'Is this skill too common?' Kyle thought and looked at his own shadow, the guy was goind to pop out any secound.
Becoming Dungeon Fodder
Fantasy · sahejRocks
It's a silly little comment but it makes things consistent. Hope it helps! Great work on this story. Keep up the good work! [img=recommend]
His hand movement started again yet this time they were different, the movements became more complex and fast, and when the dirt came out, it formed 2 Earth spears in a second. Kyle was controlling both the spear with one hand each. It was an upgrade since the intensive use and level-ups.
Becoming Dungeon Fodder
Fantasy · sahejRocks
Writing rule of thumb: if a number is less than ten you spell it out and if a number is over ten you put the number numerically. Two not 2 12 instead of 12 123 instead of one hundred and twenty three
His hand movement started again yet this time they were different, the movements became more complex and fast, and when the dirt came out, it formed 2 Earth spears in a second. Kyle was controlling both the spear with one hand each. It was an upgrade since the intensive use and level-ups.
Becoming Dungeon Fodder
Fantasy · sahejRocks
- Builder Minion x1
My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse
Games · Haobo_Zhang
FREE RESOURCES!
It was a dead person.
My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse
Games · Haobo_Zhang
Then suddenly, I heard the bloodcurdling scream of someone in the distance.
My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse
Games · Haobo_Zhang
Girls would often find themselves looking at him like he was a celebrity entering the school. For some reason, his light brown hair, fair build and deep, sapphire-blue eyes were a magnet to any teenage girl nearby.
My OP Minion System in the Apocalypse
Games · Haobo_Zhang
A foot?! How big is it's head?!
The sword of misery hit the skull of the monster, but only went in a foot inside, before it stopped, stuck.
World Online
Games · jdbeue
I think a scalp tingling feeling is the least of your worries if your heart is pierced by an arrow...
The feeling of an arrow piercing through the heart made one's scalp tingle.
I Have A City In An Alternate World
Sci-fi · Han Mubai
My Necromancer Class
Fantasy · Aero182