading at chapter 71 mainly to stock up on chapters to binge read, but also bc I'm kind of waiting until the players arrive, so I can fully immerse myself.
Best Destiny fanfic out there that’s only held down by update stability being as reliable as your drunken stepdads chances to remember to pick you up from school.
Great story with awesome character development so far. Needs more solid updates but other than that I can't complain.
This is one of my favorite stories on this app, the author updates pretty consistently and it expands on the world of destiny as a whole in a masterful way.
Loving the story so far and can’t wait for what is next. I only wish it was updated more frequently but you don’t rush art.
You're the first destiny fanfic that i have seen thats both sort of long and enjoyable, and i have been getting in a lot of destiny contant as the new dlc is out soon, so when i saw your fanfic i was sucked in with how awesome it is and please if you can, can you upload more chapters.
If I could say anything about this book, is that it keeps you on the tip of your toes waiting for that juicy moment when everything clicks just perfectly. There are many ways to describe this book, but the one I feel that fits best with is the jaw dropping feeling one gets from the in depth lore, the environment, and the feeling of mystery even with prior knowledge of destiny. Then there is the magnus opus of the book which is the main character void who dives into the smallest nooks and crannies for that hidden loot that just feels like a loot driven goblin looking for their next grab. The one thing I can say is not amazing, but still good the upload schedule which is erratic at best and nothing at all at worst.
I don’t usually read video game stories because I usually find them boring compared to actually playing the game. But this story is an exception and has kept me locked into it 100%. I binged read the whole story in two days and now I am sitting here desperately waiting for a new chapter. I give it a 9.5 out of 10. The .5 that is missing is from the update schedule. Everything else is amazing and I am truly surprised by how invested I am in the story even though I’ve played the game and know what is going to happen due to cannon. 100% would recommend.
A really well done fic for Destiny. I wish there were more chapter updates. Like I've commented before, I may have dropped the game but this fic keeps calling me back like an Ahamkara's wish.
One of the Best destiny fanfic out there despite the slow update time the author updates his readers and gives excellent story and background giving every character life without them being throw aways
The only thing I don't like about this book/novel is, that it's updates are really slow which I don't blame the author for. I have nothing to say about the writing quality except I haven't noticed any mistakes yet, even though I notice them pretty easily. The story follows the official story (up until chap 103 at least) which is great and shows great immersive potential. Void, the MC, has a great character and shows his adaptability in unpredictable situations. He also shows great character. To the World building I can't say much except that this is a destiny story, so the world is great anyways.
This is a very good story. The characters are interesting along with having an interesting premise. The upload/update schedule is shit but understandable. Writing quality is one of the best on this accursed app
I never wrote a review before but since someone insisted I guess nobody can complain no matter how bad it sounds, first of all, I have never played nor heard of destiny before this story and naturally had to do a little dive into the wiki’s and YouTube clips for context, everything about the story is enjoyable, the gradual growth of the mc is enjoyable and the interactions and dynamics between characters is funny and gives them depth, as with all good things the only downside about this story is the long gap between updates with 1 chapter per month, I mean 12 chapters per year should be considered a crime against chumanity 💀, a truly fantastic story otherwise my review doesn’t do it justice, thank you author for introducing me to destiny hopefully I’ll also get to play it in the future 👍
Not a very descriptive guy, all I can say is that it's really good, The only actual problem, which isn't even a problem and more of a little personal annoyance, I thought that the system would play a waaaaaayyyyy bigger role than it does. The updating is random but, C'mon, we're all humans. Very good and entertaining, MWAH (Is that weird?)
I think this is really good, just wish the chapters would come out faster because the story is about to become rly interesting
The only good destiny fanfic, realistic characters, canon powers and the author pays attention the smallest details and it shows. Only complaint is update stability but at least it’s free
Best and only good destiny fic I’ve been able to find, only wish the updates would come more often
I love this story, it’s unique unlike many others on this app, and while I wish it updated a bit more frequently I do understand that people have their own circumstances in which it might hinder some updates.
First of all, I started reading this fic with almost 0 knowledge of destiny and like 3 hours playtime in destiny 2 and although it can be sometimes confusing a quick google is all thats needed to really enjoy the story. This book is just great all around except the update frequency but as long as its not dropped Im happy and I recommend reading it even if you dont know much or anything about destiny
Amazing destiny fic I look forward to more, the update stability is lacking but other than that its great
Loving the novel so far even if I never played the game myself I feel as if I'm there![img=recommend][img=update]
It is a very thorough fanfic that plays a part that flushes out what the vanguard was before the players in destiny 1 and it takes a very " go beyond the story" we were told and it is fairly good. Other than the update speed it has a very good flow to the story. I just hope the main protagonist gets more swords like asura or something that would be cool.
I love this story! A big thing I like about it is how canon it feels if that makes sense, even though I know it’s fanfiction there’s nothing crazy outside the destiny bounds that completely change up the story instead the Mc works within his means to become a powerful guardian himself. Also the MC taking time actually training and getting good at becoming a guardian is actually really well done it doesn’t feel like it’s taking to long nor to short the author has found the sweet spot of growing his Mc. The author also doesn’t just focus on the Mc! They also build up the other characters through interactions which is really great.
Damn good fic my only gripe is update stability, but with the chapter quality I think the trade off is absolutely worth it, on top of being a destiny fanfic which I’ve been wanting to read for quite some time.
Definitely my favourite Destiny Fanfic so far, easy to understand even for those who haven’t played the game much. Fairly easygoing majority of the time with fun characters about, with the fight scenes being well written and executed.
When will the players arrive? stopped reading at chapter 71 mainly to stock up on chapters to binge read, but also bc I'm kind of waiting until the players arrive, so I can fully immerse myself.
Best Destiny fanfic out there that’s only held down by update stability being as reliable as your drunken stepdads chances to remember to pick you up from school.
Great story with awesome character development so far. Needs more solid updates but other than that I can't complain.
This is one of my favorite stories on this app, the author updates pretty consistently and it expands on the world of destiny as a whole in a masterful way.
Loving the story so far and can’t wait for what is next. I only wish it was updated more frequently but you don’t rush art.
You're the first destiny fanfic that i have seen thats both sort of long and enjoyable, and i have been getting in a lot of destiny contant as the new dlc is out soon, so when i saw your fanfic i was sucked in with how awesome it is and please if you can, can you upload more chapters.