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レビューを書くI absolutely love this book, its been 33 chapters and i feel like a review should be written about this great story. Even though its only just at its beginning, i feel like the author has done a really great job in making it work. Now i dont want to say this is the best or even one of the best. As everyone has different likes and dislikes and personally this novel has (atleast till now) everything that i like, so i am going to mention what i liked about this novel and if you find you might also like some of the stuff I mentioned give this novel a try you might enjoy it. 1. The MC wakes up in the past with memories of his future. Basically its a second chance novel ( I absolutely love this trope). 2. The MC has his priorities right and doesn't delay matters and handles them with caution and due diligence. 3. He is not a perfect person doesn't know alot of stuff and is trying his best to learn and make up for his weaknesses 4. The author tries alot of things related to game which i haven't seen before much atleast on webnovel originals. 5. It reminds of Rebirth of the Strongest Sword God, which is definitely in my 10 top webnovel list. So yeah i love this book. Note for author: Love your work 😁👍 Hope you are contracted soon for this novel and you put out more chapters faster cause its good.
Author here. This is my wsa addition, and a book that I spent a lot of time trying to perfect. Although I don't dare claim that it is, I think that this is a well written book. There will be guild building, op mc, absolutely no harem, and good progression, I promise. and ever since I finished my exams, I have also tried my best to maintain a 2 chapter a day release cycle. I think that you will love the book as long as u give it a chance.
It's really a big story, I'll take my time with it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Unfortunately the author has stopped updating but as far as world building and settings go, this work is pretty great. Minimal spelling and grammatical errors, story flows well, and the skill system doesn’t seem egregiously random/runs on some logic unlike other novels I’ve read recently on here. Don’t get caught in the cliche beginning as once the setting is established, the novel does a fantastic job with background and world settings that are pretty unique to this story.
Hello can anyone tell me if this book will continue or is it axed. what is ging to happen to this book? Also if possible tell me a way to ask this to something without using the reveiws
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Não consegui passar do 8º capítulo, e olha que tentei MUITO! Caso tenha ficado melhor nos capítulos mais recentes, devido ao alto número de críticas, sugiro que o autor reescreva os capítulos iniciais. Há muitas falhas no enredo, além de as falas das personagens serem infantis e rotineiramente acontecer coisas sem sentido algum.
I'd like to actually ask the author to release the last few chapters for everybody, it's not that i think this was dropped but it's been a few months and we just want to read the last few chapters if possibleIt's a good story, not the best but enjoyable.
This is kinda trash, Initially the world description is interesting only for it to never really be developed upon. The MC while magically being able to remember almost everything from the next 10yrs that he experienced, at the same time manages to be incredibly consistently dumb. Very quickly while reading you'll learn to take everything that is said with a grain of salt, laws are suppose to be super serious and harsh but everyone treats them like a suggestion, anything said by majority of the other characters makes little to no sens and they seem unable to understand basic concepts. We also get to enjoy the Chinese young master troupe for every passing character. The story itself has decent development totally passable but leaves you wanting, I still know little to nothing about why things are happening the way they are and why the world is like it is in this novel. Lastly I haven't read all of the currently available chapters so I don't know to what extent the author improves in writing quality towards the more recent releases but currently the first half of the chapters makes you feel that English is the authors second language. So Many Grammar Mistakes! I love the concept but I feel like I'ma have a stroke reading this at moments.
After seeing great reviews I decided to give the novel a read and was really disappointed. The way people talk in the novel is pretty odd and unnatural. The characters are a joke and have extremely low IQ Chinese novel villain issues going on. The world background makes no sense, you are facing an apocalypse with so many issues like a lack of food, and rather than have people work and improve the situation... The government forces people to play a video game?... Unless there are aliens really into Twitch content and want to watch a ton of people play a game and are willing to pay the world governments for it this is just silly. Much of the story so far seems like a rip off of other novels, extremely generic and nothing new or more interesting than those novels. I don't find this always bad but I'd hope it was at least a little more different to make things more interesting. For all I know that could change later in the novel but from reading even the good reviews I don't see that happening. Unless there are major improvements over time I can't recommend. I might try reading more at a later date, if it gets better I'll update my review.
ネタバレを明かすYay I'm happy you started writing again author please never drop this novel at least get it past 500 chapters
This is a ripoff of RSSG with worse quality writing, less emotion, and more plot holes and stuff that don't make sense. One example is that the stat system from RSSG is just stolen word for word, but the MC basically only increases two stats even though in RSSG some other stats increase automatically based on main stats. Despite the problems, it's not absolutely terrible though either
just read and you will understand that it's not a 5* work. most of you will most likely drop this ...
240 chapters in and still happy. The editing quality has stayed steadily good with only the odd mistake here and there. The characters are showing a bit less growth than I expected in the beginning but that's my only critique. The kingdom building is steady and well earned. Also the story development is solid with multiple goals and motivations moving along simultaneously.
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not bad but it gets boring fairly quick. The novel lacks the emotional pay off that can get me hooked on a novel. There's not enough conflict between the mc and other players. victory over other players is far more meaningfull than completing quest. No matter how many ss,sss or sss+ x ultra you add to a quest there is an implicit understanding that the mc will not fail. So there is little emotional reaction when they succeed.
165 chapters in and still excited to read more. I'm particularly happy with the steady and thought-out progression of the character and his guild. Side characters, including NPCs, are interesting and the world is being built out consistently.
This book has a lot of pros but the cons have started to outweigh then IMO. I have read until chapter 250 so I can say objectively that the story has a lot going for it story wise but when you pad your word count on literally every single chapter with a notice not to pirate, which will happen regardless, then I lose trust in your integrity as an author. (I understand not wanting your hard work to be given away for free but I shouldn't have to pay for your insecurity.) Second, filler chapters and filler content to pad the word count... With the amount of information that is nonrepetative in the 250 chapters I read you could have gotten the message across in half that number. That said, I do enjoy the concept and ideas you have but they need to be executed more efficiently. (Yes I understand that most webnovels are padded with repetition and filler but that doesn't make it right, does it?) With some slight tweaking and focusing more on story development rather than useless banter between characters then this story could be great.
This is trying to be RSSG with a rushed storyline and significantly less explanation. Honestly you might as well just go read RSSG. The writing QUALITY, insofar as grammar and punctuation, is fairly well done. EVERYTHING else is NOT. I don't want to spoil anything for someone who might actually enjoy the novel, but I will say the author is a half-step away from the plagiarism realm, and doesn't seem to care. The separate, clean living area for the rich? "'Shadow' King"? "Bright 'Horizon'"? You're not even trying to be subtle about it, man. E for Effort I guess, at least for getting a few hundred chapters out and sticking with it. If you meant this to be a quick rewrite of Lucky Old Cat's original work, then ignore me. If you meant this to be original in any way, shape or form? No.
This is truly well written. I've binged this all in one day (all 240 chapters) and I am truly impressed. It reminded me of reincarnation of the strongest swordsman, but it was all so much better. The arc for the Roman Empire and the character of Nolan was super well written. Please dont drop this author. This is incredibly good and I have a good feeling that it will blow up in no time!
I think the first guy was wrong this isn't like RSSG its more of a cross-over between RSSG and A New World. Has an MC that uses knowledge of the pass to get ahead of everyone else (check), uses that same knowledge to get legendary class, weapon, and armor when first logging in (check), Uses knowledge to setup up a guild building, hire craftsman, create guild, to not only farm karma but to get further ahead; stating later that the guild building will be useless later on (check). This isn't like A New World where it takes 100 chapters to get to the next day because the author over explains everything to even what type of dust is on the ground. But at the same time, this novel doesn't really say a whole lot either, at least so far...I try to read the first 50 chapters before leaving a review, more so if I want to see how things play out or if I can't make up my mind; for example what I did for "Bloodline system" I read till chapter 500 before I left a review". But, I've read up until chapter 60, and really reading this is equivalent to "I did this in game, then this, then this, and this happen, then I did this, and this, and this, and look I'm so lucky...btw my world is on the brink of destruction, with pullulated air, barren fields & crops, zombie's, massive radiation, etc...but hey we're fine now because I moved us to a better location, so we can play this game that the government is forcing down our throats"...and then I did this, and this, and this,.....haaa it makes no sense lol For those reasons I rated this as a 2.8. It's not bad but, story wise it doesn't make sense why; if his world was full of such destruction the government would force everyone to play a game; when their REAL bodies would still be in a fallen world....
Dropped. It’s a good story at first, but suffers from subtle plot armor. But that’s not what made me drop it, it was the endless chapters with this alliance. They just started off and are heading an alliance of the most wealthy and devious and most powerful people in the world? And they spent so much on not progressing story with this… so many chapters on Nolan…. I didn’t want to waste anymore coins.
is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO?
It interesting will see how it develops ******×************************************************************'' ******'' ****************×*******
It has a concept similar to The World Online and even almost the same name, but it is very different, different gameplay. I liked it a lot, I hope more, I found some small bugs, but nothing that makes me go down to 4 stars, could there be zombie players in the future? By being infected while connected and the zombie's mind would still stay connected.
It’s a decent novel not a great one but good to pass the time. Some improvements for author to think about would be details pertaining to characters like hair color , skin color ,personality, relationships , etc. Also, MC so far gets everything handed to him ; there are zero dificulties for him which makes the story bland and predictable.
Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book💯 only thing I can see, is that it’s missing some elements to make the book more full. It dwells a bit empty? Idk the right words but I’ll write another review when I find them
I absolutely love this book, its been 33 chapters and i feel like a review should be written about this great story. Even though its only just at its beginning, i feel like the author has done a really great job in making it work. Now i dont want to say this is the best or even one of the best. As everyone has different likes and dislikes and personally this novel has (atleast till now) everything that i like, so i am going to mention what i liked about this novel and if you find you might also like some of the stuff I mentioned give this novel a try you might enjoy it. 1. The MC wakes up in the past with memories of his future. Basically its a second chance novel ( I absolutely love this trope). 2. The MC has his priorities right and doesn't delay matters and handles them with caution and due diligence. 3. He is not a perfect person doesn't know alot of stuff and is trying his best to learn and make up for his weaknesses 4. The author tries alot of things related to game which i haven't seen before much atleast on webnovel originals. 5. It reminds of Rebirth of the Strongest Sword God, which is definitely in my 10 top webnovel list. So yeah i love this book. Note for author: Love your work 😁👍 Hope you are contracted soon for this novel and you put out more chapters faster cause its good.
Author here. This is my wsa addition, and a book that I spent a lot of time trying to perfect. Although I don't dare claim that it is, I think that this is a well written book. There will be guild building, op mc, absolutely no harem, and good progression, I promise. and ever since I finished my exams, I have also tried my best to maintain a 2 chapter a day release cycle. I think that you will love the book as long as u give it a chance.
It's really a big story, I'll take my time with it. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Unfortunately the author has stopped updating but as far as world building and settings go, this work is pretty great. Minimal spelling and grammatical errors, story flows well, and the skill system doesn’t seem egregiously random/runs on some logic unlike other novels I’ve read recently on here. Don’t get caught in the cliche beginning as once the setting is established, the novel does a fantastic job with background and world settings that are pretty unique to this story.
Hello can anyone tell me if this book will continue or is it axed. what is ging to happen to this book? Also if possible tell me a way to ask this to something without using the reveiws
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Não consegui passar do 8º capítulo, e olha que tentei MUITO! Caso tenha ficado melhor nos capítulos mais recentes, devido ao alto número de críticas, sugiro que o autor reescreva os capítulos iniciais. Há muitas falhas no enredo, além de as falas das personagens serem infantis e rotineiramente acontecer coisas sem sentido algum.
I'd like to actually ask the author to release the last few chapters for everybody, it's not that i think this was dropped but it's been a few months and we just want to read the last few chapters if possibleIt's a good story, not the best but enjoyable.
This is kinda trash, Initially the world description is interesting only for it to never really be developed upon. The MC while magically being able to remember almost everything from the next 10yrs that he experienced, at the same time manages to be incredibly consistently dumb. Very quickly while reading you'll learn to take everything that is said with a grain of salt, laws are suppose to be super serious and harsh but everyone treats them like a suggestion, anything said by majority of the other characters makes little to no sens and they seem unable to understand basic concepts. We also get to enjoy the Chinese young master troupe for every passing character. The story itself has decent development totally passable but leaves you wanting, I still know little to nothing about why things are happening the way they are and why the world is like it is in this novel. Lastly I haven't read all of the currently available chapters so I don't know to what extent the author improves in writing quality towards the more recent releases but currently the first half of the chapters makes you feel that English is the authors second language. So Many Grammar Mistakes! I love the concept but I feel like I'ma have a stroke reading this at moments.
After seeing great reviews I decided to give the novel a read and was really disappointed. The way people talk in the novel is pretty odd and unnatural. The characters are a joke and have extremely low IQ Chinese novel villain issues going on. The world background makes no sense, you are facing an apocalypse with so many issues like a lack of food, and rather than have people work and improve the situation... The government forces people to play a video game?... Unless there are aliens really into Twitch content and want to watch a ton of people play a game and are willing to pay the world governments for it this is just silly. Much of the story so far seems like a rip off of other novels, extremely generic and nothing new or more interesting than those novels. I don't find this always bad but I'd hope it was at least a little more different to make things more interesting. For all I know that could change later in the novel but from reading even the good reviews I don't see that happening. Unless there are major improvements over time I can't recommend. I might try reading more at a later date, if it gets better I'll update my review.
ネタバレを明かすYay I'm happy you started writing again author please never drop this novel at least get it past 500 chapters
This is a ripoff of RSSG with worse quality writing, less emotion, and more plot holes and stuff that don't make sense. One example is that the stat system from RSSG is just stolen word for word, but the MC basically only increases two stats even though in RSSG some other stats increase automatically based on main stats. Despite the problems, it's not absolutely terrible though either
just read and you will understand that it's not a 5* work. most of you will most likely drop this ...
240 chapters in and still happy. The editing quality has stayed steadily good with only the odd mistake here and there. The characters are showing a bit less growth than I expected in the beginning but that's my only critique. The kingdom building is steady and well earned. Also the story development is solid with multiple goals and motivations moving along simultaneously.
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not bad but it gets boring fairly quick. The novel lacks the emotional pay off that can get me hooked on a novel. There's not enough conflict between the mc and other players. victory over other players is far more meaningfull than completing quest. No matter how many ss,sss or sss+ x ultra you add to a quest there is an implicit understanding that the mc will not fail. So there is little emotional reaction when they succeed.
165 chapters in and still excited to read more. I'm particularly happy with the steady and thought-out progression of the character and his guild. Side characters, including NPCs, are interesting and the world is being built out consistently.
This book has a lot of pros but the cons have started to outweigh then IMO. I have read until chapter 250 so I can say objectively that the story has a lot going for it story wise but when you pad your word count on literally every single chapter with a notice not to pirate, which will happen regardless, then I lose trust in your integrity as an author. (I understand not wanting your hard work to be given away for free but I shouldn't have to pay for your insecurity.) Second, filler chapters and filler content to pad the word count... With the amount of information that is nonrepetative in the 250 chapters I read you could have gotten the message across in half that number. That said, I do enjoy the concept and ideas you have but they need to be executed more efficiently. (Yes I understand that most webnovels are padded with repetition and filler but that doesn't make it right, does it?) With some slight tweaking and focusing more on story development rather than useless banter between characters then this story could be great.
This is trying to be RSSG with a rushed storyline and significantly less explanation. Honestly you might as well just go read RSSG. The writing QUALITY, insofar as grammar and punctuation, is fairly well done. EVERYTHING else is NOT. I don't want to spoil anything for someone who might actually enjoy the novel, but I will say the author is a half-step away from the plagiarism realm, and doesn't seem to care. The separate, clean living area for the rich? "'Shadow' King"? "Bright 'Horizon'"? You're not even trying to be subtle about it, man. E for Effort I guess, at least for getting a few hundred chapters out and sticking with it. If you meant this to be a quick rewrite of Lucky Old Cat's original work, then ignore me. If you meant this to be original in any way, shape or form? No.
This is truly well written. I've binged this all in one day (all 240 chapters) and I am truly impressed. It reminded me of reincarnation of the strongest swordsman, but it was all so much better. The arc for the Roman Empire and the character of Nolan was super well written. Please dont drop this author. This is incredibly good and I have a good feeling that it will blow up in no time!
I think the first guy was wrong this isn't like RSSG its more of a cross-over between RSSG and A New World. Has an MC that uses knowledge of the pass to get ahead of everyone else (check), uses that same knowledge to get legendary class, weapon, and armor when first logging in (check), Uses knowledge to setup up a guild building, hire craftsman, create guild, to not only farm karma but to get further ahead; stating later that the guild building will be useless later on (check). This isn't like A New World where it takes 100 chapters to get to the next day because the author over explains everything to even what type of dust is on the ground. But at the same time, this novel doesn't really say a whole lot either, at least so far...I try to read the first 50 chapters before leaving a review, more so if I want to see how things play out or if I can't make up my mind; for example what I did for "Bloodline system" I read till chapter 500 before I left a review". But, I've read up until chapter 60, and really reading this is equivalent to "I did this in game, then this, then this, and this happen, then I did this, and this, and this, and look I'm so lucky...btw my world is on the brink of destruction, with pullulated air, barren fields & crops, zombie's, massive radiation, etc...but hey we're fine now because I moved us to a better location, so we can play this game that the government is forcing down our throats"...and then I did this, and this, and this,.....haaa it makes no sense lol For those reasons I rated this as a 2.8. It's not bad but, story wise it doesn't make sense why; if his world was full of such destruction the government would force everyone to play a game; when their REAL bodies would still be in a fallen world....
Dropped. It’s a good story at first, but suffers from subtle plot armor. But that’s not what made me drop it, it was the endless chapters with this alliance. They just started off and are heading an alliance of the most wealthy and devious and most powerful people in the world? And they spent so much on not progressing story with this… so many chapters on Nolan…. I didn’t want to waste anymore coins.
is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO? is this the copy of TWO?
It interesting will see how it develops ******×************************************************************'' ******'' ****************×*******
It has a concept similar to The World Online and even almost the same name, but it is very different, different gameplay. I liked it a lot, I hope more, I found some small bugs, but nothing that makes me go down to 4 stars, could there be zombie players in the future? By being infected while connected and the zombie's mind would still stay connected.
It’s a decent novel not a great one but good to pass the time. Some improvements for author to think about would be details pertaining to characters like hair color , skin color ,personality, relationships , etc. Also, MC so far gets everything handed to him ; there are zero dificulties for him which makes the story bland and predictable.
Yo, I’m going to say it, this is the next RSSG. The this book is really good. Everyone has to give power stones. I’m already hooked on this book💯 only thing I can see, is that it’s missing some elements to make the book more full. It dwells a bit empty? Idk the right words but I’ll write another review when I find them