Reviews of Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun by ArifuretaForever - Webnovel

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Biffnjbs

I wish this would get picked back up! so much more story to unfold.

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thegreat_beaver

very good fanfic also I need some other good SW fanfic recommendations. please enlighten me

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anubisthegoat

Absolute MASTERPIECE!! Shame there are no more updates. A masterclass story! Please bring new chapters, not something the world should miss out on!

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Rafi_Anan

yo, author. please update this fanfic and the spider-man fanfic. come on. what the hell dude. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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Adrian_Jankowski

Will you be continuing Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun?

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Lukas_Ultima

Love the story and hope you continue it soon hope you have an amazing day

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Lazy_sensei8

Please update!!! I love this fic.

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ben_barrett

wish this was not dropped i really enjoyed this

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KnuckledBehemoth

Just started this and am already at chapter 100. The concept sucked me in right away. The author does a great job building characters, referencing canon material, keeping a steady pace, and even battle choreography is well done. All in all a great job so far. Keep it up!

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Jack_Weaver_8985

great story really good story development

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The_Ozymandias

Extremely pathetic MC, with an horrible scale of power. Everything about him is special, he has the best masters, and yet he lost against an npc girl (the same girl lost months ago to the MC best friend, another npc). Also the pacing is horrible.

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Flash_YT

I love this book who is the ship to the oc

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EternalEden

A good amount of attention to detail in the story, and the universe that the story is in, and entertaining for a read. In the high points of the story, I indeed enjoyed reading it. Although this story does also have its downsides. And I started to enjoy it less as I read on. The romance doesn't really feel earned and feels like it just kinda happens. When the story splits off to talk about the side characters, it is sometimes rather uninteresting. And the MC's plans always work out, he's never had any real setbacks this entire time. Things just always work out for him even after 130 chapters in. Which doesn't really make sense with how intelligent Sidious is. Only after SEVERAL massive setbacks to his plans does Sidious finally think: "Hmm, I'm being targeted!"

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Golden_Gamer_7564

lasted untill chapter 3. MC is so brain dead. Reading this gave me cancer.

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Flash_YT

When is this book gonna be done I love it

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J754
LV 1

Best star wars story here. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

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Theguard

An enjoyable read that I would highly recommend

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Mastarius

this fanfic is the dark lord Palpatine dedicated nightmare LoL

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easyread

As a fellow Author of Star Wars fanfictions, I can understand the plights of particularly nasty readers. While I've only read a few chapters, I can say with certainty that it's a decent story. However, you've made one critical mistake, ArifuretaForever. You've made a fanfiction in the Skywalker Era! The two fanfictions of Star Wars I've written are nowhere close to the Skywalker Saga/Era. The reason is that it's a hot garbage convoluted mess. The only person I've seen do a reincarnation fanfic successfully of this Era is A New Player In The Force, Created by USSExplorer. While my rating may be a little low for this story, it's only because it seems rushed. And a misconception about writing in the Star Wars Universe is making leaps in time and power with your main character. Character power improvement is important, but the journey to that power is where the story lies. What I've seen so far in the beginning is very lack luster in what I'd call progressive story telling. The beginning of any story is its foundation. After all, Star Wars has always been and will always be. A story told a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Take your time with it. If you can apply that realization to your Star Wars fanfiction, you'll find everything you're missing.

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KIKOwoods_gaming

this is the best Star wars fanfiction I've ever seen and i hope you continue it.

1yr
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Leonardo_Jesus

This is a perfect novel about star wars, love every chapter because it's well written, has a good pace and frequent chapters. I ask everyone who stumbles here to give it a try, you will not regret it

1yr
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Michael_Love_2809

Unification high gun Gordon give high inch indigo Irish Igor idk HD had it kid off nd of it I’d of if if it he hurt I’d he had if is if off of ID of ok on IV in in in un in un yb tv text run tho think this bug

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ElPiwo

to much of the same trops as A New Player In The Force By: USSExplorer many idea or situations are the same

1yr
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Harley_DB

Great starwars fanfic 10/10 recommend[img=update]

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Smileyguy

It’s good so far the story is pretty intresting and realistic. Van is kinda op but well see if it chances. What i’m intrested in is sidius and the clone wars and how far from the story it is gonna chance

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WindStraker

muy buena la novela sigue así que vas por buen camino

1yr
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NotPresent

I really enjoyed reading this to the point where I stayed up to 3:00 am when I knew I needed to get up at 5 for work.

1yr
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storyteller101

this is one of my favrioute novels i actively wait for more chapters to be released

1yr
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Krails710

it's agood star Wars fanfiction ..........

1yr
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ArdaPendragon

The author has a bad reputation but he's passed 100 chapters...I hope he doesn't dropped this story....................................Good Luck

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Biffnjbs

I wish this would get picked back up! so much more story to unfold.

1mth
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thegreat_beaver

very good fanfic also I need some other good SW fanfic recommendations. please enlighten me

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1mth
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anubisthegoat

Absolute MASTERPIECE!! Shame there are no more updates. A masterclass story! Please bring new chapters, not something the world should miss out on!

1mth
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Rafi_Anan

yo, author. please update this fanfic and the spider-man fanfic. come on. what the hell dude. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

2mth
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Adrian_Jankowski

Will you be continuing Star Wars: Scion Of The Sun?

2mth
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Lukas_Ultima

Love the story and hope you continue it soon hope you have an amazing day

3mth
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Lazy_sensei8

Please update!!! I love this fic.

5mth
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ben_barrett

wish this was not dropped i really enjoyed this

8mth
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KnuckledBehemoth

Just started this and am already at chapter 100. The concept sucked me in right away. The author does a great job building characters, referencing canon material, keeping a steady pace, and even battle choreography is well done. All in all a great job so far. Keep it up!

10mth
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Jack_Weaver_8985

great story really good story development

10mth
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The_Ozymandias

Extremely pathetic MC, with an horrible scale of power. Everything about him is special, he has the best masters, and yet he lost against an npc girl (the same girl lost months ago to the MC best friend, another npc). Also the pacing is horrible.

10mth
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Flash_YT

I love this book who is the ship to the oc

10mth
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EternalEden

A good amount of attention to detail in the story, and the universe that the story is in, and entertaining for a read. In the high points of the story, I indeed enjoyed reading it. Although this story does also have its downsides. And I started to enjoy it less as I read on. The romance doesn't really feel earned and feels like it just kinda happens. When the story splits off to talk about the side characters, it is sometimes rather uninteresting. And the MC's plans always work out, he's never had any real setbacks this entire time. Things just always work out for him even after 130 chapters in. Which doesn't really make sense with how intelligent Sidious is. Only after SEVERAL massive setbacks to his plans does Sidious finally think: "Hmm, I'm being targeted!"

10mth
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Golden_Gamer_7564

lasted untill chapter 3. MC is so brain dead. Reading this gave me cancer.

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10mth
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Flash_YT

When is this book gonna be done I love it

11mth
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J754
LV 1

Best star wars story here. ......................................... .......................................... ........................................... .......................................... ..........................................

11mth
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Theguard

An enjoyable read that I would highly recommend

11mth
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Mastarius

this fanfic is the dark lord Palpatine dedicated nightmare LoL

11mth
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easyread

As a fellow Author of Star Wars fanfictions, I can understand the plights of particularly nasty readers. While I've only read a few chapters, I can say with certainty that it's a decent story. However, you've made one critical mistake, ArifuretaForever. You've made a fanfiction in the Skywalker Era! The two fanfictions of Star Wars I've written are nowhere close to the Skywalker Saga/Era. The reason is that it's a hot garbage convoluted mess. The only person I've seen do a reincarnation fanfic successfully of this Era is A New Player In The Force, Created by USSExplorer. While my rating may be a little low for this story, it's only because it seems rushed. And a misconception about writing in the Star Wars Universe is making leaps in time and power with your main character. Character power improvement is important, but the journey to that power is where the story lies. What I've seen so far in the beginning is very lack luster in what I'd call progressive story telling. The beginning of any story is its foundation. After all, Star Wars has always been and will always be. A story told a long time ago in a galaxy far, far away. Take your time with it. If you can apply that realization to your Star Wars fanfiction, you'll find everything you're missing.

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1yr
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KIKOwoods_gaming

this is the best Star wars fanfiction I've ever seen and i hope you continue it.

1yr
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Leonardo_Jesus

This is a perfect novel about star wars, love every chapter because it's well written, has a good pace and frequent chapters. I ask everyone who stumbles here to give it a try, you will not regret it

1yr
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Michael_Love_2809

Unification high gun Gordon give high inch indigo Irish Igor idk HD had it kid off nd of it I’d of if if it he hurt I’d he had if is if off of ID of ok on IV in in in un in un yb tv text run tho think this bug

1yr
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ElPiwo

to much of the same trops as A New Player In The Force By: USSExplorer many idea or situations are the same

1yr
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Harley_DB

Great starwars fanfic 10/10 recommend[img=update]

1yr
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Smileyguy

It’s good so far the story is pretty intresting and realistic. Van is kinda op but well see if it chances. What i’m intrested in is sidius and the clone wars and how far from the story it is gonna chance

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1yr
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WindStraker

muy buena la novela sigue así que vas por buen camino

1yr
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NotPresent

I really enjoyed reading this to the point where I stayed up to 3:00 am when I knew I needed to get up at 5 for work.

1yr
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storyteller101

this is one of my favrioute novels i actively wait for more chapters to be released

1yr
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Krails710

it's agood star Wars fanfiction ..........

1yr
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ArdaPendragon

The author has a bad reputation but he's passed 100 chapters...I hope he doesn't dropped this story....................................Good Luck

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1yr
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