Reviews of Umbrus Shade, The Incredibly Annoyed Ravenclaw by OmnipresenceBeing - Webnovel

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alexny18111

This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.

2yr
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f3f3
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This is the fanfic that make me star reading others HP Fanfic’s. Is great that i can read it again in web novel format. Hope that you ask permission from the author.

2yr
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DeathlessInfinity

This is a gem and I just couldn't leave it on average rating of below 4. Basically it's an entertaining read with a funny mc that leaves you appreciative of his stupidly clever ways of solving problems.

2yr
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Pohoder_Pohoder

The hero is a pretty dumb person, isn't he? Three chapters were enough for me to understand this. After all, going to look for a book listing sweets to get into the director's office is an outstanding stupidity. Someone less dumb than the hero could, for example, write a letter and send it to Dumbledore....

1mth
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Chirag_Harikumar

Good story! No op character from the start and was developed very well. Though some parts were a little confusing. The ending could be a little better as well as the climax fight.

1mth
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Kentashiz22

Henceforth i declare this to be in the top three of all Harry Potter fanfics i have read. Thank you author for giving us this story. You have cooked

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2mth
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Glebby_Boi

What a masterpiece in both quality and execution 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻!!!

4mth
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Nihirizumu_

Well it's a good book. One of the best HP books I've finished with top tier quality and, at the time of writing this review it has been completed with 2 endings. The story was quite nice however in the first few chapters where he told Dumbledore about the future have me quite the scare and the part where he was suddenly adopted was also strange. Tbh I don't even renew his description so not much to say there. For background its a completed HP fic, but a HP fic non the less.

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5mth
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bilaljai

Writing is good not excellent. Story is entertaining. I recommend a read.

8mth
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Tim_QQQ

so fking boring . . . . . . . ....................................................................................................................

9mth
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Meta0202

I'm disappointed...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
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indigo_10

First Harry Potter fic that brings out the magic and whimsy of Hogwarts without feeling forced. Full points

1yr
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UnOriginalDude

Honestly it's been a year now and I forgot to give this good story a review, it's good that's all I can say, nothing less and nothing more, a good story.

1yr
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Ankit_Mourya_1249

I loved it actually a good read and I fully enjoyed it.

1yr
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Max_Bang

That twist at the end was beautiful. I do think this is one of the better HP stories out there. There were minor annoyances, but that’s easily overlooked.

1yr
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DJREF
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I love it; I wish it had a few more chapters explaining what the trio would do at the end, but that is not that important and can be easily interpreted by the story flow in our heads for a more open-ended ending.

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1yr
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Lion_Comet

I'll just leave this here.It's a good one. that's all you need to know

1yr
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Hepaistos

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

1yr
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Servydaos

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1yr
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7captain_king7

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC...............🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

2yr
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FrankJack

Good, one of the best fanfic novels I’ve ever read. Character explanation and writing is upmost perfect. I was a little sad during the start, but was quickly pulled into the story by its unique writing and goodness . I recommend this to all who enjoy a good laugh and read.

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2yr
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Simon_Gersbach

One of the best books I have ever read online. I a just want to thank yoh author for this gift you decided to write and publish. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

2yr
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Kalki001

This story was simply incredible. One of the only complete fanfic i have ever read and it is great.

2yr
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Agu_Aice

An amazing story with a really fufilling ending that I would recommend whole heartedly if you enjoy the Harry Potter series

2yr
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Snowstorm2000

one of the few books I've actually read the entirety of ............................................................. character requirements

2yr
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Jai_pareek

one of the best harry potter fan fiction

2yr
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Niloy_Das

Definitely one of the best Harry Potter fanfic out there. The only bad/sad part is that it ended too soon. I wish it had continued for at least one more year in the story. I was not ready for the goodbyes at all. 😭😭😭😭😭

2yr
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fikret

I quıet enjoyed story thouth start little bit shaky it take time to bond with story

2yr
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maxphantom

gay . . ........ ......,.......,..........

2yr
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Hadest_1304

this story is amazing. the mc is very charming and funny.

2yr
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castanho

Nao querendo ser tendencioso, mas considerando o nivel geral das fanfics, 5 estrelas em tudo mesmo, uma historia bem original, incrivelmente divertido, MC nao é overpower, mas é forte o suficiente e de uma maneira inteligente, bom, uma otima historia, se o autor escrever outras historias com o mesmo nivel, com certeza terei o prazer de ler e indicar.

2yr
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Gryphindoros

Quite literally one of if not the best fan fiction for Harry Potter I have read to date. Your literally flow confuses me sometimes but mostly I think cause I'm dumb. I love this fic Thank you for writing it.

2yr
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alexny18111

This is actually a good story. Not every Hp fanfic needs to have a character that is extremely talented from the get-go at everything. Also while I can agree that certain actions from the protagonist touch on the "forbidden list" of stuff to do in an HP fanfic, I don't think it detracts from the story.

2yr
5 の返信を表示する
f3f3
LV 14 Badge

This is the fanfic that make me star reading others HP Fanfic’s. Is great that i can read it again in web novel format. Hope that you ask permission from the author.

2yr
1 の返信を表示する
DeathlessInfinity

This is a gem and I just couldn't leave it on average rating of below 4. Basically it's an entertaining read with a funny mc that leaves you appreciative of his stupidly clever ways of solving problems.

2yr
2 の返信を表示する
Pohoder_Pohoder

The hero is a pretty dumb person, isn't he? Three chapters were enough for me to understand this. After all, going to look for a book listing sweets to get into the director's office is an outstanding stupidity. Someone less dumb than the hero could, for example, write a letter and send it to Dumbledore....

1mth
0 の返信を表示する
Chirag_Harikumar

Good story! No op character from the start and was developed very well. Though some parts were a little confusing. The ending could be a little better as well as the climax fight.

1mth
0 の返信を表示する
Kentashiz22

Henceforth i declare this to be in the top three of all Harry Potter fanfics i have read. Thank you author for giving us this story. You have cooked

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2mth
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Glebby_Boi

What a masterpiece in both quality and execution 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻!!!

4mth
0 の返信を表示する
Nihirizumu_

Well it's a good book. One of the best HP books I've finished with top tier quality and, at the time of writing this review it has been completed with 2 endings. The story was quite nice however in the first few chapters where he told Dumbledore about the future have me quite the scare and the part where he was suddenly adopted was also strange. Tbh I don't even renew his description so not much to say there. For background its a completed HP fic, but a HP fic non the less.

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5mth
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bilaljai

Writing is good not excellent. Story is entertaining. I recommend a read.

8mth
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Tim_QQQ

so fking boring . . . . . . . ....................................................................................................................

9mth
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Meta0202

I'm disappointed...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

11mth
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indigo_10

First Harry Potter fic that brings out the magic and whimsy of Hogwarts without feeling forced. Full points

1yr
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UnOriginalDude

Honestly it's been a year now and I forgot to give this good story a review, it's good that's all I can say, nothing less and nothing more, a good story.

1yr
0 の返信を表示する
Ankit_Mourya_1249

I loved it actually a good read and I fully enjoyed it.

1yr
0 の返信を表示する
Max_Bang

That twist at the end was beautiful. I do think this is one of the better HP stories out there. There were minor annoyances, but that’s easily overlooked.

1yr
0 の返信を表示する
DJREF
LV 1 Badge

I love it; I wish it had a few more chapters explaining what the trio would do at the end, but that is not that important and can be easily interpreted by the story flow in our heads for a more open-ended ending.

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1yr
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Lion_Comet

I'll just leave this here.It's a good one. that's all you need to know

1yr
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Hepaistos

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

1yr
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Servydaos

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1yr
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7captain_king7

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC...............🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉👍🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

2yr
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FrankJack

Good, one of the best fanfic novels I’ve ever read. Character explanation and writing is upmost perfect. I was a little sad during the start, but was quickly pulled into the story by its unique writing and goodness . I recommend this to all who enjoy a good laugh and read.

img
2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Simon_Gersbach

One of the best books I have ever read online. I a just want to thank yoh author for this gift you decided to write and publish. Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Kalki001

This story was simply incredible. One of the only complete fanfic i have ever read and it is great.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Agu_Aice

An amazing story with a really fufilling ending that I would recommend whole heartedly if you enjoy the Harry Potter series

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Snowstorm2000

one of the few books I've actually read the entirety of ............................................................. character requirements

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Jai_pareek

one of the best harry potter fan fiction

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Niloy_Das

Definitely one of the best Harry Potter fanfic out there. The only bad/sad part is that it ended too soon. I wish it had continued for at least one more year in the story. I was not ready for the goodbyes at all. 😭😭😭😭😭

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
fikret

I quıet enjoyed story thouth start little bit shaky it take time to bond with story

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
maxphantom

gay . . ........ ......,.......,..........

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Hadest_1304

this story is amazing. the mc is very charming and funny.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
castanho

Nao querendo ser tendencioso, mas considerando o nivel geral das fanfics, 5 estrelas em tudo mesmo, uma historia bem original, incrivelmente divertido, MC nao é overpower, mas é forte o suficiente e de uma maneira inteligente, bom, uma otima historia, se o autor escrever outras historias com o mesmo nivel, com certeza terei o prazer de ler e indicar.

2yr
0 の返信を表示する
Gryphindoros

Quite literally one of if not the best fan fiction for Harry Potter I have read to date. Your literally flow confuses me sometimes but mostly I think cause I'm dumb. I love this fic Thank you for writing it.

2yr
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