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almost perfect so far. writing quality 4 star background 4 star only because for 5 star I expect a lot of original content to bring new life to a story I have already read to make sure the story doesn't become boring. i recommend creating your own novel with the same character powers and overall being it has some good potential. i have thought about similar powers in my mind and waited for someone to create something similar. overall a good story so far Chapter 16
Story is good 😉. Hope he will become handsome in the future, and not stay lanky. Hope he can make spells to increase speed strength of both his and his allies. Alao he should start using a weapon in hand for emergency. 🤩🥳
So far the story has exceeded my expectations. Quality is good, authors use of the apostrophe is a little wired but nonetheless doesn't affect the enjoyability of the story Story development has been a little slow at points then suddenly it's a time skip of like 3 days, so for me personally that's slightly jarring. Character design and world background are already premade, but it's set in America, so I'd like to see the author's take on this. updating stability is great. Overall I can see a lot of potential in this. Can't wait to read more 👍
This is a pretty good, supernatural genre, if that makes sense. ───────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
I left this to read for later and I can say this story is good. We at least don't have random asian names which makes impossible to understands who is who . The good thinks of this story is a MC that uses his brain and creates and invents new methodes. I would have loved if he was reincarnated from our earth knowing the fate of the world , it could have added a bit more content. 5/5 story.
This story has great potential...........................................................................................................................
✨I am love the story . it is the first story read that is in SL universe. Keep up the good work. 😁😁👍👍👍 .✨ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Keep up the great work.
The story takes place 5 years before the start of Solo Leveling in America. Big part of it will be original with new characters so just keep that in mind if its not your thing.
Gostei da historia :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
almost perfect so far. writing quality 4 star background 4 star only because for 5 star I expect a lot of original content to bring new life to a story I have already read to make sure the story doesn't become boring. i recommend creating your own novel with the same character powers and overall being it has some good potential. i have thought about similar powers in my mind and waited for someone to create something similar. overall a good story so far Chapter 16
Story is good 😉. Hope he will become handsome in the future, and not stay lanky. Hope he can make spells to increase speed strength of both his and his allies. Alao he should start using a weapon in hand for emergency. 🤩🥳
So far the story has exceeded my expectations. Quality is good, authors use of the apostrophe is a little wired but nonetheless doesn't affect the enjoyability of the story Story development has been a little slow at points then suddenly it's a time skip of like 3 days, so for me personally that's slightly jarring. Character design and world background are already premade, but it's set in America, so I'd like to see the author's take on this. updating stability is great. Overall I can see a lot of potential in this. Can't wait to read more 👍
This is a pretty good, supernatural genre, if that makes sense. ───────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────────
I left this to read for later and I can say this story is good. We at least don't have random asian names which makes impossible to understands who is who . The good thinks of this story is a MC that uses his brain and creates and invents new methodes. I would have loved if he was reincarnated from our earth knowing the fate of the world , it could have added a bit more content. 5/5 story.
This story has great potential...........................................................................................................................
✨I am love the story . it is the first story read that is in SL universe. Keep up the good work. 😁😁👍👍👍 .✨ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Keep up the great work.
The story takes place 5 years before the start of Solo Leveling in America. Big part of it will be original with new characters so just keep that in mind if its not your thing.
Gostei da historia :) ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------