Teken_

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2022-03-27 入りました Global
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Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Posted

so much gay baiting, such a waste of time

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

pretty sure the dude doesn't know what consent is either

"Ah so that's the case. Hahahaha! Young lady, your thought process is quite 'cute' hahahaha! You're one of those tsundere things aren't you? Ok ok, I got it. I 'won't' be Attie's grandpa." Li Jian laughed as he gave her a knowing wink.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

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Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

this dude is fucking disgusting, she should just kill him

"I hope the way I convinced her was to your liking. Since I went out of my way to do this, don't you think I should get some kind of reward?" Nan Tian asked with a smile.

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl?

Fantasy · Reili

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

truly utterly uninteresting, gonna have to skip my way through this bs

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

I'm really not sure i can give this story anymore of my time, this is just another disappointing chapter. I might come back after I've let a few chapters release so I can just skip the unimportant ones. I'm really disappointed in the author

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

I'd really enjoy a catch up with Maria, and how she is doing. feels a bit like she was abandoned as a character

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

tbh not the biggest of the pov of her parents, personally just not a fan of reading about hetro couples. maybe try a pacing shift, the last few chapters seems to be a bit on the filler side than progressing any sort of story

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

pretty sure I could have just skipped this chapter and it wouldn't affect my understanding of the story in any way. you don't need to do a chapter each of its just gonna be filled

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Commented

keep up the good work

Teken_
Teken_
1 years ago
Replied to Merricia_Dickson

you just need to work on your prose, the idea is solid