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Good stuff , not like the usual trash solo leveling fan fiction. Good writing, execution. Please update now I'm waiting. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Esperando por más... es un buen fanfic... espero ver más ;-; [img=recommend]. No hay ningún sistema basura, hasta ahora veo que el prota no es un tonto que busca harem, pero como que el desarrollo de personaje se esta yendo para un lado. Aún así, no quita que hasta ahora sea una buena obra para leer.
I actually love the idea of making his own spells! I think that this a really amazing book, and I really hope it isn't dropped.I think that it should be continued!
Missing your work terribly author San! Please update soon. This is among the cream of the crop of Webnovel. I need to make this not less than 140 characters...why is that even a rule...
You should read this he could apply different magical theories and even if the spell he made is not original or the same he could back it up with complete control of a spell. Read this more so we get to see where he will go. This is the definition of Weak To Strong..
Pretty good all in all. Quality is good and it all flows pretty nice. The OCs while everywhere are also not that big of a deal. All in all a good story with a unique twist on a Mage/ wizard MC Stuff that wasn't that great: 1. The MC character profile is inconsistent in the later chapters, and since this all revolves around the Lucy OC i find her kinda anoying just for that alone. 2. a Filler chapter where there is only a bit of dialogue and moving into a new apartment is boring and kinda pointless. It doesn't have to be action always but a chapter that is only moving is frustrating. 3. The first book could be in any world Since the MC haven't reincarnated, is in a time before the plot and is in a different country we have up until now basically little to no reference that this is the solo leveling world. It could infact be one of the dozen other Korean Novels of the same type, and it would fit without a Problem. It doesn't take away from the story at all, it's still fun to read and the Magic system is very unique in the way the MC uses it for this world but not once in the whole first book did i think.... "hey that's the Solo leveling world" i though more inline with " hey that's a random world with dungeons in modern time." like I said the story is still great and I would recommend it
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Muy buena historia, el prota se vuelve fuerte poco a poco y y aunque falta bueno se siente un poco forzado las bromas entre los personajes xd, igual sigue siendo entretenido y hasta ahora la historia es muy divertida espero con ansias el desarrollo de la historia : )
omg this is so good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Its so clever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaah I love it! read it ############### oh it's so good I love it
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5 start because its solo leveling fanfic and MC has good skill and likeable personality,hoping for mass release after you start updating author
I love this story so far. It’s actually a weak to strong progression unlike other stories where the mc becomes instantly op. I also enjoy how the mc makes mistakes and adapts to those challenges.
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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I loved the story so far g!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I've enjoyed the novel but the Grimoire is a Deus Ex. New spells come out of nothing. I'd like to see some development of a spell before it is used in combat otherwise his power goes from 'building custom spells from fragments learned from others' to 'every spell ever when the author decides'.
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Great story and I'm enjoying it so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like it...................................................................................................................................
ok. so where should I start. first, the story has decent pacing and an interesting power for the mc. it's still the first 20 chapters so nothing too interesting has happened. just world-building and the mc discovering how to use his magic effectively in situations. there is no good solo levelling fanfic on this platform, as far as I have seen. so I hope you don't drop. this fanfic has good potential.
I personally love this mc, super believable and fun in general, the story is good as well, man pls continue with this fic, because it is gold!
A good Solo leveling fanfic where the MC has a cool magic grimoire that he can make spells for any situation in. Wish he interacted with known characters more though.
MUST READ Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you
I really like it. It's new, its interesting, and not the same old same old SL ff. so 4.8 star for me-----------------------------------------------
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Very interesting so far, seems more like an original dungeon novel then a fanfiction.
I really like your ff. please keep updating a a a a a a aa aa a a aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aa
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Recommend me some good solo leveling fanfics pls ;)...crossover also works...need lot of recommendations :)... thanks ................. .........................................
Good stuff , not like the usual trash solo leveling fan fiction. Good writing, execution. Please update now I'm waiting. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Esperando por más... es un buen fanfic... espero ver más ;-; [img=recommend]. No hay ningún sistema basura, hasta ahora veo que el prota no es un tonto que busca harem, pero como que el desarrollo de personaje se esta yendo para un lado. Aún así, no quita que hasta ahora sea una buena obra para leer.
I actually love the idea of making his own spells! I think that this a really amazing book, and I really hope it isn't dropped.I think that it should be continued!
Missing your work terribly author San! Please update soon. This is among the cream of the crop of Webnovel. I need to make this not less than 140 characters...why is that even a rule...
You should read this he could apply different magical theories and even if the spell he made is not original or the same he could back it up with complete control of a spell. Read this more so we get to see where he will go. This is the definition of Weak To Strong..
Pretty good all in all. Quality is good and it all flows pretty nice. The OCs while everywhere are also not that big of a deal. All in all a good story with a unique twist on a Mage/ wizard MC Stuff that wasn't that great: 1. The MC character profile is inconsistent in the later chapters, and since this all revolves around the Lucy OC i find her kinda anoying just for that alone. 2. a Filler chapter where there is only a bit of dialogue and moving into a new apartment is boring and kinda pointless. It doesn't have to be action always but a chapter that is only moving is frustrating. 3. The first book could be in any world Since the MC haven't reincarnated, is in a time before the plot and is in a different country we have up until now basically little to no reference that this is the solo leveling world. It could infact be one of the dozen other Korean Novels of the same type, and it would fit without a Problem. It doesn't take away from the story at all, it's still fun to read and the Magic system is very unique in the way the MC uses it for this world but not once in the whole first book did i think.... "hey that's the Solo leveling world" i though more inline with " hey that's a random world with dungeons in modern time." like I said the story is still great and I would recommend it
ネタバレを明かす Muy buena historia, el prota se vuelve fuerte poco a poco y y aunque falta bueno se siente un poco forzado las bromas entre los personajes xd, igual sigue siendo entretenido y hasta ahora la historia es muy divertida espero con ansias el desarrollo de la historia : )
omg this is so good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Its so clever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaah I love it! read it ############### oh it's so good I love it
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5 start because its solo leveling fanfic and MC has good skill and likeable personality,hoping for mass release after you start updating author
I love this story so far. It’s actually a weak to strong progression unlike other stories where the mc becomes instantly op. I also enjoy how the mc makes mistakes and adapts to those challenges.
More chapter please ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
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I loved the story so far g!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's just Slaneesh [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I've enjoyed the novel but the Grimoire is a Deus Ex. New spells come out of nothing. I'd like to see some development of a spell before it is used in combat otherwise his power goes from 'building custom spells from fragments learned from others' to 'every spell ever when the author decides'.
exp..........................................................................................................................................
Great story and I'm enjoying it so far!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i like it...................................................................................................................................
ok. so where should I start. first, the story has decent pacing and an interesting power for the mc. it's still the first 20 chapters so nothing too interesting has happened. just world-building and the mc discovering how to use his magic effectively in situations. there is no good solo levelling fanfic on this platform, as far as I have seen. so I hope you don't drop. this fanfic has good potential.
I personally love this mc, super believable and fun in general, the story is good as well, man pls continue with this fic, because it is gold!
A good Solo leveling fanfic where the MC has a cool magic grimoire that he can make spells for any situation in. Wish he interacted with known characters more though.
MUST READ Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you Thank you Thank you thank you thank you thank you
I really like it. It's new, its interesting, and not the same old same old SL ff. so 4.8 star for me-----------------------------------------------
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Very interesting so far, seems more like an original dungeon novel then a fanfiction.
I really like your ff. please keep updating a a a a a a aa aa a a aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aa
exp.........................................................................................................................................
Recommend me some good solo leveling fanfics pls ;)...crossover also works...need lot of recommendations :)... thanks ................. .........................................