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dude, why is everything a harem!? it doesn't work for a lot of stories and basically ruin them. and don't go about saying, nah I'll do it right. or it's not a big harem. dude most of y'all can barely handle looking at woman. Harems don't work in a story that basically works better as a non-romance or singular romance. this novel would work better as one of those.
Very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jesus, this is just a great book. it's well written, the MC has a great personality. He meshes well into the world, and the way he uses his powers is great.
so much wasted potential, this story is very messy and confusing. out of nowhere the mc goes from being focused on some action to seeing or doing completely different things without any context. It's basically a parody of itself.
Good concept, but it’s literally a crack fic and the author doesn’t take it seriously
I think your story is a good concept and the first 14 chapters work very well. but I am a little afraid about the update since there is a 2-month gap between chapters 13 and 14.
This story is very convoluted. The characters have different personalities from canon, with Momo sending nudes to the boys on the second day randomly. The way the author writes makes it so the story shifts forward with no warning. One sentence, he’s at the beginning of the physical exam. The next sentence, he’s saving Midoriya from the zero pointer. It’s a very weird, wish-fulfillment novel, possible revolving around weird fetishes, based on the Momo thing.
you know I was reading it and it was great but then I'm not sure but momo sent a pic of here in her underwear to the mc's friends
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
This story makes me feel so much euphoria that it's absurd. I always find myself laughing and appreciating how the dark aspects of MHA are displayed in the story. Gotta make sure to say this, but the mc is a chad of a chad, a real manly man whose a great hero and a great friend. This is only story where I encourage the use of a harem, especially since it's told to you right from the start, there's no initial development. Everything is well told to display the plot and characters amazingly. Greatly recommended!
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This book is a rare masterpiece among the mountain of different fanfictions. Justin is so enjoyable to read about, as this guy that is confident in himself and doesn't shy away from talking with others.
Not the best, but I can see that it might actually be worth reading for the Biomass Manipulation alone. It’s a first for me to see, so I kinda want more chapters already.
I'm giving you this review because it's prototype fanfic. but pls don't disappoint me author-sama...........................................
i love it well the 2 chapters that are out the MC is looking to be a chad and the prtotyp power aren't nerfed it is promosing xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp
i have not read it yet, but i'm giving 5 stars just for the fact this is a prototype fic i am hyped😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
dude, why is everything a harem!? it doesn't work for a lot of stories and basically ruin them. and don't go about saying, nah I'll do it right. or it's not a big harem. dude most of y'all can barely handle looking at woman. Harems don't work in a story that basically works better as a non-romance or singular romance. this novel would work better as one of those.
Very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jesus, this is just a great book. it's well written, the MC has a great personality. He meshes well into the world, and the way he uses his powers is great.
so much wasted potential, this story is very messy and confusing. out of nowhere the mc goes from being focused on some action to seeing or doing completely different things without any context. It's basically a parody of itself.
Good concept, but it’s literally a crack fic and the author doesn’t take it seriously
I think your story is a good concept and the first 14 chapters work very well. but I am a little afraid about the update since there is a 2-month gap between chapters 13 and 14.
This story is very convoluted. The characters have different personalities from canon, with Momo sending nudes to the boys on the second day randomly. The way the author writes makes it so the story shifts forward with no warning. One sentence, he’s at the beginning of the physical exam. The next sentence, he’s saving Midoriya from the zero pointer. It’s a very weird, wish-fulfillment novel, possible revolving around weird fetishes, based on the Momo thing.
you know I was reading it and it was great but then I'm not sure but momo sent a pic of here in her underwear to the mc's friends
Fam this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
This story makes me feel so much euphoria that it's absurd. I always find myself laughing and appreciating how the dark aspects of MHA are displayed in the story. Gotta make sure to say this, but the mc is a chad of a chad, a real manly man whose a great hero and a great friend. This is only story where I encourage the use of a harem, especially since it's told to you right from the start, there's no initial development. Everything is well told to display the plot and characters amazingly. Greatly recommended!
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ネタバレを明かす This book is a rare masterpiece among the mountain of different fanfictions. Justin is so enjoyable to read about, as this guy that is confident in himself and doesn't shy away from talking with others.
Not the best, but I can see that it might actually be worth reading for the Biomass Manipulation alone. It’s a first for me to see, so I kinda want more chapters already.
I'm giving you this review because it's prototype fanfic. but pls don't disappoint me author-sama...........................................
i love it well the 2 chapters that are out the MC is looking to be a chad and the prtotyp power aren't nerfed it is promosing xpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxp
i have not read it yet, but i'm giving 5 stars just for the fact this is a prototype fic i am hyped😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
It's crack fic, alright, but its awesome one! Pretty please continue! 🙏🥺
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