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The worst hp fanfic I have ever had the misfortune to read. Magic has 0 explanation or depth. The m.c can't tell anyone of the knowledge he has , yet he can do things somehow which contradicts itself. For example he tries to tell dumbeldore the future and something like fate or destiny prevents Dumbledore from hearing him ,but he hears something else instead?? We aren't even told what Dumbledore heard exactly. Just the mc goes on about the story of h.p and Dumbledore go uh huh uh huh Them ok bye..... like wtf?.there is tons of handwavium going on throughout this book.. I don't understand how anyone likes this book at all. It's a contrived mess that makes me wish ill upon the original author. Its straight trash. The only redeeming quality is the actual writing. The story itself makes little to no sense. Don't waste your time reading it or trusting the fake reviews. The story will irk anyone with a logical mind.
One of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read(I have read a lot including pretty much all of the ones available in this site).
Rating may change but so far it will not. There is a 0% chance that other reviews were not deleted from this fanfic. The MC is a complete moron, and he wants to find Dumbledore to tell him everything that he knows. So this story is already bad with an MC like that. Then he somehow is unable to do the most simple spells and once he finally does the spell… he messes it up. But the teachers then reward the MC with points for failing to do the spell and not even doing it correctly. There has been little to no dialogue and is just a summary after summary of an idiot MC. Honestly, as of right now I suggest to not waste your time reading this fic.
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well im surprised. its not often that i find great fanfics, author you definitely doing a good job with this one. First the mc actually has a consistent personality, he has flaws and he sticks to his believes, the mc does feel like a legit character and not just some SI oc that is super handsome and can do everything, with no real personality, flaws or mistakes. Second it doesn't stick yo the canon, sure the events still happen but the mc changes them and does stuff his way. Third, other characters actually are written well, they git their own passions, their flaws and are unique not to mention even the harry crew are written quite accurate. i also liked that we actually see his growth in power, the author writes how the mc trained, how he failed, and how he succeeded, which is quite good. also i like how every house is treated, and how mc wants to change the system and treats everyone equally. overall really love the fanfic though if possible i would like it if more omakes are made, i just loved reading how other characters thought or felt about the mc and his oddities
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It's one of the most ingenious fanfictions I've ever read. The character development and Mc's character traits make it more interesting and readable. I can't give it less than 5 stars in any aspect!
one of the best hp fanfics i have ever read.. .. .. and I have read more than 700 one of the best hp fanfics i have ever read.. .. .. and I have read more than 700
Probably one of the funniest things i have read well also making pretty much all of the characters likable its just a great read and it wont be a waste of your time
it's a solid 4 stars. overall a good fanfic. But the first few chapters are not really that good and the way the Romance in the group of the MC was handeld was kinda bad. if you don't want to have romance than don't set it up like that so it was kinda lazy and only extra Drama that none needs. The plot itself is ok even if the MC feels Abit too nice and he sometimes just feels extra for the plot.
If you want to know my reasons then ask me, If not, then just accept it .,.,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,., , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
Easiest words would be that this is one of the rare hp fics that can actually stick to a relevant and riveting storyline without mc killing voldy in the first 2 chapters. The pacing is great, with year 5 just starting around chapter 106, (so 26 chaps per year of hogwarts (approx)) and Mc sticks with his beliefs and we see some meaningful character development. A very good fic that I would highly reccomend :)
Before i read im just curious who the fml lead is if there is one. and who might she be? And will he eventually get strong? I will change my review after i read :)
It is quite an interesting fanfic to read. I enjoy it a lot. My gratitude to author for writing this and continuing to post chapter after chapter so far
Each chapter leaves me speechless, this is a fanfic that I enjoy reading chapter by chapter, it has a lot of humor and good scenes, I don't know, I almost don't comment because I'll do it late and the first thing you want to do is move on to the next chapter because it catches you this fanfic
It gets insanely good from the end of year 1, so if you hand on till then you're in for a truly wonderful ride. Funny, wholesome and just enjoyable to read. It IS copied from another site but he the guy didn't exactly take credit for it so I see no reason for us to ruin it for by lowering reviews.
I have read the entire novel and these are my thoughts It’s a solid 9/10 The novel doesnt follow any of the usual cliches and tropes, instead following a main character who has an entirely different aproach to the iseiki lifestyle The mc has no issue removing threats before they even start, using logic and reasoning to clear his path and ensure his own growth. Unlike most novels the mc decides to seperate himself from the main issues of the cast and as a general actually does so (although he is relatively involved, as is nessisary for the plot) My only real note for the novel is that it lacks most forms of original adventures, instead following along with the main plot. However it is of note that as the story progresses the author has become steadily more creative
This book is a gem. I've basically given up on any Harry Potter fic, but this changed my mind. Nice work......................................
The best hp fanfic on the site. Has good update speed and progression. This story is fire. Here is 5 stars to keep you going.
It's pretty basic HP fanfic with an OC MC. It has two plot-lines going on. One MC learning magic, and while his starting point isn't great, it doesn't take long for him to start getting OP. Though there isn't any secret to it really other than him putting in most of his time and effort that a lazy child wouldn't. And room of requirement. (overall this plot-line is very basic but well executed) The other is MC dealing with the problems that come from the canon storyline. And well... things go very smoothly for him all the time. I will give it some props for MC dealing with stuff himself, rather than baby sitting Harry Potter like most fanfics do, but nonetheless, the ease at which MC deals with each problem without any problems arising make it boring. So ultimately, I would settle for this being rather average HP Fanfic, though someone that didn't read many HP fanfics could probably appreciate it more than me who read through this formula several times and seen better.
one of best novel I have ever read. This is not fanfiction it's literature, Shakespearean stuff. It gets confusing at start and MC feels like living like a third person but it definately gets better.
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It did take me some time to get used writing style and how he did write story but after that story is very good maybe bit too fast but still very good story. will waiting more chap did read all chap in 4days 🤣
this is probably the most well written Harry Potter book I have ever read. .................................................. ..........
I am rarely rewiewing any story at all, but this one was just too nice not to. Liked every aspect of the story so far and just wanted to say it. Thank you
This fic is a certified hood classic. One of the best HP fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading and probably one of the best fics I've read on this site. The author should get a medal or something.
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Good story, I like it and hope all it’s will continue. The background of the main character is interesting and more realistic than some fanfics (orphan, no ressources, no hidden family and not Cheat power), he is just a little wizard trying to live in this new world with just his knowledge.
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I remmber reading this on ffnet or spacebattles long time ago if youre the same author good, otherwise you can basically read this whole thing on one of the 2 sites, just google its a completed story
I like how the MC struggles with some aspects of magic. The difficulties he endures while attempting to learn transfiguration adds to the realism of the fanfic. One piece of advice: don't turn it into a harem.
I like it it's a good story but I can't get into it the only reason I started reading it was because of the tags attached to it a few of them match the storyline but not all of them it said hi IQ but he's not acting smart at all all he has is modern knowledge but that's it
ネタバレを明かす The worst hp fanfic I have ever had the misfortune to read. Magic has 0 explanation or depth. The m.c can't tell anyone of the knowledge he has , yet he can do things somehow which contradicts itself. For example he tries to tell dumbeldore the future and something like fate or destiny prevents Dumbledore from hearing him ,but he hears something else instead?? We aren't even told what Dumbledore heard exactly. Just the mc goes on about the story of h.p and Dumbledore go uh huh uh huh Them ok bye..... like wtf?.there is tons of handwavium going on throughout this book.. I don't understand how anyone likes this book at all. It's a contrived mess that makes me wish ill upon the original author. Its straight trash. The only redeeming quality is the actual writing. The story itself makes little to no sense. Don't waste your time reading it or trusting the fake reviews. The story will irk anyone with a logical mind.
One of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have ever read(I have read a lot including pretty much all of the ones available in this site).
Rating may change but so far it will not. There is a 0% chance that other reviews were not deleted from this fanfic. The MC is a complete moron, and he wants to find Dumbledore to tell him everything that he knows. So this story is already bad with an MC like that. Then he somehow is unable to do the most simple spells and once he finally does the spell… he messes it up. But the teachers then reward the MC with points for failing to do the spell and not even doing it correctly. There has been little to no dialogue and is just a summary after summary of an idiot MC. Honestly, as of right now I suggest to not waste your time reading this fic.
ネタバレを明かす well im surprised. its not often that i find great fanfics, author you definitely doing a good job with this one. First the mc actually has a consistent personality, he has flaws and he sticks to his believes, the mc does feel like a legit character and not just some SI oc that is super handsome and can do everything, with no real personality, flaws or mistakes. Second it doesn't stick yo the canon, sure the events still happen but the mc changes them and does stuff his way. Third, other characters actually are written well, they git their own passions, their flaws and are unique not to mention even the harry crew are written quite accurate. i also liked that we actually see his growth in power, the author writes how the mc trained, how he failed, and how he succeeded, which is quite good. also i like how every house is treated, and how mc wants to change the system and treats everyone equally. overall really love the fanfic though if possible i would like it if more omakes are made, i just loved reading how other characters thought or felt about the mc and his oddities
ネタバレを明かす It's one of the most ingenious fanfictions I've ever read. The character development and Mc's character traits make it more interesting and readable. I can't give it less than 5 stars in any aspect!
one of the best hp fanfics i have ever read.. .. .. and I have read more than 700 one of the best hp fanfics i have ever read.. .. .. and I have read more than 700
Probably one of the funniest things i have read well also making pretty much all of the characters likable its just a great read and it wont be a waste of your time
it's a solid 4 stars. overall a good fanfic. But the first few chapters are not really that good and the way the Romance in the group of the MC was handeld was kinda bad. if you don't want to have romance than don't set it up like that so it was kinda lazy and only extra Drama that none needs. The plot itself is ok even if the MC feels Abit too nice and he sometimes just feels extra for the plot.
If you want to know my reasons then ask me, If not, then just accept it .,.,.,.,..,,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,., , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,
Easiest words would be that this is one of the rare hp fics that can actually stick to a relevant and riveting storyline without mc killing voldy in the first 2 chapters. The pacing is great, with year 5 just starting around chapter 106, (so 26 chaps per year of hogwarts (approx)) and Mc sticks with his beliefs and we see some meaningful character development. A very good fic that I would highly reccomend :)
Before i read im just curious who the fml lead is if there is one. and who might she be? And will he eventually get strong? I will change my review after i read :)
It is quite an interesting fanfic to read. I enjoy it a lot. My gratitude to author for writing this and continuing to post chapter after chapter so far
Each chapter leaves me speechless, this is a fanfic that I enjoy reading chapter by chapter, it has a lot of humor and good scenes, I don't know, I almost don't comment because I'll do it late and the first thing you want to do is move on to the next chapter because it catches you this fanfic
It gets insanely good from the end of year 1, so if you hand on till then you're in for a truly wonderful ride. Funny, wholesome and just enjoyable to read. It IS copied from another site but he the guy didn't exactly take credit for it so I see no reason for us to ruin it for by lowering reviews.
I have read the entire novel and these are my thoughts It’s a solid 9/10 The novel doesnt follow any of the usual cliches and tropes, instead following a main character who has an entirely different aproach to the iseiki lifestyle The mc has no issue removing threats before they even start, using logic and reasoning to clear his path and ensure his own growth. Unlike most novels the mc decides to seperate himself from the main issues of the cast and as a general actually does so (although he is relatively involved, as is nessisary for the plot) My only real note for the novel is that it lacks most forms of original adventures, instead following along with the main plot. However it is of note that as the story progresses the author has become steadily more creative
This book is a gem. I've basically given up on any Harry Potter fic, but this changed my mind. Nice work......................................
The best hp fanfic on the site. Has good update speed and progression. This story is fire. Here is 5 stars to keep you going.
It's pretty basic HP fanfic with an OC MC. It has two plot-lines going on. One MC learning magic, and while his starting point isn't great, it doesn't take long for him to start getting OP. Though there isn't any secret to it really other than him putting in most of his time and effort that a lazy child wouldn't. And room of requirement. (overall this plot-line is very basic but well executed) The other is MC dealing with the problems that come from the canon storyline. And well... things go very smoothly for him all the time. I will give it some props for MC dealing with stuff himself, rather than baby sitting Harry Potter like most fanfics do, but nonetheless, the ease at which MC deals with each problem without any problems arising make it boring. So ultimately, I would settle for this being rather average HP Fanfic, though someone that didn't read many HP fanfics could probably appreciate it more than me who read through this formula several times and seen better.
one of best novel I have ever read. This is not fanfiction it's literature, Shakespearean stuff. It gets confusing at start and MC feels like living like a third person but it definately gets better.
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It did take me some time to get used writing style and how he did write story but after that story is very good maybe bit too fast but still very good story. will waiting more chap did read all chap in 4days 🤣
this is probably the most well written Harry Potter book I have ever read. .................................................. ..........
I am rarely rewiewing any story at all, but this one was just too nice not to. Liked every aspect of the story so far and just wanted to say it. Thank you
This fic is a certified hood classic. One of the best HP fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading and probably one of the best fics I've read on this site. The author should get a medal or something.
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Good story, I like it and hope all it’s will continue. The background of the main character is interesting and more realistic than some fanfics (orphan, no ressources, no hidden family and not Cheat power), he is just a little wizard trying to live in this new world with just his knowledge.
ネタバレを明かす I remmber reading this on ffnet or spacebattles long time ago if youre the same author good, otherwise you can basically read this whole thing on one of the 2 sites, just google its a completed story
I like how the MC struggles with some aspects of magic. The difficulties he endures while attempting to learn transfiguration adds to the realism of the fanfic. One piece of advice: don't turn it into a harem.
I like it it's a good story but I can't get into it the only reason I started reading it was because of the tags attached to it a few of them match the storyline but not all of them it said hi IQ but he's not acting smart at all all he has is modern knowledge but that's it
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