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I like this story. Especially, MC is a White Martian part. Not only Martians are my favorite alien race in DC but also Shapeshifting is my favorite ability of fictions. The best part is no-harem and OP cheat MC aka fan-baits. A good story don't need fanbaits(aka Harems and op MCs). I prefer deep romance like enemies or rivals becomes lover and character improvement like MC improve his skills by using his experiences of his losts and mistake. These things make you story one of my favorite readlist and I hope you gonna update this story soon.
Very Good. I very much enjoy the exploration of psychic powers as well as the focus on shapeshifting. ............................................................
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I'm definitely enjoying it, the author has perfectly fit in the gaps of Mars ecosystem and the logic behind everything the mc does is great, I especially like the characterization of the mc and how well he fits into the story . I hope the author doesn't drop it because its been a while since the last update
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pretty good story so far, interesting backstory and new concept for the profession.
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great idea for a story, where the actual execution is of good quality. I'm looking forward to seeing what the decision to not add the protagonist to the team will be like.
please don't drop it's amazing and I'm truly enjoying reading this great work THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING YOU'VE WRITTEN SO FAR!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍
IT'S SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is great I would love to read more. This story is more interesting than most. Hope to read more of your work. 🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼.[img=update]
well I'm liking very much this fic, just hoping for more chapters. :) ....................................
great stuff. . always thought it was a shame there werent many martian fics. hope you keep posting.
Enjoying it so far, the character, setting is interesting, grammer and pacing is good as of the first few chaps. This has promise so far, just needs to stick the landing once the plot picks up.
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Great story, I hope you can keep updating and not drop it...................................................................................................
Shameless author review / extra synopsis. This is my first ever fanfic and writing endeavor so I'm expecting it to be trash but I'm going to try my best to make it not that. This is a young justice DC fanfic self insert as a martian, there's a ton of way's this story can go and I would love all the feedback I can get! Thanks everyone who checks out the story!
I like this story. Especially, MC is a White Martian part. Not only Martians are my favorite alien race in DC but also Shapeshifting is my favorite ability of fictions. The best part is no-harem and OP cheat MC aka fan-baits. A good story don't need fanbaits(aka Harems and op MCs). I prefer deep romance like enemies or rivals becomes lover and character improvement like MC improve his skills by using his experiences of his losts and mistake. These things make you story one of my favorite readlist and I hope you gonna update this story soon.
Very Good. I very much enjoy the exploration of psychic powers as well as the focus on shapeshifting. ............................................................
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
I'm definitely enjoying it, the author has perfectly fit in the gaps of Mars ecosystem and the logic behind everything the mc does is great, I especially like the characterization of the mc and how well he fits into the story . I hope the author doesn't drop it because its been a while since the last update
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pretty good story so far, interesting backstory and new concept for the profession.
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great idea for a story, where the actual execution is of good quality. I'm looking forward to seeing what the decision to not add the protagonist to the team will be like.
please don't drop it's amazing and I'm truly enjoying reading this great work THANK YOU FOR EVERYTHING YOU'VE WRITTEN SO FAR!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍👍
IT'S SOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M REALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is great I would love to read more. This story is more interesting than most. Hope to read more of your work. 🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼🐼.[img=update]
well I'm liking very much this fic, just hoping for more chapters. :) ....................................
great stuff. . always thought it was a shame there werent many martian fics. hope you keep posting.
Enjoying it so far, the character, setting is interesting, grammer and pacing is good as of the first few chaps. This has promise so far, just needs to stick the landing once the plot picks up.
I believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in youI believe in you I believe in you I believe in you I believe in you
Great story, I hope you can keep updating and not drop it...................................................................................................
Shameless author review / extra synopsis. This is my first ever fanfic and writing endeavor so I'm expecting it to be trash but I'm going to try my best to make it not that. This is a young justice DC fanfic self insert as a martian, there's a ton of way's this story can go and I would love all the feedback I can get! Thanks everyone who checks out the story!