good concept; poor execution. this story is mostly held back by the author's literacy skills. the underlying principles of the story are any interesting, but the author's capabilities to tell that story prevent it from being enjoyed.
good concept; poor execution. this story is mostly held back by the author's literacy skills. the underlying principles of the story are any interesting, but the author's capabilities to tell that story prevent it from being enjoyed.
good concept; poor execution. this story is mostly held back by the author's literacy skills. the underlying principles of the story are any interesting, but the author's capabilities to tell that story prevent it from being enjoyed.