The criticism is simple, it is translated, and it has many good points, one is that the translation is excellently good, and what is plot, the chapters are very long as Chinese things usually are, the beginning has many explanations that I like, then there is Naruto's awakening in the past, honestly it was a real man Naruto, an old warrior who meets his waifu and does exactly what Naruto does, and then the meeting with the body where he is exactly now in chapter 8, a bit complicated what Naruto is trying to do, but perfect fandom to explain why the situation is, it would have obviously come out a little better with manipulation, but we are talking about Naruto and not someone else.
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a talk-no-jutsu, it's actually complicated what he's trying to do
I'm moved by this Naruto
It's a very common thing for women to do, they put their best friends in the friend zone and choose the bastard as lovers, and when their best friend gets a girlfriend, they feel resentful.
But… hadn't he always liked her? Sakura's emotions churned in confusion. She had always harbored feelings for Sasuke, but Naruto's constant affection had been something of a certainty in her life, even if she had never fully acknowledged it. Now, that unwavering attention seemed to have vanished, and with it came a strange, hollow ache in her chest. Was it regret? Loss? She wasn't sure.
Naruto: Rebirth Of The Child Of Prophecy
Anime & Comics · Ray_Sunburn
GOOD, he's not a dense protagonist or trying to be dumb, but a seasoned old warrior who saw his deceased wife again, this Naruto will destroy the world before Hinata suffers a scratch.
a very professional way to reincarnate in time, now without the wise man giving a power up, what will Naruto do?
So... well, it's something to start a plot, although it's getting very long.
Now the old monkey is really furious, his desire to let him go caused many deaths and Biwako almost died, that really changed things for the old man 3
"Obito's retreat doesn't mean this is over," Hiruzen said, addressing everyone. "Stay vigilant. The enemy won't give up so easily."
World Hopping With Gacha
Anime & Comics · _TheWatcher_