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Brandy_Bloodworth

Honestly, in love with this book it did get a little annoying at the end because it looks like the writing changed a little bit but that could just be me

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Dabones_241

it's a good story but towards the end the chapter quality just dropped off in towards literally blank parts in the chapter entire pages just blank

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Zeustiak

This isn’t a novel with an idle system, this is a novel written by an author with an idle brain that just spends chapter after chapter info dumbing random garbage onto the page. Like the MC’s trip to the grocery store, or entire chapters filled with history that the reader has no reason to care about.

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Captain_Spoiler

Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This is a story of MC who transmigrated into a magical world where he possessing a body of orphan teenager who on his way to Awakening place. This world is occupied by Human race UNTIL the invaders from otherworld come. These otherworld races called Celestial Race (the wings and eyes galore race) and the Hypogeans (creatures with horns and human called them Demon). The Revenants are a group of mysterious individuals coming from both the Hypogean and Celestial Race. They are the scourge of Humanity, bandits who worked together for the sake of profit. Most of the time, it is said that they're hostile to each other due to their innate differences, yet they were united due to their insatiable desire to eat human flesh. The human race is considered as oh-so-frail and weak and helpless race. Against these race, humans are helpless. Fortunately, the world had seen human sufferings.. It heard all the grievances that humans forcibly swallowed. And it granted the deepest wishes that all humans want. A chance. That's what humans finally received. A chance to push back the aggressors and a chance to carve a piece of this world for humans. Spiritual Root, Martial Spirit, and Providence. That's the gift that Gaia, world consciousness gave to Humanity.. Since you're a modern person, this would be your Physique/Mageroot, Battle Spirit/Magical Artifact, and Providence/Destiny's Qi. There were groups who united under the same banner, sharing the ideals of never giving up until Humanity rises up and becomes strong enough to push back the invaders. These people are the Dawn of Hope Federation. As for those who gave up, well, they called "losers" during those time. Both have the same goal, for "human survivability," but their approach toward the goal are different. The Dawn of Hope Federation raised an army. It was a glorious era where there'd be expeditions left and right. There were many casualties, but the resources we accumulated rose to an all-time high. This group was the one responsible for building the foundations of modern human society. The Dawn of Hope Federation had a lasting history and a glorious streak of achievements, but like they said: "One bad apple is enough to spoil the entire harvest." The fault lies in the number of casualties humans suffered under the hands of the Celestials and Hypogeans. As the bodies piled up, the mentality of the battle-hardened warriors was getting worse and worse as time passed. Eventually, the whole purpose of the Dawn of Hope Federation was tinted. 'Working hard for the sake of a brighter tomorrow' became 'a battle of attrition'. Eventually, it turned into simple 'Endurance'. As their eyes became clouded by too much bloodshed, they were unable to see the faint rays of hope that appeared on the horizon. It only became worse when a group of strong Celestials and Hypogeans gave Humanity an "Ultimatum". Hope was dashed as soon as it appeared. The Dawn of Hope's purpose crumbled beneath their feat, and a pact was made. This is when the internal strife began. "Losers" influences started to grow wider. Humans finally succumbed, and they begin to raise fat, fat sheep for the Celestials and Hypogeans to enjoy. Just like how we raise a cow to become our delicacies, that is how Celestials and Hypogeans see at humans. In exchange, Humans can enjoy their peace in this little bubble (Doom: Human "safe house") they have for themselves. Who are these fat sheep you ask? Well...turn to Humanity History Books. Count until you reach the 101st Hero you see recorded in there... Starting from that person until the very recent one, those are the sheep that I'm talking about. Only the 1st until 100th Hero are the real Humanity hero who truly against the invaders. This all sounds bad if I put it this way, but it doesn't mean that the "losers" like doing this either. They stated it as 'Enduring Victory'. Those politicians are two-faced people, old and sly foxes, but most of them genuinely meant well. By catering to the demands of the enemies to honour the pact and by playing the role of being the antagonist to their race, these bastards were able to hide their true intentions to fool those stupid invaders. They might've sacrificed the Heroes they raised, but it doesn't mean that they're forgotten all Heroes contributed to humanity as a whole. In truth, with excellent acting that could even fool themselves, they managed to save everything that the heroes contributed to Humanity right the nose of those pesky invaders. Ch1-Ch60 - Introduction of the novel (superb slow pace).. Ch60 - Everything changes.. The story flips 180 degrees suddenly.. Ch64 - All MC secret exposed to his girlfriend.. Ch87 - 3 months since he was on the Outer World Zone.. he slowly increases his strength.. (steady pace) Ch94 - 6 months since he is on the Outer World zone.. His strength started to increase faster. (Steady pace) Ch122 - 1 year since he was on the Outer World zone.. (steady pace) Ch129 - 2 years since he was on the Outer World zone.. (steady pace) Ch139 - 3 years since he was on the Outer World zone.. He almost reached the level of OP.. (steady pace) Ch142 - 5 years since he was on the Outer World zone.. He has become super OP.. (steady pace) Ch152 - Return to home, the "fake" save zone for Humanity.. (slow pace) Ch164 - party function activated.. MC started sharing his golden finger, "system" with other people.. MC goal is to become a sponsor for other people, so while they do the work, he sit back and watch from behind.. This is where the story becomes boring as the system only rewards MC as he sponsors his "party" member.. Sponsor here means that MC gives as many opportunities, items, techniques, weapons, skills, and so on to make his people stronger.. Remember the word "Humanity Strongest Backer" in the title, it kinda mean he will act as a rich sponsor to his party member, sharing his golden finger - the system and many more.. I hate the idea of "sharing power" or "nakama power," which is the reason I stopped reading many novels due to these reasons.. Well, the novel is quite good and nice. Unfortunately, it has become the type of novel that I hate starting Ch164.. I would rate this novel 5 stars from Ch1 until Ch164.. I no longer have any interest in this novel after Ch.164.. Well, it kinda my fault for misunderstanding the title of this novel.. I thought, when the author wrote "Idle mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer" as it title, it is mean that MC is the "mysterious guys" who keep his identity a secret and always helped Humanity behind the scene or in secret.. So, I am sure someone might love these "sharing power" or "nakama power," so good luck.. *My inner thought: 'why, why, why this story goes toward that direction, it make me upset and heartbroken 💔'

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7CigarettePuffs

I've read 50 or so chapters and can say one thing for sure. The writing is really bad. Not grammatically, it's just bad. Author will stretch unimportant things like registration this, assessment that, to an absurd degree and insert tens of incomplete information in between. "You'll know in future. " is what you'll be reading most of the time. Every character has spoonfed the MC literally every small thing. Things like "Place your hand here. " ,"Take a breath" etc. Just word count stuff. Basically the novel has expands on things of no importance and gives incomplete information on things of importance . And I don't like it. You can actually skin through the chapters in 40 seconds and not lose any information. Really .

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Nayrosorous

It was good at first, but around 350 chapters, the way the words were phrased seems like it has been made from a single unedited prompt from chatgpt. The words were too cringe to read anymore, its overwhelmingly descriptive. Too much use of the word "palpable". It's too descriptive in every line that it seems inhuman anymore. Yeah I like deep words, but reading from chapter 350 and onwards uses overkill of deep words.

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Ashton_Denton

I really don’t like it I don’t know why tho it has what I like just for some reason I don’t like it

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B0nfire
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Very good very solid book, I found it weird when the system literally stopped functioning as an idle system but it was fine, the story and progression was good. But once the first arc is over and he goes off to the fey era, there was no real grip to the story and most chapters felt like fillers with little mention of research he’s pursuing or spells he’s experimenting with. Great book, just no longer worth the coins I buy for it.

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Kngcj02
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The book was not bad, but I felt as if the story remained the same after a while, it became repetitive

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stonedinthis_life

Not bad. It's average but at least it's short and completed. Good enough to read when you have nothing else to do. The story felt rushed and so does my review.

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Slingshot

This novel is pretty awesome, if you're looking for something that has a good pacing and a decent MC. I loved reading this, oh if the apocalyptic part throws you off, don't worry it's not that bad. The one thing I might consider a 'bad' thing is probably no smart antagonists so far, which for me is fine because there's a decent reason for it and also enough foreshadowing. There's still a lot of time left with more antagonists so it might get better. overall a pretty good read, I'd recommend it

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GregLikesBooks

So, the author built this entire setting and story. Then it felt like he changed his mind and just said let's time skip and blow it all up. Turn the ghost/spirit girl into his girlfriend(or something like that) and tell her his most important secrets. Suddenly he has all this gear and spells out of nowhere. This transition just did not work for me at all. I feel like I've read 60 chapters in vain.

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Ashton_Denton

It just is not for me so sorry and I Hope now that I have put a review it will top recommending i to Me

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TOP_G
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Good book it keeps you entertained but it has less chapters

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VasiliosReid

The novel started out decent for me and even when the system overhauled it was still interesting and unique. But around the time of the Elstar Arc it lost all appeal. The system, the main reason you and I started reading it, all but disappeared. If the time was taken and the pacing was kept at a steady speed this could've been a good novel. But the inconsistencies and honestly disservice the author has done makes it nauasting to read. I hope in the future the Author learns from the mistakes of this one. At least he didn't go with the cliche "The peak isn't the peak" that many novels have where the established Peak of Cultivation isn't even a starting point but even then I think it would've made the Beast and Death Gods more interesting. Overall I give it about a 2 Star.

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VaporaFire

boring asf, I'm at ch53. Too much talking.

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solracmar

The author overall layout is good. the world background and character design is well made and withou holes and logical overall worth reading.However, the author is too found of time skip, and each time he does, he forgot some crucial plots that he could easily solve with a paragraph and that reduce the writing quality and story development.for example, the worst one is in chapter 17 he creates a plot of sexual abuse and the worst off a child, and the mc swears revenge.the theme is serious, and it is not something that you should just write and forget, but the author did. the mc grows in power and authority and could easily solve this, and just one line from the author would show care, making it that he didn't use a serious matter for cheap shock.there are other characters and situations, especially about City m and the academy, that show that the author doesn't care about the closure of plots and just wants to provoke emotions and care from the readers.thease are mostly details, but with how careful the world background and character design was made, especially in the case of the abuse, it is not something easily forgotten and forgiven .

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AstraCelestia

It was good at the beginning, but after chapter 60 I found that it went downhill.

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joelburch

This novel really starts to shine the moment paid chapters start, lol. The story really takes off, and you really see the concept of the story pushed to its full potential. Make sure you give it a real chance, it's one of the good ones.

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okaayyyyyy

Decent story. Writing quality could use a lot of improvements. Especially with the dialogue. World background is good though. 929 181 272 505.

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Maneuverability

Great novel! I loved the characters, plot, and writing. My only issue was when the other humans became close to MC’s level, but that’s just my op mc preference. 👍🏼

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kumo_200

i loved the novel but you have to read first around 50 chapters before being hooked in it, so in summary if u dont like slow starts then dont read it but if u do or can tolorate it then its fantastic

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M_Shaz_3A

the idle mage is never idle.... and that too he can only grind spells... the story jumps a lot and few mistakes here and there... as I am reading chapter 80... I am very intrigued and want to know when will he use the remaining bloodline pills or will he stay 5 years there just to remove his curse. good novel

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The_Void_Monarch

This book is definitely one that gets better the further chapters you read. I was close to dropping around the academy arc bc those are always super boring but — I’m truthfully glad I didn’t since the story just goes into full gear around this time. The rich history and content mixed with beautiful storytelling makes this a fun read for me. I hope you all will give it a try :)

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aman_singh_2346

Good to read and thanks for the reply and the offer letter for the post of service officer for the post of executive assistant assistant manager for the organisation based on the following roles in the office of London office assistant with the

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MorningStar_zone

I should say, its interesting, funny , and extremely pleasing to read.

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Bromelth

Biggest complaint is author states how guns and such don’t work outside of the zone so teaches MC to use a staff and be powerful then literally gives him magic guns. This ruined the immersion for me and is the reason I quit reading.

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Redzeth
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Starts of with world building (60 chapters or so), then goes into accumulating power and fighting, and around ch 180 goes into the promised kingdom building. Author is obviously new since he throws away established plot from time to time. Still what he does write is pretty enjoyable, especially like the enemies. Demons ranging from imps to any form of undead, while angels are abominations of wings and eyes with a halo on top. All of them spreading corruption and making live impossible to flourish in places they conquered. Highly recommend, better than most the garbage that is being released recently.

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GodOfDogs

A good story but the only thing is it got kind of boring after ch 150

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Invalid_

Start was kinda boring with all the info dumps but after ashton went solo it became better.......................................................................

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Brandy_Bloodworth

Honestly, in love with this book it did get a little annoying at the end because it looks like the writing changed a little bit but that could just be me

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Dabones_241

it's a good story but towards the end the chapter quality just dropped off in towards literally blank parts in the chapter entire pages just blank

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Zeustiak

This isn’t a novel with an idle system, this is a novel written by an author with an idle brain that just spends chapter after chapter info dumbing random garbage onto the page. Like the MC’s trip to the grocery store, or entire chapters filled with history that the reader has no reason to care about.

2mth
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Captain_Spoiler

Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] This is a story of MC who transmigrated into a magical world where he possessing a body of orphan teenager who on his way to Awakening place. This world is occupied by Human race UNTIL the invaders from otherworld come. These otherworld races called Celestial Race (the wings and eyes galore race) and the Hypogeans (creatures with horns and human called them Demon). The Revenants are a group of mysterious individuals coming from both the Hypogean and Celestial Race. They are the scourge of Humanity, bandits who worked together for the sake of profit. Most of the time, it is said that they're hostile to each other due to their innate differences, yet they were united due to their insatiable desire to eat human flesh. The human race is considered as oh-so-frail and weak and helpless race. Against these race, humans are helpless. Fortunately, the world had seen human sufferings.. It heard all the grievances that humans forcibly swallowed. And it granted the deepest wishes that all humans want. A chance. That's what humans finally received. A chance to push back the aggressors and a chance to carve a piece of this world for humans. Spiritual Root, Martial Spirit, and Providence. That's the gift that Gaia, world consciousness gave to Humanity.. Since you're a modern person, this would be your Physique/Mageroot, Battle Spirit/Magical Artifact, and Providence/Destiny's Qi. There were groups who united under the same banner, sharing the ideals of never giving up until Humanity rises up and becomes strong enough to push back the invaders. These people are the Dawn of Hope Federation. As for those who gave up, well, they called "losers" during those time. Both have the same goal, for "human survivability," but their approach toward the goal are different. The Dawn of Hope Federation raised an army. It was a glorious era where there'd be expeditions left and right. There were many casualties, but the resources we accumulated rose to an all-time high. This group was the one responsible for building the foundations of modern human society. The Dawn of Hope Federation had a lasting history and a glorious streak of achievements, but like they said: "One bad apple is enough to spoil the entire harvest." The fault lies in the number of casualties humans suffered under the hands of the Celestials and Hypogeans. As the bodies piled up, the mentality of the battle-hardened warriors was getting worse and worse as time passed. Eventually, the whole purpose of the Dawn of Hope Federation was tinted. 'Working hard for the sake of a brighter tomorrow' became 'a battle of attrition'. Eventually, it turned into simple 'Endurance'. As their eyes became clouded by too much bloodshed, they were unable to see the faint rays of hope that appeared on the horizon. It only became worse when a group of strong Celestials and Hypogeans gave Humanity an "Ultimatum". Hope was dashed as soon as it appeared. The Dawn of Hope's purpose crumbled beneath their feat, and a pact was made. This is when the internal strife began. "Losers" influences started to grow wider. Humans finally succumbed, and they begin to raise fat, fat sheep for the Celestials and Hypogeans to enjoy. Just like how we raise a cow to become our delicacies, that is how Celestials and Hypogeans see at humans. In exchange, Humans can enjoy their peace in this little bubble (Doom: Human "safe house") they have for themselves. Who are these fat sheep you ask? Well...turn to Humanity History Books. Count until you reach the 101st Hero you see recorded in there... Starting from that person until the very recent one, those are the sheep that I'm talking about. Only the 1st until 100th Hero are the real Humanity hero who truly against the invaders. This all sounds bad if I put it this way, but it doesn't mean that the "losers" like doing this either. They stated it as 'Enduring Victory'. Those politicians are two-faced people, old and sly foxes, but most of them genuinely meant well. By catering to the demands of the enemies to honour the pact and by playing the role of being the antagonist to their race, these bastards were able to hide their true intentions to fool those stupid invaders. They might've sacrificed the Heroes they raised, but it doesn't mean that they're forgotten all Heroes contributed to humanity as a whole. In truth, with excellent acting that could even fool themselves, they managed to save everything that the heroes contributed to Humanity right the nose of those pesky invaders. Ch1-Ch60 - Introduction of the novel (superb slow pace).. Ch60 - Everything changes.. The story flips 180 degrees suddenly.. Ch64 - All MC secret exposed to his girlfriend.. Ch87 - 3 months since he was on the Outer World Zone.. he slowly increases his strength.. (steady pace) Ch94 - 6 months since he is on the Outer World zone.. His strength started to increase faster. (Steady pace) Ch122 - 1 year since he was on the Outer World zone.. (steady pace) Ch129 - 2 years since he was on the Outer World zone.. (steady pace) Ch139 - 3 years since he was on the Outer World zone.. He almost reached the level of OP.. (steady pace) Ch142 - 5 years since he was on the Outer World zone.. He has become super OP.. (steady pace) Ch152 - Return to home, the "fake" save zone for Humanity.. (slow pace) Ch164 - party function activated.. MC started sharing his golden finger, "system" with other people.. MC goal is to become a sponsor for other people, so while they do the work, he sit back and watch from behind.. This is where the story becomes boring as the system only rewards MC as he sponsors his "party" member.. Sponsor here means that MC gives as many opportunities, items, techniques, weapons, skills, and so on to make his people stronger.. Remember the word "Humanity Strongest Backer" in the title, it kinda mean he will act as a rich sponsor to his party member, sharing his golden finger - the system and many more.. I hate the idea of "sharing power" or "nakama power," which is the reason I stopped reading many novels due to these reasons.. Well, the novel is quite good and nice. Unfortunately, it has become the type of novel that I hate starting Ch164.. I would rate this novel 5 stars from Ch1 until Ch164.. I no longer have any interest in this novel after Ch.164.. Well, it kinda my fault for misunderstanding the title of this novel.. I thought, when the author wrote "Idle mage: Humanity's Strongest Backer" as it title, it is mean that MC is the "mysterious guys" who keep his identity a secret and always helped Humanity behind the scene or in secret.. So, I am sure someone might love these "sharing power" or "nakama power," so good luck.. *My inner thought: 'why, why, why this story goes toward that direction, it make me upset and heartbroken 💔'

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7CigarettePuffs

I've read 50 or so chapters and can say one thing for sure. The writing is really bad. Not grammatically, it's just bad. Author will stretch unimportant things like registration this, assessment that, to an absurd degree and insert tens of incomplete information in between. "You'll know in future. " is what you'll be reading most of the time. Every character has spoonfed the MC literally every small thing. Things like "Place your hand here. " ,"Take a breath" etc. Just word count stuff. Basically the novel has expands on things of no importance and gives incomplete information on things of importance . And I don't like it. You can actually skin through the chapters in 40 seconds and not lose any information. Really .

7mth
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Nayrosorous

It was good at first, but around 350 chapters, the way the words were phrased seems like it has been made from a single unedited prompt from chatgpt. The words were too cringe to read anymore, its overwhelmingly descriptive. Too much use of the word "palpable". It's too descriptive in every line that it seems inhuman anymore. Yeah I like deep words, but reading from chapter 350 and onwards uses overkill of deep words.

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Ashton_Denton

I really don’t like it I don’t know why tho it has what I like just for some reason I don’t like it

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B0nfire
LV 14 Badge

Very good very solid book, I found it weird when the system literally stopped functioning as an idle system but it was fine, the story and progression was good. But once the first arc is over and he goes off to the fey era, there was no real grip to the story and most chapters felt like fillers with little mention of research he’s pursuing or spells he’s experimenting with. Great book, just no longer worth the coins I buy for it.

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Kngcj02
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The book was not bad, but I felt as if the story remained the same after a while, it became repetitive

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stonedinthis_life

Not bad. It's average but at least it's short and completed. Good enough to read when you have nothing else to do. The story felt rushed and so does my review.

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Slingshot

This novel is pretty awesome, if you're looking for something that has a good pacing and a decent MC. I loved reading this, oh if the apocalyptic part throws you off, don't worry it's not that bad. The one thing I might consider a 'bad' thing is probably no smart antagonists so far, which for me is fine because there's a decent reason for it and also enough foreshadowing. There's still a lot of time left with more antagonists so it might get better. overall a pretty good read, I'd recommend it

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GregLikesBooks

So, the author built this entire setting and story. Then it felt like he changed his mind and just said let's time skip and blow it all up. Turn the ghost/spirit girl into his girlfriend(or something like that) and tell her his most important secrets. Suddenly he has all this gear and spells out of nowhere. This transition just did not work for me at all. I feel like I've read 60 chapters in vain.

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Ashton_Denton

It just is not for me so sorry and I Hope now that I have put a review it will top recommending i to Me

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TOP_G
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Good book it keeps you entertained but it has less chapters

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VasiliosReid

The novel started out decent for me and even when the system overhauled it was still interesting and unique. But around the time of the Elstar Arc it lost all appeal. The system, the main reason you and I started reading it, all but disappeared. If the time was taken and the pacing was kept at a steady speed this could've been a good novel. But the inconsistencies and honestly disservice the author has done makes it nauasting to read. I hope in the future the Author learns from the mistakes of this one. At least he didn't go with the cliche "The peak isn't the peak" that many novels have where the established Peak of Cultivation isn't even a starting point but even then I think it would've made the Beast and Death Gods more interesting. Overall I give it about a 2 Star.

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VaporaFire

boring asf, I'm at ch53. Too much talking.

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solracmar

The author overall layout is good. the world background and character design is well made and withou holes and logical overall worth reading.However, the author is too found of time skip, and each time he does, he forgot some crucial plots that he could easily solve with a paragraph and that reduce the writing quality and story development.for example, the worst one is in chapter 17 he creates a plot of sexual abuse and the worst off a child, and the mc swears revenge.the theme is serious, and it is not something that you should just write and forget, but the author did. the mc grows in power and authority and could easily solve this, and just one line from the author would show care, making it that he didn't use a serious matter for cheap shock.there are other characters and situations, especially about City m and the academy, that show that the author doesn't care about the closure of plots and just wants to provoke emotions and care from the readers.thease are mostly details, but with how careful the world background and character design was made, especially in the case of the abuse, it is not something easily forgotten and forgiven .

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AstraCelestia

It was good at the beginning, but after chapter 60 I found that it went downhill.

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joelburch

This novel really starts to shine the moment paid chapters start, lol. The story really takes off, and you really see the concept of the story pushed to its full potential. Make sure you give it a real chance, it's one of the good ones.

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okaayyyyyy

Decent story. Writing quality could use a lot of improvements. Especially with the dialogue. World background is good though. 929 181 272 505.

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Maneuverability

Great novel! I loved the characters, plot, and writing. My only issue was when the other humans became close to MC’s level, but that’s just my op mc preference. 👍🏼

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kumo_200

i loved the novel but you have to read first around 50 chapters before being hooked in it, so in summary if u dont like slow starts then dont read it but if u do or can tolorate it then its fantastic

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M_Shaz_3A

the idle mage is never idle.... and that too he can only grind spells... the story jumps a lot and few mistakes here and there... as I am reading chapter 80... I am very intrigued and want to know when will he use the remaining bloodline pills or will he stay 5 years there just to remove his curse. good novel

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The_Void_Monarch

This book is definitely one that gets better the further chapters you read. I was close to dropping around the academy arc bc those are always super boring but — I’m truthfully glad I didn’t since the story just goes into full gear around this time. The rich history and content mixed with beautiful storytelling makes this a fun read for me. I hope you all will give it a try :)

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aman_singh_2346

Good to read and thanks for the reply and the offer letter for the post of service officer for the post of executive assistant assistant manager for the organisation based on the following roles in the office of London office assistant with the

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MorningStar_zone

I should say, its interesting, funny , and extremely pleasing to read.

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Bromelth

Biggest complaint is author states how guns and such don’t work outside of the zone so teaches MC to use a staff and be powerful then literally gives him magic guns. This ruined the immersion for me and is the reason I quit reading.

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Redzeth
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Starts of with world building (60 chapters or so), then goes into accumulating power and fighting, and around ch 180 goes into the promised kingdom building. Author is obviously new since he throws away established plot from time to time. Still what he does write is pretty enjoyable, especially like the enemies. Demons ranging from imps to any form of undead, while angels are abominations of wings and eyes with a halo on top. All of them spreading corruption and making live impossible to flourish in places they conquered. Highly recommend, better than most the garbage that is being released recently.

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GodOfDogs

A good story but the only thing is it got kind of boring after ch 150

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Invalid_

Start was kinda boring with all the info dumps but after ashton went solo it became better.......................................................................

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