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Hello, Everyone. This is Author: Lakshay_Thakur_9837.

This is my very first novel. And since English is not my first language, I am sure there will be some pronunciation errors. Hence, I am apologizing in advanced because of that.


First World: Danmachi
Second World: Akame Ga Kill
Third World: Re:Zero − Starting Life in Another World
Fourth World: Fate/stay night: Heaven's Feel
Fifth World: Guilty Crown
Sixth World: Black Bullet
Seventh World(Currently): Genshin Impact


*Note: Only 3-4 chapters will be released per week.

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Demikus

If we delete MC from the story and paste someone else it will be much better. author tries to make extremely cool MC but the result is really bad. MC behaves like a Peng-clan young master and quarter-Chad, has some 'mysterious' past. His dialogues are some cliche phrases, he is really boring to read character.

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BigBud

Despite my relatively low rating, I genuinely really enjoyed this book. The main problem that I find when reading, however, is mostly just the character design. At first the MC acts overwhelmingly obnoxious, but thankfully some character development happens. But, contrary to my hopes, after gaining billions of years of memories and experience, the MC still seems to act obnoxious and comes across as foolish. He has his moments, where he is able to manipulate every around him like they are children, but apart from those certain few instances, MC continues to act like a young teenager, not a billions of years old god. Not to mention the ‘ultimate system’ that, despite its title, always comes across as unintelligent and clueless throughout most of the book. The system to me, past the first couple chapters and even at points in them, seems like a dim-witted skill organizer to make it easier for MC to check his progress, not the best system in all of existence.

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aqimzan

The beginning of the story is a bit cringe-worthy, but the story gets better with the new release. I like an overpowered character. So overall, I'm OK with this story.

2yr
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LuminousValentine

I don't like the MC's personality it's so cringe.........................................................................................................................................................

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Unknown_Entity_9922

MC has a cultivator mindset in non-cultivator worlds, and the people just accept it. He has minimal quality interaction with the world, sexually harasses women, collects & abandons wives for long periods and treats everything like it's simply beneath him. The way the worlds treat the MC feels horrendously empty, the way they react to his worst behavior feels completely tacked on and half-blind.

5mth
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cooolbooy

I will say just one thing the whole book is about System and MC talking to each other , almonst 70℅ is them talking to each other 10℅ cringe 20℅ story.To much of explanation what MC do or why is he is doing it and that is even in form of conversation between MC and System

6mth
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ArtV
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Is this an all-rounder MC fanfic, even to the point of cooking, he's the one doing it? While FMC is used as livestock?

1yr
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WanderinGlance

I will immediately write, that everything described below is only mine and only my subjective opinion. There is no need to judge the entire book only by such a review, although I do not rule out a selfish desire to take into account my opinion, which has taken form of a review. Well... normally, I wouldn't write a review or rate anything at all, untill the very end, but something prompts me to make an exception. I placed my stars in the rating, as I rated the whole thing at the time of me reading chapter 130... I say right away, this will be... forgive me, author, and don’t accept this as your translator, if this is a translation... but this is quite difficult to read. Almost entire Dungeons arc, but I still didn’t understand, why the hero needed all this movement. Throughout the whole time there were a couple of very small references to the past of the main character, and this, as for me, is not enough to justify everything that he does... other than just the author’s idea, it seems. And this does not create even the slightest feeling... of reality behind the story. He just... is. He simply follows the road, that the system showed him, towards a goal that it is unclear? Why he, already distorted by rebirth and a harsh new life, needs it?! Without this connection to the past, the present... it is impossible for me to continue to follow the adventures of Primis, contrary to the warning of anyone, who wants to read this story.

2mth
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Kaan_Acar

I think it's one of those rare books where the main character makes himself worse instead of improving himself. Unfortunately, I don't like this writing style at all, bye...

2mth
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Thigh_Master0124

Author who is in the harem pls answer to me? ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .

1yr
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BoTMaster

MC character ruins everything............................................ ....................................................... ..............

2mth
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Sunnnny
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I’ve managed to get through 100 chapters of this story solely for my love of the select franchises that the author fortunately creates a story around. However, in the end, I just can’t continue reading this. I’ve had my share of interesting psychopathic, sociopathic, deranged main leads; however, this one is hardly someone worth rooting for. It also doesn’t help how part of his character is of a young master of some Chinese cultivator novel, then meshing it up (unsuccessfully) to shows that aren’t was off putting. Maybe the story does pick up later down the line; if so, the author has got to revise his early chapters. Reading through those chapters was a pain. Issues with the grammar didn’t help with the experience neither. tldr: I like the chosen worlds, however it is poorly executed.

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Yusaf_Al

I am sorry but dash is killed it for me *

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Natsu_Draganeel_9015

Loved this novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

1yr
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LyralGod

Ugh, I wish I hadn't read this. .

1mth
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shoval_picu

can you put back the first chapters.... its kinda hard to understend without it. and i know people here say about the first chapters but i want to read this funfic and i cant understand how everything happend.

1yr
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TheSupremacyCarl

I have only read the first 2 chapters, but i want to ask is the mc actually doing any ruling? or is that just the name of this fanfic?

1yr
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Anmol_Anmol_7828

more more more more more more more more more chapters please🙏

1yr
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DaoistKLskQX

NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NEED MORE CHAPTERS. NEED MORE CHAPTERS.

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