It’s a good old softcore porn harem novel. The MC needs a therapy badly but considering the type of novel it is, you make do with it. Except for a few things the novel is well written, It does what was intended to be done and doesn’t stray much from its core; which use system, make money, and screw aunties. That bit about his mother not being his biological mother and his immature response to that was a bit of a letdown but since the author wanted some story in this softcore erotica webnovel, there isn’t much of a problem as you can simply ignore it. The women he is sleeping with are also characterised well except for a few like an aunt he sleeps with after meeting her in a just a day, or that classmate of hers who was simply not needed. He also has junior brother he made for a background when he can simply rely on his system for that and was not needed. Just bits and pieces like that spoiled the reading a little in between but if you’re looking for a quick wank, the story does the job.
It’s a nice story except some incidents. Like for eg the MC was raped by a girl who then went on to give birth to a girl. The MC can’t do anything to the organisation behind this incident because of their huge background. Years later MC finds the rapist and her daughter but forgives her and continues to have relation with the rapist. His family also comes to know about it but is OK with the rape because at least it gave them a grandchild. In fact the MC even tries to help the rapist to go further in cultivation. It was just absurd
The author should just say ‘and thus he became the ruler of the universe’ Just how much advantage does this guy have man!
China did not rise peacefully mate
What do you mean by too ugly?
The background of the story is well and good. The character’s are also alright. It’s just that the cultivation system of this world is a bit complex and I didn’t really understand all the power levels and what exactly does one have to do to become stronger. And also what exactly is the use of providence. Like is it luck? Cause the MC is really very unlucky compared to many others I guess. So if you could actually describe all the terms it would have been great. I mean the MC had access to higher level knowledge after going to academy so you could have put a chapter which described all these terms.
Raw please?
The third test is so idiotic
Do these urban cultivation worlds not require other skilled jobs like architects, doctors, engineers, scientists, accountants, economists etc?
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A regular human dies and is reborn in another world. Common? The world has Legendary swords, Heroes, Angels, Devils and Gods? Still common? He knows the future of the world too! It's still not uncommon? he is probably going to be super-powerful. if it's still a common story then I can't help it. an SI who is not an edgelord. Harem? Who knows?6 Chs 49 お気に入り
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First stop : Shinobiverse
A young man from our world is robbed of his life naked but given a shot to reach godhood by the Akashic Records. So is that a blessing in disguise or just a way for the records to screw him up? my first novel so please bear with it11 Chs 132 お気に入り
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Zhang San, please behave yourself!
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