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This by far the most awesome Narutoverse fanfic I ever read... Some villains Like Gato did not became a villain at all. And that's to my liking, I haven't read that Orochimaru was permanently on the MC's side of the scale, yet but I am hoping for it. Same for Zabuza and Haku. I don't know or I just forgotten if Kabuto's parents were already in the Land of Red though... Nice work Authors-san, please continue and complete this fanfic. This story is lovable. [img=recommend]
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en un inicio me gusto pero después del primer arco todo se fue por la gareta tsunade un ninja con 15 años de entrenamiento empieza a sonrojarse dos a los 3 minutos de conocer al MC :/ es demaciadooo forzado
La traducción es de buena calidad junto con la gramática, al principio de la historia en la guerra para erradicar a Uzushiogakure hay discrepancias en las Naciones participantes donde debería ser de tres como mínimo, escenas de pelea decente 🤔, la actitud del MC tiene matices arrogantes chinas pero es manejable, lo que sí me atrapó y que le tengo buen estima es la construcción sistemática de la nueva nación 😉👌🏻, espero que siga avanzando y con un buen desarrollo
Sorry I just can’t anymore. It started out good but it gets worse every chapter. Chinese propaganda everywhere and trying to make uzu into ‚the republic of red‘ aka the people’s republic is just too much
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In almost every chapter we have this inner monolog of the side characters about how strong he is how formidable...and the hole chapter is about praising him. I've read 140 chapters, in all those chapters at least half of them are like that, add to that the chapters which are short and you have a waste of time, so I don't recommend a story where there is no development nothing beside praising and op mc.
Terrível, essa fic pode ser resumida em três cap, no primeiro ele derrota kirigakure, no segundo é uma festa de tapa na cara em konoha, no terceiro ele mata danzo, e é isso 200 cap resumido em três
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Good novel but may bore readers, there is a lot of explanation, explanations itself consists of 2-3 chapters which will reslly test your comprehension and the battle itself is also explanation mode... To Author: if you can resolve those this novel will be even better as there is no need for a lot of explanation the fight scene as well can be cut to 1-2 chapters lessen the explanation
Chinese mc [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
story is good , there are some rush in romance part but noting harem like . it has potential the only downside as of now for me is lenght of Konoha arc , i mean you spend more than 100 chapter in konoha ?? why ?? let get out of there and find more sign in for you system .
It could've been good sadly today translator dont speak english it seems. Its lazy work dont reas you'll just be disapointed cause the idea is good but the translation is so bad it shouldn't exist.
Totally a cringefest. Like it's a drama written by children. And a lot of fillers.
if there's any lower ratings I'll give it .. so boring ... explaining the same thing many times . just for word count .. forced plot ...and a lot of BS
Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
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it's trash now, just Chinese bs now it was good for a while but after entering konoha it went from 90 to 5, don't bother reading
It's like reading a novel on fast forward. People change their minds change their attitude, change their everything in a matter of seconds. No character development. Just light speed plot development. It is supremely Chinese wuxia face slapping novel.
it's an excellent piece of work. I'm loving it very much, keep this type of translation work👍
what i can say, overpowered MC, probably Harem tag, i don't see none of "brainless woman" in history to plus 50 chapter, but, i see someone saying about Tsunade (20) in love with MC (12), well, is in Sengoku age, probably is an alliance senju*Uzumaki, or something about this (Tsu can be a shota...), in this time, i remember the age to married is plus 10 or something... old to kill, old to drink, old to f@c--- marriage... read of perspective of the Sengoku age, and not modern age, but it's a good and easy going at least chapter 50 i reading now.
This story is really good, but I think the main character could be a little funnier because it doesn't differ much from other Chinese novels. The main character is strong and seems to get stronger. The only problem is that the main character is a bit like a teenager.
Don't read it. This is garbage* in every way. Character breaking, garbage story, oversexual* content, lame, cliche, and unreasonable MC or messed* up English, u will find everything here.
has just received power and immediately goes into battle to show his strength. like a child. suddenly he will show how strong he is..., others may think that he is obsessed with someone. it's like in Chinese novels, the main character gains power and slaps everyone.
For a mtl I would put 5 for a credible story elsewhere than in China I would put 0 if I could, the simple fact of resolving Tsunade in love with a child disgusts me deeply.
It's quite good of Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and good english/translation.. I don't mind an op MC.. He still need to search a place to sign in to get a great reward (although the reward he already got is so powerful).. I like a story where MC is from Uzumaki.. It's interesting to see how they will change Uzumaki fate (massacre).. I don't mind a romance or even harem.. But it will be interesting to see him with Kushina, and see how Naruto story will be in the future.. Keep up the great job author san 😁👍😍😍
This isn't a proper review just want to ask 2 questions. Will there be any yuri in this and is this a harem? (you never said, plus no romance tag that i can see)
Just reading the synopsis of this story. I think I already read the whole thing and don't even have the strength to read the first chapter. Also, other people review doesn't help it either in motivating me.😂😂😂
this is good... please update and don't drop... if you're dropping it please leave a reminder. all the best.
This by far the most awesome Narutoverse fanfic I ever read... Some villains Like Gato did not became a villain at all. And that's to my liking, I haven't read that Orochimaru was permanently on the MC's side of the scale, yet but I am hoping for it. Same for Zabuza and Haku. I don't know or I just forgotten if Kabuto's parents were already in the Land of Red though... Nice work Authors-san, please continue and complete this fanfic. This story is lovable. [img=recommend]
ネタバレを明かす en un inicio me gusto pero después del primer arco todo se fue por la gareta tsunade un ninja con 15 años de entrenamiento empieza a sonrojarse dos a los 3 minutos de conocer al MC :/ es demaciadooo forzado
La traducción es de buena calidad junto con la gramática, al principio de la historia en la guerra para erradicar a Uzushiogakure hay discrepancias en las Naciones participantes donde debería ser de tres como mínimo, escenas de pelea decente 🤔, la actitud del MC tiene matices arrogantes chinas pero es manejable, lo que sí me atrapó y que le tengo buen estima es la construcción sistemática de la nueva nación 😉👌🏻, espero que siga avanzando y con un buen desarrollo
Sorry I just can’t anymore. It started out good but it gets worse every chapter. Chinese propaganda everywhere and trying to make uzu into ‚the republic of red‘ aka the people’s republic is just too much
Mc is pathetic [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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In almost every chapter we have this inner monolog of the side characters about how strong he is how formidable...and the hole chapter is about praising him. I've read 140 chapters, in all those chapters at least half of them are like that, add to that the chapters which are short and you have a waste of time, so I don't recommend a story where there is no development nothing beside praising and op mc.
Terrível, essa fic pode ser resumida em três cap, no primeiro ele derrota kirigakure, no segundo é uma festa de tapa na cara em konoha, no terceiro ele mata danzo, e é isso 200 cap resumido em três
ネタバレを明かす Good novel but may bore readers, there is a lot of explanation, explanations itself consists of 2-3 chapters which will reslly test your comprehension and the battle itself is also explanation mode... To Author: if you can resolve those this novel will be even better as there is no need for a lot of explanation the fight scene as well can be cut to 1-2 chapters lessen the explanation
Chinese mc [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
story is good , there are some rush in romance part but noting harem like . it has potential the only downside as of now for me is lenght of Konoha arc , i mean you spend more than 100 chapter in konoha ?? why ?? let get out of there and find more sign in for you system .
It could've been good sadly today translator dont speak english it seems. Its lazy work dont reas you'll just be disapointed cause the idea is good but the translation is so bad it shouldn't exist.
Totally a cringefest. Like it's a drama written by children. And a lot of fillers.
if there's any lower ratings I'll give it .. so boring ... explaining the same thing many times . just for word count .. forced plot ...and a lot of BS
Hello how are you thank you very much for the chapter yes more chapters come on come on more chapters come on come on
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it's trash now, just Chinese bs now it was good for a while but after entering konoha it went from 90 to 5, don't bother reading
It's like reading a novel on fast forward. People change their minds change their attitude, change their everything in a matter of seconds. No character development. Just light speed plot development. It is supremely Chinese wuxia face slapping novel.
it's an excellent piece of work. I'm loving it very much, keep this type of translation work👍
what i can say, overpowered MC, probably Harem tag, i don't see none of "brainless woman" in history to plus 50 chapter, but, i see someone saying about Tsunade (20) in love with MC (12), well, is in Sengoku age, probably is an alliance senju*Uzumaki, or something about this (Tsu can be a shota...), in this time, i remember the age to married is plus 10 or something... old to kill, old to drink, old to f@c--- marriage... read of perspective of the Sengoku age, and not modern age, but it's a good and easy going at least chapter 50 i reading now.
This story is really good, but I think the main character could be a little funnier because it doesn't differ much from other Chinese novels. The main character is strong and seems to get stronger. The only problem is that the main character is a bit like a teenager.
Don't read it. This is garbage* in every way. Character breaking, garbage story, oversexual* content, lame, cliche, and unreasonable MC or messed* up English, u will find everything here.
has just received power and immediately goes into battle to show his strength. like a child. suddenly he will show how strong he is..., others may think that he is obsessed with someone. it's like in Chinese novels, the main character gains power and slaps everyone.
For a mtl I would put 5 for a credible story elsewhere than in China I would put 0 if I could, the simple fact of resolving Tsunade in love with a child disgusts me deeply.
It's quite good of Naruto fanfiction!! 👍👍 It have a great story/plot and good english/translation.. I don't mind an op MC.. He still need to search a place to sign in to get a great reward (although the reward he already got is so powerful).. I like a story where MC is from Uzumaki.. It's interesting to see how they will change Uzumaki fate (massacre).. I don't mind a romance or even harem.. But it will be interesting to see him with Kushina, and see how Naruto story will be in the future.. Keep up the great job author san 😁👍😍😍
This isn't a proper review just want to ask 2 questions. Will there be any yuri in this and is this a harem? (you never said, plus no romance tag that i can see)
Just reading the synopsis of this story. I think I already read the whole thing and don't even have the strength to read the first chapter. Also, other people review doesn't help it either in motivating me.😂😂😂
this is good... please update and don't drop... if you're dropping it please leave a reminder. all the best.