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I like this book a lot. There is much untapped potential here. in the beginning certain things felt a bit forced but it just meshed well in a couple chapters of reading. As the plot behind humanity’s position slowly unfolded the growth of the mc’s mental state towards the direction the story is intended to go was definitely appreciated, really liked to read the fights. Just an appealing story to be honest.
The background of the story is well and good. The character’s are also alright. It’s just that the cultivation system of this world is a bit complex and I didn’t really understand all the power levels and what exactly does one have to do to become stronger. And also what exactly is the use of providence. Like is it luck? Cause the MC is really very unlucky compared to many others I guess. So if you could actually describe all the terms it would have been great. I mean the MC had access to higher level knowledge after going to academy so you could have put a chapter which described all these terms.
Good story'...148 chapter on and the author has set a very good premise for the novel mc becomes OP quick but he has a goal that is stated in the title of the novel, that is not instantly accomplished as soon as he gets the system but he works for that goal....much better than those system novels that gives mc op powers just for the sake of it...here the system gives op abilities to mc that only helps him grow OP on his own hardwork....
I'm giving a 1 on character design because all 3 of the friends first interaction and friendship felt forced and they are all annoying to the point I'd rather them not be in the novel. Especially Mary, shes always coming off as really annoying or really dense
This story has been amazing. I am looking forward to more from this writer. Here's to hoping this continues until a nice finish of a sequal.
Thumbs up for Synopsis novel. I gonna read this just because this novel have no Harem tag and Low key Mc. Hope not disappoint me. 🙈 K bye.........
This novel is just too good and every day I just crave even more when I read the daily chapters. Does anyone know any novels similar to this except the way of knights as I’ve already read it.
the pace of the story is good, MC had a good introduction and character buildup but the world isn't fully shown only two parts the bastion and the plague lands it's just too simple.
I really like this novel. although there are a few flaws here and there, they are something which can be corrected easily and in respect to the potential of the story they are negligible .
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Boring Info dumps for, what was it, 10 chapters consecutively or was it more? The guy who said this wasn't slow is lying. Sure time passes fast but the actions are slow. One or two chapters can be dedicated to this one fact about the world or these facts or these and these. Barely are there relevant information about the current events, some of it might be relevant in the far future but most or filler words for a world background. Even non info dump chapters felt like filler cause the school representative or something kept babling just to finish a chapter. There can be fun stuff but most of its boring, Its not bad novel but it is boring.
this novel started well, but it became boring to me ... don't know why!!!! the things that bothers me most are : the system could have stopped everyone from sensing him by putting the protection before fusing the providence but no it didn't put it until the world sensed our glorious MC, second the cultivation technique or I should call it the nerfing technique (doesn't need any explaining), and last but not least this regal King, his reason for sponsoring him is not strong enough he have no conditions for the MC after graduation its as if he was sent from heavens to help the MC.... all in all I find myself unable to continue reading this novel. a shame truly I loved the setting.
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Very interesting world background and character designs. The story pace not very slow nor very fast so it is very easy to get in the flow. There are some words which are misplaced but there are very few so no need to worry. I have read all the available chaps together so I don't know much about stability of updates. All in all it is a good story that u can find interesting.
It's really amazing novel I can't wait to see more of the story Idle mage :D........................................................................................
This is my first review so I'll be brief. Writing quality isn't the best but it's not horrible either. Just wrong words here and there. I read up to chapter 63 in one day so I'm unsure about updates. The story isn't too slow. It can move from one day to one week and kept me interested in what was new each time. The plot itself is nice as well. It seemed like the city was portrayed with a "good" characteristic and has slowly been showing the grey areas which is nice. I kinda liked the characters and how everyone seemed to have a dark secret. There's also good character shaping and building. The world background is quite interesting as well. The author has left them self a foundation to build on for the future when it comes to the wide world. I can only hope they can create a wonderful story the is supported by the world.
Mc is supposed to an adult in the body of a kid and he hasn't interacted with many people, but based on his internal monologues he's pretty much a kid on the inside too, he's still taking things lightly
Hmmmm Backer instead of Hero, an interesting and unique approach on apocalypse type novels. Will see how story develop. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Eyy! It's ya' boy! Back at it again with the shameless reviews. Do check it out tho, seriously. I learned a lot from my experiences when writing my first book, I am trying to apply them all here. I appreciate your support! Thanks for checking this book out.
The reading experience would improve greatly if the author ran a script on the text that deleted every sentence/paragraph that wasn't in quotations that ended in a question mark, ended in an exclamation point or started with the word "Yes". There's the usual stuff that you should expect from something on WN like missing prepositions but filtering out useless (word padding) rhetorical questions etc would go a long way. 5 stars for stability of updates because I didn't bother to look at the update history. 3 for story development because it's mostly just been describing simple things like walking and seeing with little interaction. Without much interaction with the world around the MC it's hard to get a handle on character design, so 3 again. Background seems okay, kind of useless transmigration from a world building perspective though since it's basically low tech to high tech + magic (still using paper money though). We haven't seen the advantage of transmigration other than the story not having to bother with a child being a child.
I like this book a lot. There is much untapped potential here. in the beginning certain things felt a bit forced but it just meshed well in a couple chapters of reading. As the plot behind humanity’s position slowly unfolded the growth of the mc’s mental state towards the direction the story is intended to go was definitely appreciated, really liked to read the fights. Just an appealing story to be honest.
The background of the story is well and good. The character’s are also alright. It’s just that the cultivation system of this world is a bit complex and I didn’t really understand all the power levels and what exactly does one have to do to become stronger. And also what exactly is the use of providence. Like is it luck? Cause the MC is really very unlucky compared to many others I guess. So if you could actually describe all the terms it would have been great. I mean the MC had access to higher level knowledge after going to academy so you could have put a chapter which described all these terms.
Good story'...148 chapter on and the author has set a very good premise for the novel mc becomes OP quick but he has a goal that is stated in the title of the novel, that is not instantly accomplished as soon as he gets the system but he works for that goal....much better than those system novels that gives mc op powers just for the sake of it...here the system gives op abilities to mc that only helps him grow OP on his own hardwork....
I'm giving a 1 on character design because all 3 of the friends first interaction and friendship felt forced and they are all annoying to the point I'd rather them not be in the novel. Especially Mary, shes always coming off as really annoying or really dense
This story has been amazing. I am looking forward to more from this writer. Here's to hoping this continues until a nice finish of a sequal.
Thumbs up for Synopsis novel. I gonna read this just because this novel have no Harem tag and Low key Mc. Hope not disappoint me. 🙈 K bye.........
This novel is just too good and every day I just crave even more when I read the daily chapters. Does anyone know any novels similar to this except the way of knights as I’ve already read it.
the pace of the story is good, MC had a good introduction and character buildup but the world isn't fully shown only two parts the bastion and the plague lands it's just too simple.
I really like this novel. although there are a few flaws here and there, they are something which can be corrected easily and in respect to the potential of the story they are negligible .
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Boring Info dumps for, what was it, 10 chapters consecutively or was it more? The guy who said this wasn't slow is lying. Sure time passes fast but the actions are slow. One or two chapters can be dedicated to this one fact about the world or these facts or these and these. Barely are there relevant information about the current events, some of it might be relevant in the far future but most or filler words for a world background. Even non info dump chapters felt like filler cause the school representative or something kept babling just to finish a chapter. There can be fun stuff but most of its boring, Its not bad novel but it is boring.
this novel started well, but it became boring to me ... don't know why!!!! the things that bothers me most are : the system could have stopped everyone from sensing him by putting the protection before fusing the providence but no it didn't put it until the world sensed our glorious MC, second the cultivation technique or I should call it the nerfing technique (doesn't need any explaining), and last but not least this regal King, his reason for sponsoring him is not strong enough he have no conditions for the MC after graduation its as if he was sent from heavens to help the MC.... all in all I find myself unable to continue reading this novel. a shame truly I loved the setting.
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Very interesting world background and character designs. The story pace not very slow nor very fast so it is very easy to get in the flow. There are some words which are misplaced but there are very few so no need to worry. I have read all the available chaps together so I don't know much about stability of updates. All in all it is a good story that u can find interesting.
It's really amazing novel I can't wait to see more of the story Idle mage :D........................................................................................
This is my first review so I'll be brief. Writing quality isn't the best but it's not horrible either. Just wrong words here and there. I read up to chapter 63 in one day so I'm unsure about updates. The story isn't too slow. It can move from one day to one week and kept me interested in what was new each time. The plot itself is nice as well. It seemed like the city was portrayed with a "good" characteristic and has slowly been showing the grey areas which is nice. I kinda liked the characters and how everyone seemed to have a dark secret. There's also good character shaping and building. The world background is quite interesting as well. The author has left them self a foundation to build on for the future when it comes to the wide world. I can only hope they can create a wonderful story the is supported by the world.
Mc is supposed to an adult in the body of a kid and he hasn't interacted with many people, but based on his internal monologues he's pretty much a kid on the inside too, he's still taking things lightly
Hmmmm Backer instead of Hero, an interesting and unique approach on apocalypse type novels. Will see how story develop. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Eyy! It's ya' boy! Back at it again with the shameless reviews. Do check it out tho, seriously. I learned a lot from my experiences when writing my first book, I am trying to apply them all here. I appreciate your support! Thanks for checking this book out.
The reading experience would improve greatly if the author ran a script on the text that deleted every sentence/paragraph that wasn't in quotations that ended in a question mark, ended in an exclamation point or started with the word "Yes". There's the usual stuff that you should expect from something on WN like missing prepositions but filtering out useless (word padding) rhetorical questions etc would go a long way. 5 stars for stability of updates because I didn't bother to look at the update history. 3 for story development because it's mostly just been describing simple things like walking and seeing with little interaction. Without much interaction with the world around the MC it's hard to get a handle on character design, so 3 again. Background seems okay, kind of useless transmigration from a world building perspective though since it's basically low tech to high tech + magic (still using paper money though). We haven't seen the advantage of transmigration other than the story not having to bother with a child being a child.